MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 24 - Pg 88 Nov 16 - Page 49

Thank you for PW ❤️🤗

Nice part ❤️ atlast. both meet 🥰 after long waiting

Geet get surprised when Maan talking with her softly,

She still can't believe he is with her 🥺

So lovely 😍

Like maan

We are also waiting

How things or talk going proceed

It's beautiful 😍 🤩

He tried best and making geet surprised with own act

Superb update 👏

Love everything about it 😍

The way maan trying hard to talk the way he behaving n super surprised by geets new avtar ... Everything perfectly written 👌

Other side u wrote geets state of mind n her heart situation so very well ...her thoughts about maans nice behavior ... Amazing 👌

can really connect with both maan n geet ❤️

Thanks for lovely part 🤗

Eagerly waiting for next 😀

Part-8

Nice update..

Maan is very happy seeing geet and her work..

Geet is surprised seeing maan and his way of talking politely with her..

Geet said to Chetan she is leaving to home, but maan and Chetan both said her they will drop her.

Maan himself took the driver seat and drived to her place and told how much he missed her..

Waiting for next update..

Wonderful part, worth the wait. Update the next part soon please.

Nice update. Geet is into Maan that she does not realize what he has done to her life. Instead she is feeling that she deprived Father and son. She is surprised with his talks and gestured that she does not believe as real. In that state she feeds in her address and also allows him to invite himself for a cup of coffee in her house. He is thinking of giving Geet a closure so that she can move on.

Lovely.. i had been eagerly wanting to see how their first meeting goes. Kind of expected to see Geet still being quiet and confused on seeing his behaviour… she’s currently overwhelmed with a lot of feelings, her love for him, her fear, surprise on seeing him here, and the shock of his politeness.. she later understands that it could be bcoz they r in public. All his badtameezi was only in pvt. Maan is also so happy, almost like feeling he is lucky to meet her again. He has been talking while she remained so silent. He invited himself to her home, I want him to know abt his son asap… no more twists I hope…. Eager for next

Finally, the part I was waiting for. I so much loved this update! This was the best one of this entire story. 👏
Maan and Geet finally face to face. Both are equally shocked. My heart goes out for Geet who is still worried of his negative reactions. But Maan surprisingly handled everything so well. He is quite the charismatic here I must say. Like usko sharam bhi hain lekin darr darr ke hi sahi he somehow expressed.

Liked this - But Sorry would be extremely light weight for his sins and will devalue the amount of wrong that he has done to her.-

Glad that he has this realization.
You know Intezaar somewhat gave me a flavor of Burnt. But maybe that Maan is so insufferable that for the first time, I am liking the Burnt Maan. It's like my love for Maan is just way too much so it hurts imagining him wronging Geet so severely. But then at his repentance phase when he is getting stuck etc after facing Geet so I might have melted a lil🤏(Geet too is melting I think as she loves him beyond anything, despite all his abuses she couldn't stop loving him. So...)

As Advay is concerned, the way Maan has behaved in this update boy he is in for a shock in the future. Doesn't seem like he will try to snatch him from Geet. I can already guess some things but gonna keep it to myself.

Thanks for this wonderful surprise update. Glad that I decided to read it sooner. 🤗

OMG! Poor Geet couldn’t understand this change in maan’s attitude and in his joy he failed to notice her dilemma. Now he invited himself to her house to get the biggest shock of his life!

Btw I am fida on “all yours Mrs Khurana “

Hello Anu

thanks for updating....

appreciate your time and efforts

Chapter 8

Emotional update… superbly written

Maan and Geet were clearly overwhelmed seeing each other

the world indeed stopped

great that Maan reminded himself that its all about Geet

pleased that Maan loved Geet's work

of cos Maan wants to speak to Geet alone

Geet's reaction was reasonable

liked when Maan said "all yours Mrs Khurana."

however Geet did not understand this

after all when had Maan shown her differently

Geet is still dealing with the fact that Maan is in front of her

sheclearly did not see the excitement on Maan's face

all that matters for Maan is that she is there in front of him

Geet's confusion with Maan's polite behavior was justified

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

Maan only treated her badly and that too in private

he was amazed seeing in Geet in a modern dress and owns a company

great that he knows that he assumed things about her

sad that he never got to know Geet

well Geet was affected by his touch and closeness

nice that he addressed her as Geet

Maan's question was anticipated

only she knows how she became Mishty

Geet's behavior was understandable

at least Maan tried to look for Geet

she was naturally astounded and confused

but Maan thinks she is did not want meet him

its certainly getting hard for Maan to stay away from Geet

yet again Maan assumes...

Geet's thoughts and fears were understandable

glad that Maan was direct with Geet

her response was expected

pleased that Maan was honest with Geet

she was clearly perplexed

not surprised that Geet wanted to leave the party

hearing family commitments, Maan was curious

now Maan was adamant that he will drive Geet home

Geet and Chetan were surprised

oh Maan was driving Geet home

she was truly confused

this Maan is so different from the Maan she knows

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

cannot blame her

Maan treated her so badly

Maan doesall the talking whilst she just listens

despiteeverything Geet loves Maan immensely

yet again Maan surprised with his talks

loved that Maan wants to apologise to Geet

appreciate that he knows the sorry is extremely light in weight compared to his sins and will devalue

the wrong that he done to her

she deserves much more

Gosh Maan invited himself for coffee

nice that he wants to give Geet closure

wonderful that he wants to return her happiness

hmm Geet agreed that he can come for coffee

will he get to know about Advay?

update soon