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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 1 years ago
#61

Shibu, doing next?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#62

Segment #7

"Don't mind me asking, but what happened to the rest of the footage, like after Maria fell?"

"There was none, I guess the attacker realized that the backroom had cameras after he left Maria alone, so he cut the wires off before he came in to put Maria in the chair and attack her on the head."

"Why on the head?"

"I don't understand it too. Clearly, the drink had the poison and it had started working, so why set the stage?"

"An artist's final touch" Her boss' smooth voice rang in her head.

Shaking her thoughts away, she focused on Kesha who was mumbling to herself, probably a process to gather her thoughts to work on the case. That was good, maybe she could get tidbits to get to the killer. She had no interest in catching him and putting him behind bars, her sense of justice was a little more creative than that.

"Can you give me the name of the venue where you first saw the killer and the date? We could see if they have something. Do you have any photos or videos from the party? The metadata will have the exact date."

"It was Casa Blanca, the hotel and club on the east side? I don't like clicking pictures, maybe Maria's phone has some. Didn't you find any texts or pictures?"

"He took away her phone and it's been switched off since, so we can't trace it. Her laptop is new, so there is nothing there, she didn't even connect the laptop to her phone or do backup of her stuff on the laptop, but I'll get the team to do a recheck."

"The blood reports?"

"Clean. But a few tests will take some more days, so we'll have to wait." Kesha shook her head. She then looked at her for a few seconds and laughed.

"Do you watch a lot of Crime Patrol and Savdhaan India? You know your stuff. "

Ames faked a blush trying not to think of how many good episodes her "actions" would have given those crime shows, much better than their semi-p*rn episodes.

"Can you send me the blood reports when they come in? I am a medical professional, I can help you."

She also has a theory, but she knew she couldn't voice it without making Kesha suspicious.

______

Ames entered her house and almost slipped on the paper on the floor.

"You think you can get away? You are selfish and the people who loved you have always paid the price, starting from Maria and you know who."


Ames' green eyes went wide with shock and anguish as the image of her father lying in the pool of his blood flashed in front of her, his brain almost spilling out of his skull, and the ten-year-old Ames who stood over his body, with a huge rod in her hand, rod almost bigger than her own body.

Edited by oh_nakhrewaali - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago
#63

Fab stuff, Liz and Shiboosmiley42

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Posted: 1 years ago
#64

can you summarise/club everything in one post?

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 1 years ago
#65

Ahh nice touch that ...last bit of blast from the past for Ames.


I hadn't quite banked on them figuring out the drink-had-something-in-it so soon. I thought they'd be side-tracked by the head trauma a while longer while A and K got closer and then when they figured it out, suspicion would fall on Thysian and therefore, Ames and bammm..drama! smiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ahh nice touch that ...last bit of blast from the past for Ames.


I hadn't quite banked on them figuring out the drink-had-something-in-it so soon. I thought they'd be side-tracked by the head trauma a while longer while A and K got closer and then when they figured it out, suspicion would fall on Thysian and therefore, Ames and bammm..drama! smiley36

They watched the video, agar yeh figure out nahi karte toh kaisa CBI officersmiley39

Kesha dont know Thysian's gender though, it could still be "him" somehow

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 1 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

can you summarise/club everything in one post?

done smiley20


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163741444

Mumma, you next?

Edited by Satrangi_Curls - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago
#68

Writers block, i have no idea what to write and i dont wanna ruin the flow of the story...i cant force myself to write...so i will just write when something comes to my mind naturallysmiley9

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 1 years ago
#69
Sorry- crazy busy the last few days but might have time to come up with something by this weekend.
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 1 years ago
#70

Segment#8



"Aa gayi beta?" Ames' mother strolled up to her in a wheelchair. "Maria kaisi hai?"

"Abhi behtar hai maa." Ames smiled at her mother. She could do anything for her mother including taking someone's life. "What have you prepared for dinner tonight?"

"It's your favourite khichdi." Ames smiled and both settled on the dining table.

___


Kesha sat beside Maria in the hospital. "Marie, wake up, girl. Trust me, I will find and punish whoever put you in this position real soon."


The doctor came for a regular checkup.


"Any updates, doctor?"


"No but let's hope for the best and pray for her to wake up soon. Her condition is stable and the internal beating has almost stopped which is a good thing. We shall be continuing to monitor her at regular intervals. Keep talking to her when possible because even in this state she is very much aware of her surroundings and she can listen to your voice."

"Thank you doctor, I will keep it in mind."

Kesha looked at her and then back at the doctor. A question played at the back of her mind but she decided to wait for the reports.


___


Next afternoon Kesha got a call.

"Mam the reports are here." Kesha opened her mail to read the report.


Narrowing of blood vessels is seen in the upper half of the body.


Kesha read the sentence a few times before opening the PM report of Jonny. 'Angina?' Kesha called her doctor friend and asked for an explanation on angina and its potential causes. She listened patiently. "So, you're telling me that a sudden drop in temperature or exposure to something very cold can result in angina?"

"Yes, sometimes it can trigger Prinzmetal angina."

"Okay, thank you. Do meet me soon."

"Sure, the moment I get relieved from this pile of cases."

"You and your file are bffs for life, there is no separating you two." "Just like you and your patients."

"Well I am a life saver,"

"So am I."

Woman, your work begins after a life ends, mine starts before that. "Hey, that's rude."

"That's what you get when you don't meet your bestie for 2 months."

"But we just met last Sunday."

"Gurrl, that last Sunday was two months ago." Kesha looked at the calendar. "Oh no!" she said to herself, " I will call you back later."

"Sure, take care of yourself."

"You too."

Kesha smacked her head. 'S*it sh*t, how can I forget? How could you forget Kesha?' She logged out of the email, shut down her laptop and rushed to her car.


___


(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。


Had some of this in mind for a while but didn't have time to pen it down. :)

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