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Good night Mr Mallik

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The one shot starts when Deva humiliate Tara and took Natasha in his room to show that her presence has no value to her.

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Tara stood for a while there. "What did he do just now??

It was definetly what Deva not capable of.. Yes, its his anger that had overpowered him,could impel him to do such gross things. But her Deva... cannot do such low thing... not even in his dream.

She smiled mentally, and left the place.

Deva was standing near the window, He was looking at the beaming moon. The moon...Tara Memsahab! he had married a few hours ago, was supposed to be here. Oh! It would have been lovely, if he could sleep in her lap, watching the moon in the sky, that is glistening its silvery aura... His trance broke with her loud voice of Natasha.

Deva!! Why am I here? This is so embarassing..Its your wedding night, Tara should be the one who shall be here. Natasha fidgted her wristlet and turned to his friend, the very old one,5 years older than her, who had been thick and thin when she was a victim of child prostitution, It was he who saved her and helped her to return to her parents.

Natasha - Tara must have gone, I should go now Dev. Aap ki badle ke chakkar mein mujhe badnam mat kar yaar! ( you are not supposed to make me a victim of bad reputation for your personal vendetta)

Deva smiled at Natasha..she is equally dear to him,like Farwari...He can never ever look at her with such impression, that he had given Tara memsahab a little while ago.

Deva - Ha tu chali jana, mein cab book kar deta hoon.. Pouch ke msg kar diyo ( I am trying to book a cab for you.. Pls msg me when you reach ok?) Aj jo meine use aaina dikhaya na humari rishtey ki sacch aur jhoot usey pata chal gaya hai

(I have shown her the mirror, Now she absolutely knows the reality of our relationship... Deva could not finish his words..)

exactly the very moment a bang on the door was heard

Deva frowned.

Natasha - See! I told you... Open it bro!

Deva much irritated, took some lomg strides and opened the door, just to meet... Tara - the firecracker

She pushed him lightly and forcedly rolled her skybag into the room

Natasha! I think Deva is right! Raat kafi ho chuki hai.. Tum abhi nikolege toh 11-30 tak ghar pauch jaoge.. Aur baki jo aaina dekhna dikhana hai woh mein Mr Mallik se kar lungi

(I think Dev is right.. If u will start by now you will reach home by 11-30, And rest what transpires, I and Mr Dev Mallik will manage)

Natasha heaved a big sigh of relief, bid a good bye, and left Deva and Tara's Bedroom. Tara locked the room, and turned

"Left or Right? She asked.

Aap kehna kya chhate hai? (What do u want)? Now Deva was vexed . Aap ko samaj mein nhi aa raha hai Is kaamre mein aur meri jivan mein aap ki koi jagah nhi hai ( You have no right in my room as well as in my life) Toh jaiye yahan se ( So please leave!) Tara closed her eyes and again took a composed breath..

Batao na Kon sa mera side hai Left ya right? ( Please Tell me which sight I should choose Left or Right?) Her feigning and ignorance was making him annoyed, so he shouted - "Aap ko baat samaj nhi aa raha hai.. ( Are u not understanding what am I saying...) Tara tip toed to him and came too close to him, She politely hold his cheek and murmur - Raat ho gaya hai bohot.. Tum thak nhi gaye ho... Kuch khaalo aur so jao Deva! Mein apna saman Left side pe rakh deti hoon ( Are u not tired? I think you must eat and have some sleep,I will arrange my luggage to the left side of the cupboard) Deva's eyes got moist immediately, as her touch made him emotional. This was the same touch, he had been pining so long. No! No! Not again, He cannot get melted by her sweet words and tender touches, He immediately shoved off his hand.

Aap jo karne ki kosish kar rahi hai...woh ho nhi ho payega... Aap ki chhal aur kapat sab jante hai.... Isiliye is kamre mein aur meri zindagi mein kabza karne ki koshish maat kijiye ( I know all of your deception and lies... I will never let you control over room and in my life)

Os kamre mein vi mera haq hai Tumhari zindagi pe vi! Yeah jo karwat ki zeher tum pal rahe ho dil mein usey mitane aayi hoon aur mitake hi dam loongi ( I am your wife, I have right on your room and in your life.. I have come here, to eliminate this poison and bitterness from your find... and will not breathe my last..till I do so...

She passed him and took out her comfortable night clothes and kept them on the mattress.

Deva! She called her. As he kept looking on at her with mesmerised eyes, she turned around and said

"Yeh kholne todha madat kar do pls, bohot vari hai ( Pls help me unclasping these... They are really heavy) She pointed out her necklace and earrings. Deva came close to her as if he is in a trance. He helped to loosen the clips, as Tara bit by bit remove the ornaments. She took her clothes and moved towards the bathroom.

