MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 24 - Pg 88 Nov 16 - Page 7

Another lovely start of story. Maan is having hatred for Geet.. Geet loves him, but she feared of Maan knowing her one truth. Interesting.. looking fowd for this story..

Does anyone want chapter 1 here.

Just like Silent Whisper, was thinking to give chapter 1 for little insight as it's ready and you will get something to read till Devil's Den get ready.

Let me know then I will post in couple of hours.

Thanks 😊

Oh what a teaser!!!

Maan really repenting. Hmm wondering what the truth is that geet is hiding. Is it that they have a child

will she take the project??? Knowing who it is

I so much want to know the truth now which is in bit n pieces right now

Maan will be unable to forget his son now but let's see how they will meet as father and son

The burnt- i loved it. the way you explaned the prologue.PART 1 was awesome. The meet between Advay and Maan was good. Maan is repenting for his sins, what the truth Geet is hiding. Can't wait for next.

Lovely story .

Though want to know more about their pasts . Pls also update the old one s

Ohhh beautiful update

Maan used to be angry with her always now what is need of remembering her like this when she is out of his reach geet also miss him in there is no so good memory of him to cherish but her one side love is more than enough tell someday they will come face to face then what is that truth that would make man angry on her

What will be the reaction of maan of finding geet in front of his eyes and he will see her and also his son oh my God cont wait

Congrats for new story

Lovely update

Waiting for next update..

Awesome update

Something bad happened in the past, Maan has hurt Geet so much deeply..they have a son too

will be waiting for the past to unfold and Maan and Geet to come face to face