SS - Black Diamond Epilogue/ Pg 22 Jul 21

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok Cheeryji wants me to write a mushy ff but I can't think of anything mushy
to write. So Cherry I thought since there is a new Indiana Jones movie out, why not
put our munna and munni in such an escapade.

Ok will not update this until I finish Dilruba so don't ask. And the story will only be
continued if you guys really want to read munna and munni being chased, fired at , tied up
and thrown into a pit of snakes and lots of gory bits...and in between munna and munni will
have there little angtsy tiffs too with kiss and make up sessions.

I changed the name to Black Diamond per reader's view.

Part 3 page 7, part 4 page 9, part 5 page 12, part 6 page 14, part 7 page 17, part 8 page 20
part 9 page 18, part 10 page 20

Black Diamond(Kala Heera)

Mera naam chin chin chu
Chin chin chu baba chin chin chu
Raat chandni main aur tu
"Hello mister, how do you do?" -2
Baabaa baabaa baabaa

Baabuji main cheen se aayi cheenee jaisa dil layi
Singapore ka yauvan mera Shanghai ki angdayi -2
Dil par rakh le haath zara, ho jaye na paagal tu -2
Mera naam chin chin chu..

Oh baabuji main aur aap, kitna achchha huwa milaap
Tujhko dekh tabiyat bhadki, Alladin ki main hoon ladki -2
Phoonk doon mantar chhu chu chu, Sindbaad "the sailor" tu -2
Mera naam chin chin chu..(Howrah Bridge)

The Cezanne bar was filled with billowing smoke. The patrons, smoked, drank and danced in the cramped space of the popular bar. In a dark corner a guy his rather long hair touseled from constantly running his hand through it was talking to a wizened old man, whose teeth were almost black from chewing tobacco. The old man peered at the glinting talisman with his beady eyes. Look of greed filled his eyes as he fingered the intricate carvings. The two talked in hushed voices, not that anyone would have heard much over the other noise in the bar.


For a brief moment the guy looked up and threw a stare at the girl, dressed in a rather tight fitting Chinese dress. His eyes rested on her overly glossed lips crooning the words in the mike. Their eyes locked and the man raised his beer bottle at he and winked. In turn the girl pouted her lips and blew him a kiss. The old man snickered at the guy, 'Pretty little thing isn't she!' his voice leery and his eyes suggestive. The guy snatched the talisman and wrapped it in a filty rag and stuffed it in his overly large jacket. He tapped the old man on his arm, 'So are willing to tell me about the talisman?'


The old man's greedy eyes grew large, 'How much are you willing to pay? I hear there is a certain gentleman willing to pay a lot to get his hand on the talisman. It's a pretty hot comodity you have there my Walia.'


Jai Walia sneered, his large rough hand shoving the old man against the hard back of the chair. His voice hard, he spit out, 'You say one word to anyone about this and I will have no problem splitting your gut. Understood?'


The old guy smoothed his shirt and cackled at Jai Walia, 'Take care of your hot head son. There are a lot of bad men out there who do worse things than slicing you up.' Before Jai Walia could say anything, gunfire erupted and mayhem spread as chairs and tables toppled and people ran or threw themselves on the floor. The singer screamed as one of the gumman grabbed her and pulled her off the stage. Jai Walia flew out of his chair and made straight for the girl. His left hand whizzed through the air and caught the gunman on the chin. The gunman stumbled back, Jai Walia grabbed the girl's arm and pulled her with him towards the back of the bar. His huge frame pushed and shoved his way out the back door as more gunfire rang behind him. In the dark alley he looked left and right and then ran dragging the girl with him. A taxi screeched to a halt seeing his raised hand. Jai Walia pushed the girl in the back seat and threw himself behind her. 'The airport,' he screamed at the driver as he saw gunmen rush towards them, their guns poised for firing. The taxi driver saw the gunmen and jumped out of the taxi yelling, 'I don't want to die.' Jai Walia cursed and pushed himself into the driver's seat and stepped on the pedal. The taxi lurched and then moved just as a round of bullets shattered the rear window of the taxi. 'Keep down!' he screamed at the girl as he tried to concentrate on getting them away from the gunmen following him now in a black car.


TBC....





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.noone. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dhishum dhishum my type any ways strange title otherwise gr8 part but di whos tht gal with uncle wali

Ok i tried to comment ASAP
Edited by YOOUSHA - 17 years ago
divan thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hani no saving...read and comment first. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: divan

Hani no saving...read and comment first. 😆

yeah yeah i wil try bt 4 nw SAVING HAHAHA
swatinarang thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kya dhamakedar start hai kanta dear, loved it, so girl must be bani na 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow!!! K what a black diamond "Wild Wild West" 😉 😃 ....loving the storyline....of course mushy mushy toh hona chahiye....so that girl is our Bnai rani.....lets see how the story unfolds....you are such a great dear 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Divan... lovely start...👏 ... don't mind the gunshots and all that as long as we get to see all lovely dovely scene between Munna and Munni... 😳 😆 ...

Can't say do cont soon... 😕 ... yeh kaisa shart hai... 😕... in that case do cont with both of them... 😆 ... on a serious note do cont if u have enough time to... 😃 ... will look forward to next part...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay... Cherry where do u get such ideas from??? i really want to know 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😲😲😲
aiyoooooo
what a start!!!!!!!
😃 😃 😃
i m lovin it 😛 😛

super start Kantadi 😃
plz cont soon

Thaaaaaaaaanku Khushappi for putting such an idea in Kantadi's head 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys, thanks for the comments and wanting to take a ride on the Indy express🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ...the title...I had to quickly think of a title and just came up with this, but if anyone can suggest a better title, please pm me...something fun would be nice.

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