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Posted: 19 years ago
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Okay, I promise this is my last topic, but I just felt in the mood of writing poems today, so my fingers typed away.😛 I hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

I was lost in all that glitters,

Like a wandering roving hoodwink,

teetering on the edge of excitement,

On to spurn of tricks and games,

Then a light shone along,

It lifted me out of romanticism,

Touched my soul with refinement,

And hammered love into my heart,

That was when I met you,

My soul partner,

For an elongated time

You have continued to rip me,
Of my disoriented thoughts

Day after day,

You gave me the motive to be,

To live and to experience love,

To go on and find merriment

As long as you were there,

I just wanted to let you know,

That I could never fully express

How much I feel for you,

When I love you

Seems so simple,
Yet thorns do cut my way

How can you put into words

The power of yearning I have for you,

I Pray to God,

Conduit the muse,

And let me sound only you,

My heart beats because of you,

My soul is dead yet alive,

Because of you,

And even when the tracks of today

Seem to wither me,

My love is always stanched to you,

It is eternal within my heart,

Like constant electric bolts in my soul.

Love

Soni

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soni595 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Where is everyone? sab sogaye? 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good one!...... well done 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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yep, I dozed off reading your poem. 😆 😆 Just kidding...wonderful job again..last two lines are very cool....love the words - electron bolts 😆 😆

*reeps

PS. thank you for commenting on my post...won't call you a miser anymore 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: reeps

yep, I dozed off reading your poem. 😆 😆 Just kidding...wonderful job again..last two lines are very cool....love the words - electron bolts 😆 😆

*reeps

PS. thank you for commenting on my post...won't call you a miser anymore 😆

thanks!😛 ya I'm glad you read the reply, and I will reply full form to every post like before, cause I'm out of my sleeping mode😆

Love

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 (speechless)...


P.S. It reminded me of that song ...Because of You from Kelly Clarkson!!!!..(i lub that song)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice and very touching 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 bravo bravo!! that waz amazing!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Very nice. Very touching.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Omg Soni, all Ill say is- that was brilliant!

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