After 10 minutes

She was wearing her comfy night suit,hair tied in a neat plate all make up removed and cleansed. She opened the Cupboard and gave Deva a pair of track and vest and said - Change kar lo! (Go and Change) He looked at her disbelief. How can someone so casual and normal. Not an ounce of fear, shame and doubt was seen in her eyes. She was supposed to cry, blame her misfortune and should make amends to run away.. But the girl, step by step is taking the role of a wife and honestly, Deva had no complaint about it... This was so peaceful and soul satisfying for him. He went, bathed and changed. Tara in the meanwhile arranged the bed, She removed the pillows, as he was not habituated.

" Toh aap nhi jayengi... Dheet hai aap? Chalaki kar rahi hai aap? ( So you have decided... You will not go? You are trying to act stubborn and sly... Well! Mein hi chala jata hoon.. ( Fine.. I will go then..) He yelled for the umpteenth time knowing that he was loosing the battle.

Tara lie down and glanced at him.

So jao... Hum ab kal larenge.. Raat bohot ho gaya hai... Tumhara left aur mera right ( Go and sleep Deva... As usual Left will be your side.. And right will be mine..) Sighing in frustration, having little energy left.. Deva slouched and lie down on the mattress only to be greeted by her sweet voice

"Good night Mr Mallik "!

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Nice OS Titli, Loved DevRa nok jhoksmiley42 Come back soon smiley1 Thanks for writing it smiley1

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Good night Mr Mallik

One Shot

The one shot starts when Deva humiliate Tara and took Natasha in his room to show that her presence has no value to her.

Bilingual

Tara stood for a while there. "What did he do just now??

It was definetly what Deva is capable of.. Yes, its his anger that had overpowered him,could impel him to do such gross things. But her Deva... cannot do such low thing... not even in his dream.

She smiled mentally, and left the place.

Deva was standing near the window, He was looking at the beaming moon. The moon...Tara Memsahab! he had married a few hours ago, was supposed to be here. Oh! It would have been lovely, if he could sleep in her lap, watching the moon in the sky, that is glistening its silvery aura... His trance broke with her loud voice of Natasha.

Deva!! Why am I here? This is so embarassing..Its your wedding night, Tara should be the one who shall be here. Natasha fidgted her wristlet and turned to his friend, the very old one,5 years older than her, who had been thick and thin when she was a victim of child prostitution, It was he who saved her and helped her to return to her parents.

Natasha - Tara must have gone, I should go now Dev. Aap ki badle ke chakkar mein mujhe badnam mat kar yaar! ( you are not supposed to make me a victim of bad reputation for your personal vendetta)

Deva smiled at Natasha..she is equally dear to him,like Farwari...He can never ever look at her with such impression, that he had given Tara memsahab a little while ago.

Deva - Ha tu chali jana, mein cab book kar deta hoon.. Pouch ke msg kar diyo ( I am trying to book a cab for you.. Pls msg me when you reach ok?) Aj jo meine use aaina dikhaya na humari rishtey ki sacch aur jhoot usey pata chal gaya hai

(I have shown her the mirror, Now she absolutely knows the reality of our relationship... Deva could not finish his words..)

exactly the very moment a bang on the door was heard

Deva frowned.

Natasha - See! I told you... Open it bro!

Deva much irritated, took some lomg strides and opened the door, just to meet... Tara - the firecracker

She pushed him lightly and forcedly rolled her skybag into the room

Natasha! I think Deva is right! Raat kafi ho chuki hai.. Tum abhi nikolege toh 11-30 tak ghar pauch jaoge.. Aur baki jo aaina dekhna dikhana hai woh mein Mr Mallik se kar lungi

(I think Dev is right.. If u will start by now you will reach home by 11-30, And rest what transpires, I and Mr Dev Mallik will manage)

Natasha heaved a big sigh of relief, bid a good bye, and left Deva and Tara's Bedroom. Tara locked the room, and turned

"Left or Right? She asked.

Aap kehna kya chhate hai? (What do u want)? Now Deva was vexed . Aap ko samaj mein nhi aa raha hai Is kaamre mein aur meri jivan mein aap ki koi jagah nhi hai ( You have no right in my room as well as in my life) Toh jaiye yahan se ( So please leave!) Tara closed her eyes and again took a composed breath..

Batao na Kon sa mera side hai Left ya right? ( Please Tell me which sight I should choose Left or Right?) Her feigning and ignorance was making him annoyed, so he shouted - "Aap ko baat samaj nhi aa raha hai.. ( Are u not understanding what am I saying...) Tara tip toed to him and came too close to him, She politely hold his cheek and murmur - Raat ho gaya hai bohot.. Tum thak nhi gaye ho... Kuch khaalo aur so jao Deva! Mein apna saman Left side pe rakh deti hoon ( Are u not tired? I think you must eat and have some sleep,I will arrange my luggage to the left side of the cupboard) Deva's eyes got moist immediately, as her touch made him emotional. This was the same touch, he had been pining so long. No! No! Not again, He cannot get melted by her sweet words and tender touches, He immediately shoved off his hand.

