• Haunted Heritage • NeiVika & BhIdur FF Chapter Two Page 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 1 years ago
#21

What's with that opening line of Vidur uncle? I'm sorry but I cracked upsmiley37

I can clearly see Pete smiling and hailing you for that Prem BHAISAAAABBBBBBsmiley16

Great writing skills Arpii jiji! smiley9

Waiting for next chapter!! Abhi ke abhi daall!!!smiley43smiley36

Posted: 1 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: agreatwcr

What's with that opening line of Vidur uncle? I'm sorry but I cracked upsmiley37

I can clearly see Pete smiling and hailing you for that Prem BHAISAAAABBBBBBsmiley16

Great writing skills Arpii jiji! smiley9

Waiting for next chapter!! Abhi ke abhi daall!!!smiley43smiley36

Prem bhaisaaaaab was a bit weird to read tbh smiley36 But i can get used to itsmiley14

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Posted: 1 years ago
#23

Oh God Prem Bhaisahab, this line smiley37smiley37

Vese esehi thodi na main bolta hu app log born writers ho , i tell this all the time because of you guy's writing skills .

Pete party to banti hai smiley36

Great starting Arpi di , keep it up , we are excited for the next part smiley31

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Posted: 1 years ago
#24

Yeh res ish janam mein unres hoga? smiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Prem bhaisaaaaab was a bit weird to read tbh smiley36 But i can get used to itsmiley14

You will get used to with many things after this FF smiley15 smiley36

Posted: 1 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

You will get used to with many things after this FF smiley15 smiley36

Oh....I'm intriguedsmiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Ufff

Such a Bhidur-licious chapter...smiley36

First scene was thrilling...my heart was on my mouth...

& Bammm it was just a dream...

Uff is it gonna have some supernatural element...Jo bhi ho I am excited...

You have captured the subtle intimacy of married couple...

But I laughed hard on "PREM BHAISAAB"

Pete tumhari saari khunnas nikal gayi...smiley37

Party do ....

Thank Youuuuu Asmi smiley31

Yup it's Haunted Heritage so yeah it has Supernatural stuffs though I don't know how much I can do justice to all those Bhootiyaa stuffs smiley36 But let's try smiley9

NeiVika too are married, I hope I will be able to capture Theirs too smiley37

Please do criticise me too if you find anything not upto the mark smiley17

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Posted: 1 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Prem Bhaisaaaaab made me crack upsmiley37

First chapter was sooooo amazing smiley27

Waiting for the next chaptersmiley42

Thank You Pete smiley31

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Posted: 1 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: agreatwcr

What's with that opening line of Vidur uncle? I'm sorry but I cracked upsmiley37

I can clearly see Pete smiling and hailing you for that Prem BHAISAAAABBBBBBsmiley16

Great writing skills Arpii jiji! smiley9

Waiting for next chapter!! Abhi ke abhi daall!!!smiley43smiley36

The first line was a small tribute from me to Swastik smiley15 smiley37

Thanks Rosy smiley31

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Posted: 1 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Spandan24

Oh God Prem Bhaisahab, this line smiley37smiley37

Vese esehi thodi na main bolta hu app log born writers ho , i tell this all the time because of you guy's writing skills .

Pete party to banti hai smiley36

Great starting Arpi di , keep it up , we are excited for the next part smiley31

Thank You Spandan smiley31

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