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Posted: 1 years ago

Areh waah, Arjun ne finally case solve kar li. Me now behave somewhat like Riya in today's chapter: Mohtarema Sharvi ji, aap yeh sab case analyses ke details kaise aapne dimag mein soch lete hai. I fell in love with your writing skills all over again.

Lo, Ayesha ko abhi bhi yeh case investigation karne ki padi hai, arre koi usse kaho ke case ke investigation toh Arjun ne just usske aane se kuch moments pehle hi khatam kar di, ab toh bas Sikandar aur Altaf ko pakad ne ki der hai. I'm right now imagining Riya, Liza & Chhotu face, like they would be just behind Arjun's back and giggling at her on being ignorant of the latest case details, but at the same time wondering about how Arjun will reply to her.

BTW, loved the chapter very much...Specially, the Ariya kitchen & bedroom scene on Arjun talking to Riya openly about his daughter, Ragini, as well as the office scene - case analyzation & discussions of Arjun, Riya & Chhotu. Last but not the least, Arjun's curt remarks to Shree's dad, it was just awesome.

Keep writing... will be waiting eagerly to read the next. And, tnx for pm.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome updt

Arjun's daughter hated him kya? Ek to tum week me 1 updt deti ho wo bhi suspense wala.. lamba to do at least thodasmiley18

Finally they got some clue abt gangwar

Lol Ayeshasmiley37Puri Ramayan khatm ho gayi ye ab ayi haismiley36

Cont soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear Sharvi 🤩

Awesome update 😃

I really loved how Shree family took care of him he is really a spoilt brat of the family 😂 but his family was concerned & it was not the time to lock horns with the ETF team

Riya & Arjun finally returned home & I really loved how Riya is trying to be part of his pain and emotions ... Be it massage or cooking 🔪 food she wanted to him to share his heart & pain

Arjun on the other hand was bit unsure & didn't know how Riya would take it but when he realises that Riya really cares for him he is much relieved 😌 hopefully slowly and gradually he will start sharing his emotions with her which is really important for them

The end part was interesting & it seems that picture abhi baaki hai 😅 it won't be easy to catch this Sikander & let's see how this case is solved

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago


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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice but ab ariya ka ky scene h pura dikhao or ragini ka ky chkr h

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Posted: 1 years ago

I'm learning that the hard way.


But those stories are like hidden gems. They are unique and you can't help but read them until you find them incomplete and then either you spend time sending messages to writers or imagining those endings yourself.


But...... I AM NOT CREATIVE!! So I whine and grumble and read the next one 🥺🥺

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Posted: 1 years ago

THIS is the Arjun we all fell for. I can see hearts flying ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Starting from the first half...... Arjun's taunt was so on point. The way he's ready to strike with his cup of tea 😄


Coming to the middle.... You finally Gave another hint to their past. Riya had a brother and her parents. She seems to have distant relation to them. And Arjun's daughter Raghini. Maybe she wasn't his real daughter and he found that out later or maybe Roshni cheated on him.


I waited so long and I'm still nowhere near this mystery. Guess I'll have to wait for this to unfold.


I love your writing by the way. This whole ff could be on real screen because I can see Arjun making his infamous groundbreaking theory and the team looking at him with awe. While Riya falls for him all over again.


Don't think I missed Arjun holding her hand before sleeping, cute mini smile, not long enough eyelock (I wish there were some inner dialogue during that eyelock like Riya fan girling on him and Arjun commenting on that).


Yayyy Ayesha is done with that cursed report. She was grounded like some naughty child. Now she is back with spunk😂. But wait there's so much she needs to know. I love how she was so engrossed that she missed the whole "already-solved" case🤣.


Now I'm excited for the verbal witty banter between Arjun and Ayesha after her retirement comment 🤣🤣.


I loved how this update was dramatic in the start, went comedic in the first quarter. Then emotional yet warm and fuzzy with Ariya. All factual near end and then hearts were popping up and down with that eyelock. And finally comedic again with Ayesha ❤️❤️


Don't ever stop typing. Your fingers are blessed with more creativity than I ever could imagine.


Waiting desperately for next Wednesday

And THANKS FOR THE PM


TOODLESS!!

Ps. HAPPY NEW YEAR WONDERFUL WRITER OF MINE❤️🎇🎇

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome update

Ayesha poor girl no idea that the whole thing already got over😂

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Posted: 1 years ago

Poori ramayana khatam ho gyi or ye seeta haran pe atki h😂😂😂

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wooh nice update love the ariya scene. How riya supported Arjun is pretty good I like it.


Aysha beta neend se Jago 🫣🤣🤣

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