Aap jo karne ki kosish kar rahi hai...woh ho nhi ho payega... Aap ki chhal aur kapat sab jante hai.... Isiliye is kamre mein aur meri zindagi mein kabza karne ki koshish maat kijiye ( I know all of your deception and lies... I will never let you control over room and in my life)

Os kamre mein vi mera haq hai Tumhari zindagi pe vi! Yeah jo karwat ki zeher tum pal rahe ho dil mein usey mitane aayi hoon aur mitake hi dam loongi ( I am your wife, I have right on your room and in your life.. I have come here, to eliminate this poison and bitterness from your find... and will not breathe my last..till I do so...

She passed him and took out her comfortable night clothes and kept them on the mattress.

Deva! She called her. As he kept looking on at her with mesmerised eyes, she turned around and said

"Yeh kholne todha madat kar do pls, bohot vari hai ( Pls help me unclasping these... They are really heavy) She pointed out her necklace and earrings. Deva came close to her as if he is in a trance. He helped to loosen the clips, as Tara bit by bit remove the ornaments. She took her clothes and moved towards the bathroom.

After 10 minutes

She was wearing her comfy night suit,hair tied in a neat plate all make up removed and cleansed. She opened the Cupboard and gave Deva a pair of track and vest and said - Change kar lo! (Go and Change) He looked at her disbelief. How can someone so casual and normal. Not an ounce of fear, shame and doubt was seen in her eyes. She was supposed to cry, blame her misfortune and should make amends to run away.. But the girl, step by step is taking the role of a wife and honestly, Deva had no complaint about it... This was so peaceful and soul satisfying for him. He went, bathed and changed. Tara in the meanwhile arranged the bed, She removed the pillows, as he was not habituated.

" Toh aap nhi jayengi... Dheet hai aap? Chalaki kar rahi hai aap? ( So you have decided... You will not go? You are trying to act stubborn and sly... Well! Mein hi chala jata hoon.. ( Fine.. I will go then..) He yelled for the umpteenth time knowing that he was loosing the battle.

Tara lie down and glanced at him.

So jao... Hum ab kal larenge.. Raat bohot ho gaya hai... Tumhara left aur mera right ( Go and sleep Deva... As usual Left will be your side.. And right will be mine..) Sighing in frustration, having little energy left.. Deva slouched and lie down on the mattress only to be greeted by her sweet voice

"Good night Mr Mallik "!

very nice writing dear waiting for more and more smiley27smiley36

I loved this one yaaarsmiley42

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Good night Mr Mallik

One Shot

The one shot starts when Deva humiliate Tara and took Natasha in his room to show that her presence has no value to her.

Bilingual

Tara stood for a while there. "What did he do just now??

It was definetly what Deva is capable of.. Yes, its his anger that had overpowered him,could impel him to do such gross things. But her Deva... cannot do such low thing... not even in his dream.

She smiled mentally, and left the place.

Deva was standing near the window, He was looking at the beaming moon. The moon...Tara Memsahab! he had married a few hours ago, was supposed to be here. Oh! It would have been lovely, if he could sleep in her lap, watching the moon in the sky, that is glistening its silvery aura... His trance broke with her loud voice of Natasha.

Deva!! Why am I here? This is so embarassing..Its your wedding night, Tara should be the one who shall be here. Natasha fidgted her wristlet and turned to his friend, the very old one,5 years older than her, who had been thick and thin when she was a victim of child prostitution, It was he who saved her and helped her to return to her parents.

Natasha - Tara must have gone, I should go now Dev. Aap ki badle ke chakkar mein mujhe badnam mat kar yaar! ( you are not supposed to make me a victim of bad reputation for your personal vendetta)

Deva smiled at Natasha..she is equally dear to him,like Farwari...He can never ever look at her with such impression, that he had given Tara memsahab a little while ago.

Deva - Ha tu chali jana, mein cab book kar deta hoon.. Pouch ke msg kar diyo ( I am trying to book a cab for you.. Pls msg me when you reach ok?) Aj jo meine use aaina dikhaya na humari rishtey ki sacch aur jhoot usey pata chal gaya hai

(I have shown her the mirror, Now she absolutely knows the reality of our relationship... Deva could not finish his words..)

exactly the very moment a bang on the door was heard

Deva frowned.

Natasha - See! I told you... Open it bro!

