The truth - NeiVika OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Thank you for your review

Are my stories really that good? I give out the disclaimers expecting it to go bad or be half drcent to the readers

I believe every story is good when it delivers what it promises.

Your story does the same. It entertains us & gives us so much joy.

So don't worry, you are writing from your heart & you are doing fantastic

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Your stories are soo good.

I believe every story is good when it delivers what it promises.

Your story does the same. It entertains us & gives us so much joy.

So don't worry, you are writing from your heart & you are doing fantastic

Thank you for those kind words

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Originally posted by: MochaQueen

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Do post your review after reading it

Aloo ki bori LOL

Great OS Pete!!! I feel Sab chachu should also show some light moments like this since it's a comedy drama channel

Love this DJ That DJ - Isha scene

Originally posted by: BT24

Aloo ki bori LOL

Great OS Pete!!! I feel Sab chachu should also show some light moments like this since it's a comedy drama channel

Love this DJ That DJ - Isha scene

That DJ isha scene was such a cliche sitcom scene that i loved writting it

You actually write sooo good Pete

Everything about this OS is so apt

DJ-Isha bonding in twisted way

I loved that

Bhoomi's dialogue about sending truck

Yuvika taunting Neil about never going to office

NeiVika scene

DJ informing Yuvika about Jacket and Neil saving her Neil called Arjun gadha

Please continue this I want to see Neil's reaction when he will realise that it's actually DJ

LOVED every bit of THIS

Thank you

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

You actually write sooo good Pete

Everything about this OS is so apt

DJ-Isha bonding in twisted way

I loved that

Bhoomi's dialogue about sending truck

Yuvika taunting Neil about never going to office

NeiVika scene

DJ informing Yuvika about Jacket and Neil saving her Neil called Arjun gadha

Please continue this I want to see Neil's reaction when he will realise that it's actually DJ

LOVED every bit of THIS

Thank you

Thanks for the review , yeah I'll add a small scene in the OS where Yuvika says it's DJ and not Arjun

Post your thoughts on this one too

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/vanshaj/5342389/general-one-shots

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Do post your review after reading it

Neil always makes me laugh in your stories with his dialogues

I liked their convo and especially the way she confessed and proposed to him