FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 35

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Posted: 3 years ago

I love how the chapter portrays realism. Both Angad and Sahiba are trying to make things work. They have not fully recovered from what life threw at them. The good thing Angad realizes Sahiba having a BFA degree will help enhance her personality and help him when they are on social events mingling. Thank god they got separated from Seerat. Now she can’t drag them in her mess. So far 1 year has gone by. 2 years left. Thank god the younger siblings know how to keep a secret.

Loved how Angad how hardworking Sahiba was for her admission. It was kind of understood he was going to use the donation to secure a spot, but heh he did what he had to: and Sahiba doing hard work proves to him he did the right thing.


I think Angad is subtly falling for Sahiba. He just doesn’t know it yet. Same for Sahiba. It’s going to take a catalyst to show them their true feelings. Wonder if Manveer and Inder plan to surprise them by a visit!

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Posted: 3 years ago

the chapter was so fabulous, eagerly waiting for next update

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Posted: 3 years ago

and lastly thank you for tagging me too :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

this chapter is surely a treat

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Posted: 3 years ago

what a wonderful update Lizzy. thanks for tagging me


as Av said above, loved the realism of the chapter. loved the struggles both are going through and not unrealistically falling straight in love. angad is still plagued by memories and he is seriously making an attempt. he has realized that he needs to take a step back and away from family. this was a much needed step for both of them


and in this they solved sahiba's education problem as well. angad is very clear in his objectives and has understood sahiba's streak of independence very well


cant wait to read more.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Superb update

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

In all candidness, I was both slightly miffed and whole lot more impressed by the realistic nature of this update (it has got nothing to do with your writing or story, they are both brilliant).

I think I was miffed because I was looking for an easy escape. An Insta love perhaps and this is ironic because I so often criticize love stories for being unrealistic 😆 I mean most love stories that are my guilty pleasure have heroes who would do just about anything for the heroine, not because it’s practical or necessary for image but out of love. Here, though Angad is doing things because it is the decent human thing to do. He understands the upheaval his actions have caused in Sahiba’s life and is working on smoothening the road ahead.


I don’t blame for being a little stuck on Seerat either, it was his first love and that is bound to leave some marks.

Eventually though, I feel this stringent routine will develop cracks because it is hard to live with a person and not be affected by them at all. Habit will evolve into love I feel.


You have so eloquently described the difficulty someone who is not privileged enough to have a good education, access to English language based learning might face. We so often taken our knowledge of English for granted when in fact it is a privilege and should be acknowledged as such. I am moving to UK for a job next month and I cannot imagine navigating the country and culture with limited English capability. As for the dress thing, I feel the same way too. As a larger woman and a Muslim, I have always dressed in Ethnic wear and it was an effort to dress in something semi western during my last two trips to UK. I hate that ethnic wear gets so much stares when in fact it is so beautiful and no less professional. This part was such a delight to read.


All in all a brilliant update 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

I loved the chapter lol. More about it later for now! It was Fabulous.

❤️Definitely waiting for you.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Wonderful chapter. Like the storyline. Curious to read future chapters on how their relationship will change from roommates to partners. Thank you for tagging me.

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Hopefully, I will finish editing the upcoming chapter soon to sate your curiousity.

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