Deva much irritated, took some lomg strides and opened the door, just to meet... Tara - the firecracker

She pushed him lightly and forcedly rolled her skybag into the room

Natasha! I think Deva is right! Raat kafi ho chuki hai.. Tum abhi nikolege toh 11-30 tak ghar pauch jaoge.. Aur baki jo aaina dekhna dikhana hai woh mein Mr Mallik se kar lungi

(I think Dev is right.. If u will start by now you will reach home by 11-30, And rest what transpires, I and Mr Dev Mallik will manage)

Natasha heaved a big sigh of relief, bid a good bye, and left Deva and Tara's Bedroom. Tara locked the room, and turned

"Left or Right? She asked.

Aap kehna kya chhate hai? (What do u want)? Now Deva was vexed . Aap ko samaj mein nhi aa raha hai Is kaamre mein aur meri jivan mein aap ki koi jagah nhi hai ( You have no right in my room as well as in my life) Toh jaiye yahan se ( So please leave!) Tara closed her eyes and again took a composed breath..

Batao na Kon sa mera side hai Left ya right? ( Please Tell me which sight I should choose Left or Right?) Her feigning and ignorance was making him annoyed, so he shouted - "Aap ko baat samaj nhi aa raha hai.. ( Are u not understanding what am I saying...) Tara tip toed to him and came too close to him, She politely hold his cheek and murmur - Raat ho gaya hai bohot.. Tum thak nhi gaye ho... Kuch khaalo aur so jao Deva! Mein apna saman Left side pe rakh deti hoon ( Are u not tired? I think you must eat and have some sleep,I will arrange my luggage to the left side of the cupboard) Deva's eyes got moist immediately, as her touch made him emotional. This was the same touch, he had been pining so long. No! No! Not again, He cannot get melted by her sweet words and tender touches, He immediately shoved off his hand.

Aap jo karne ki kosish kar rahi hai...woh ho nhi ho payega... Aap ki chhal aur kapat sab jante hai.... Isiliye is kamre mein aur meri zindagi mein kabza karne ki koshish maat kijiye ( I know all of your deception and lies... I will never let you control over room and in my life)

Os kamre mein vi mera haq hai Tumhari zindagi pe vi! Yeah jo karwat ki zeher tum pal rahe ho dil mein usey mitane aayi hoon aur mitake hi dam loongi ( I am your wife, I have right on your room and in your life.. I have come here, to eliminate this poison and bitterness from your find... and will not breathe my last..till I do so...

She passed him and took out her comfortable night clothes and kept them on the mattress.

Deva! She called her. As he kept looking on at her with mesmerised eyes, she turned around and said

"Yeh kholne todha madat kar do pls, bohot vari hai ( Pls help me unclasping these... They are really heavy) She pointed out her necklace and earrings. Deva came close to her as if he is in a trance. He helped to loosen the clips, as Tara bit by bit remove the ornaments. She took her clothes and moved towards the bathroom.

After 10 minutes

She was wearing her comfy night suit,hair tied in a neat plate all make up removed and cleansed. She opened the Cupboard and gave Deva a pair of track and vest and said - Change kar lo! (Go and Change) He looked at her disbelief. How can someone so casual and normal. Not an ounce of fear, shame and doubt was seen in her eyes. She was supposed to cry, blame her misfortune and should make amends to run away.. But the girl, step by step is taking the role of a wife and honestly, Deva had no complaint about it... This was so peaceful and soul satisfying for him. He went, bathed and changed. Tara in the meanwhile arranged the bed, She removed the pillows, as he was not habituated.

" Toh aap nhi jayengi... Dheet hai aap? Chalaki kar rahi hai aap? ( So you have decided... You will not go? You are trying to act stubborn and sly... Well! Mein hi chala jata hoon.. ( Fine.. I will go then..) He yelled for the umpteenth time knowing that he was loosing the battle.

Tara lie down and glanced at him.

So jao... Hum ab kal larenge.. Raat bohot ho gaya hai... Tumhara left aur mera right ( Go and sleep Deva... As usual Left will be your side.. And right will be mine..) Sighing in frustration, having little energy left.. Deva slouched and lie down on the mattress only to be greeted by her sweet voice

"Good night Mr Mallik "!

smiley31smiley27 what a lovely writing..made me smile so big..yes that's how it should have been I could visualize it in their voices...do keep writing and tagging me...❤️❤️loved it

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Posted: 1 years ago
#5

Wahh wahh kya baat hai Titli smiley32

Maza agaya. Very good os. I loved their nokh jokh.

You know what I loved the most the way Tara came back and showed her haq. I loved this Tashan wali Tara. Even Deva enjoyed it. Hope makers bhi aisa dikhaye Tara coming back to his room rightfully and sleeping on his bed like a Queen' 🤗

Keep writing more stories on our Devra...

Thank you once again for writing smiley31

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Posted: 1 years ago
#6

Nice Story I Could Almost Picture It.

Happening

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Bravo 👏 👏 👏 nice dear

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I like how she thinks outside the box to get her way.

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