FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 33

Originally posted by: arshisimple

Thank you for tagging me 🙏🏻🙂

Now come to this part, oh I love the growth between Sahiba and Angad! It feels like that both are entering the phase of that mushy romance!

Sorry not yet. But they will soon. One more chapter of setting up before you see the tension.

They both are comfortable with each other and of course they both want to work on this relationship so it’s beautiful 😍! The whole comparison with sandwich also makes sense !

The scene is my favorite and writing this scene was time consuming. I just posted about it in the above reply, you can check that one if you wish.

Regarding Seerat, she is delusional I mean did she even know what she has done and why Sahiba and Angad are married! In this part I really really dislike her! Jasleen is another annoying family member! I felt like she is going to take her share and then lose it and would come back again 😏

More like she does not care, or it does not matter to her. Because nobody made her responsible for her actions till now. But in Jasleen's case, as I hinted in earlier reply, she has no choice at all.

Love your writing style! Very nice and realistic/ practical 👌

Thank you! ❤️ Glad you enjoy reading it. I was surprised by the number of people I tagged and privately messaged - it was completely unexpected.

Originally posted by: ANATASIAHOPE

Loved the chapter. Can you please show Santosh and seerat regretting hurting sahiba, angad and keerat but they do not give a damn. Also can you please tag me on the next updates. Do not want to lose out on any update.

Hi. I am extremely sorry for skipping you.😒 I remember typing your name but I might have accidentally deleted it. The deleting thing happened with me in almost every message set and tagging for the current chapter.😭 But I will add you in the pm/tag list to resolve this. Thanks for bringing this up.😊

As far as Santosh and Seerat's remorse is concerned, that won't feature here as of now. But it does have a chance in the spin off, which I will start posting once I get back to regular posting.

As always, I am happy to see you around enjoying stories on the forum!🤗

It is a wonderful update. Loved the strong support for Sahiba by Angad. Loved reading it. Keep it up. 👏

thank you for tagging me.

Sahiba’s indifference with respect to Seerat is slightly bothering for me but I understand where you are pointing. Seerat is delusional, too much so. The mental gymnastics it must have taken to convince herself that she is the victim. Do such people actually exist, I wonder.

I am really looking forward to what decision Jasleen will make. The options are both tempting and would significantly change the story.

Waiting for more❤️

Ohh I so want Manbir to slap Seerat. How entitled she is .

Hi. Thank you for giving this story a chance and keeping with the updates. 🤗

Originally posted by: NidhaA

Sahiba’s indifference with respect to Seerat is slightly bothering for me but I understand where you are pointing.

In what ways does it bother you?

Seerat is delusional, too much so. The mental gymnastics it must have taken to convince herself that she is the victim. Do such people actually exist, I wonder.

Oh I have met a few people in reality. They gaslight everyone so well. In every story they utter, it is them who is the victim and the rest of the world is a villain. Such people do not do much mental exercise. For them it is simple logic of them [an individual] vs the world.

I am really looking forward to what decision Jasleen will make. The options are both tempting and would significantly change the story.

Jasleen has no choice.

Waiting for more❤️

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Originally posted by: Puchuu10

Ohh I so want Manbir to slap Seerat. How entitled she is .

I never thought about it, but it is quite an entertaining thought. Let me see if I can do something about it.😈

I think I am having a knee jerk reaction- wanting Sahiba to just silence Seerat with firm dialogues but your approach is right too. Why reply? Why engage when one knows very well that the person is beyond reasoning. Although I didn’t like Sahiba just taking the slaps, she was right in thinking that Seerat would pay several times the price of that slap.

Originally posted by: NidhaA

I think I am having a knee jerk reaction- wanting Sahiba to just silence Seerat with firm dialogues but your approach is right too. Why reply? Why engage when one knows very well that the person is beyond reasoning. Although I didn’t like Sahiba just taking the slaps, she was right in thinking that Seerat would pay several times the price of that slap.

Aah. Now I get it.

On my part, the reason why I took this approach was to explore her interiority that would give an excuse to venture further and add progress in the plot. Besides that, I think the hardest task is to go against family members because we all are conditioned to adapt with their ways. By this logic, Sahiba would struggle to challenge Seerat at least initially (just like Angad struggled to go against Garry in the show).