That One Moment- an OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: CheekuKaBeej

arey yaar, us level ka nahin likha jata mere se😆

You can write a sanskari version 😆

Originally posted by: Haalim

You can write a sanskari version 😆

Here is my sanskari version. After this kya hua hoga, wo khud sochna😆

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156534295

Originally posted by: CheekuKaBeej

You say sanskari?😆 have you read my previous stories😆

Here is my sanskari version. After this kya hua hoga, wo khud sochna😆

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156534295

Ab main kahan jaaon? 🙈🙈🙈

Still people are behind me for that 😉

Originally posted by: AninditaB

Still people are behind me for that 😉

Kuch tou log kahenge

Logun ka kaam hai kehna 😆

This is so beautiful 😍...

Dont forget me in any SaiRat related FF henceforth 😊

Originally posted by: Moor278

This is so beautiful 😍...

Dont forget me in any SaiRat related FF henceforth 😊

For sure👍🏼

Beautiful writing Cheeku👏

Have read your previous works also. As usual the visual imagery is amzing👍🏼

Originally posted by: Nirip

Beautiful writing Cheeku👏

Have read your previous works also. As usual the visual imagery is amzing👍🏼

Bold: I love it when someone notices these details and point them out to me. I love when I'm told what they specifically liked too. I simply love it. Thank you❤️

Good one Cheeku! Enjoyed reading it…specifically the flashback description part.❤️

It was a superb scene in the show. The first time when you feel Virat is falling for Sai…he was physically attracted to her in that scene. Didn’t know he had so many fantasies at that moment. 😜

For some reason, it always reminded me of Anarkali practising her dance & Saleem watching without inhibition - admiring & awestruck. I guess it was the ambience as you rightly observed.

So what’s happening next in your story? Next part please 😉