• Haunted Heritage • NeiVika & BhIdur FF Chapter Two Page 8 - Page 3

What's with that opening line of Vidur uncle? I'm sorry but I cracked up

I can clearly see Pete smiling and hailing you for that Prem BHAISAAAABBBBBB

Great writing skills Arpii jiji!

Waiting for next chapter!! Abhi ke abhi daall!!!

Originally posted by: agreatwcr

What's with that opening line of Vidur uncle? I'm sorry but I cracked up

I can clearly see Pete smiling and hailing you for that Prem BHAISAAAABBBBBB

Great writing skills Arpii jiji!

Waiting for next chapter!! Abhi ke abhi daall!!!

Prem bhaisaaaaab was a bit weird to read tbh But i can get used to it

Oh God Prem Bhaisahab, this line

Vese esehi thodi na main bolta hu app log born writers ho , i tell this all the time because of you guy's writing skills .

Pete party to banti hai

Great starting Arpi di , keep it up , we are excited for the next part

Originally posted by: MochaQueen

res

Yeh res ish janam mein unres hoga?

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Prem bhaisaaaaab was a bit weird to read tbh But i can get used to it

You will get used to with many things after this FF

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

You will get used to with many things after this FF

Oh....I'm intrigued

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Ufff

Such a Bhidur-licious chapter...

First scene was thrilling...my heart was on my mouth...

& Bammm it was just a dream...

Uff is it gonna have some supernatural element...Jo bhi ho I am excited...

You have captured the subtle intimacy of married couple...

But I laughed hard on "PREM BHAISAAB"

Pete tumhari saari khunnas nikal gayi...

Party do ....

Thank Youuuuu Asmi

Yup it's Haunted Heritage so yeah it has Supernatural stuffs though I don't know how much I can do justice to all those Bhootiyaa stuffs But let's try

NeiVika too are married, I hope I will be able to capture Theirs too

Please do criticise me too if you find anything not upto the mark

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Prem Bhaisaaaaab made me crack up

First chapter was sooooo amazing

Waiting for the next chapter

Thank You Pete

Originally posted by: agreatwcr

What's with that opening line of Vidur uncle? I'm sorry but I cracked up

I can clearly see Pete smiling and hailing you for that Prem BHAISAAAABBBBBB

Great writing skills Arpii jiji!

Waiting for next chapter!! Abhi ke abhi daall!!!

The first line was a small tribute from me to Swastik

Thanks Rosy

Originally posted by: Spandan24

Oh God Prem Bhaisahab, this line

Vese esehi thodi na main bolta hu app log born writers ho , i tell this all the time because of you guy's writing skills .

Pete party to banti hai

Great starting Arpi di , keep it up , we are excited for the next part

Thank You Spandan