Neil Bhatt/ DCP VC AT 3: Duniya ke saare hero Virat sir ke aage zero - Page 60

Originally posted by: Haalim

You could have written Virat better than Vankar himself. Bias ke chakkar main he did him wrong

But if you had read one of my OSs, I am not sure you would've said that

I can't find it for the life of me if I could, I would have given you the link to it, for sure and you would have said what the hell

Really? What did you make him?

Those are scenarios na, your understanding of the character is great otherwise

This is so cool!!

Originally posted by: Haalim

Really? What did you make him?

Those are scenarios na, your understanding of the character is great otherwise

Anyways, I am linking another story of mine for you to read. I believe you weren't in the forum at that time. I was wild in Sairat bliss

So here you go

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156576765

I'll check this tomorrow or after that. Busy with cousin's marriage today

Let me check the wild you 🫣🫣🫣

Originally posted by: Haalim

I'll check this tomorrow or after that. Busy with cousin's marriage today

Let me check the wild you 🫣🫣🫣

Originally posted by: Asur

okay. But this is a mild one. Not that wild one

Padh ke bataon gi

Originally posted by: Haalim

Padh ke bataon gi

That was an OS. But this has four parts. I found it. This is what I was talking about.

Part 1 page 1

Part 2 page 10

Part 3 page 12

Part 4 page 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/157696204

Originally posted by: Asur

as you read that, read this one too.

That was an OS. But this has four parts. I found it. This is what I was talking about.

Part 1 page 1

Part 2 page 10

Part 3 page 12

Part 3 page 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/157696204

Pehle main apne haath isi pe daalun gi

Originally posted by: Haalim

Pehle main apne haath isi pe daalun gi