Zimmedari ya pyaar [#NeiVika OS] - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

19

Views

1772

Users

10

Likes

38

Frequent Posters

Chowmein123 thumbnail
Visit Streak 90 0 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail

Team Gargi

Posted: 9 months ago
#11

Can you please update romantic os on neil and yuvika 

FlauntPessimism thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 months ago
#12

Kyu sab ke sab bechaare Kartik ko villian banaane par tule ho? His actions might have led to wrongs but he hasnt done anything bad deliberately here...


OK very beautiful narration, especially Neil's disbelief that Yuvika is actually marrying someone. I mean someone chipkoo...

Very nice portrayed the emotion of all three of them.... 

Moonks thumbnail
Posted: 9 months ago
#13

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism

Kyu sab ke sab bechaare Kartik ko villian banaane par tule ho? His actions might have led to wrongs but he hasnt done anything bad deliberately here...


OK very beautiful narration, especially Neil's disbelief that Yuvika is actually marrying someone. I mean someone chipkoo...

Very nice portrayed the emotion of all three of them.... 

hume pata hai woh kaand karne wala hai🤔

Moonks thumbnail
Posted: 9 months ago
#14

Originally posted by: Moonks

Tell this to certain someone who is angry with me for writing this part😒

you too😒

FlauntPessimism thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 months ago
#15

Mainee kya kiya

Moonks thumbnail
Posted: 9 months ago
#16

gave angry expressions😒

agreatwcr thumbnail
Visit Streak 180 0 Thumbnail Anniversary 8 Thumbnail + 6

Team Neivika

Posted: 9 months ago
#17

This was my first read on NeiVika and...

Jokes apart! It was such a cute (yet heartbreaking to a very good extent) shot! Keep writing more!😳❤️

Moonks thumbnail
Posted: 9 months ago
#18

Edited by Moonks - 9 months ago
Palak2812 thumbnail

Team Multanis

Posted: 9 months ago
#19

Ohh man 

This Chipku really need to be removed 

MochaQueen thumbnail

Team Neivika

Posted: 6 months ago
#20

The ending was too sad and incompletesmiley38