FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 32

To me everything have a limit and with the way seerat have treated sahiba throughout the years. I guess even sahiba have the right to be impulsive for once and listen to her heart. But she is a softy at heart

True. But right now she is numb. Speaking from personal experience, when you are this numb from certain things, then it takes time to burst. Right now she is defrosting herself.😆

I hope he does suffers very nicely.

Garry and Seerat stuck together forever is the best suffering for eachother.

Two cheaters in a pod,

eventually getting distraught;

Fighting eachother a lot.

Fret not, they will rot.

😉

That's what I hate about writing. If the story is pre-planned you don't know how to add something that can shed more light on back story of some characters. But anyways i am still interested what did Jasleen that costed manbir and inder there child.

Worry not. If there are things that no longer make it to the published drafts, I will add few extras. Plus, there is second ff, which is on hold till two more chapters of this one. I have few options available at the moment. Serial mein toh bilkul bakwas kari hai.

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Oh and characters in TMD are very poorly written.

Exactly. They have neither logic nor consistency. Kuch bhi chal raha hai.

Jasleen vargi behen hove na te kado di gharo kado hove 🙄

I am not sure what 'kado' means. I suspect two entirely different meanings and they change everything. Please explain.

Also, are you a Punjabi speaker?

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

True. But right now she is numb. Speaking from personal experience, when you are this numb from certain things, then it takes time to burst. Right now she is defrosting herself.😆

Aah yes offcourse she is defrosting currently! I hope once she defrost herself from the numbness i need her to strike back at seerat worst than seerat would ever think of.

Garry and Seerat stuck together forever is the best suffering for eachother.

Two cheaters in a pod,

eventually getting distraught;

Fighting eachother a lot.

Fret not, they will rot.

😉

YAYYYYYYY! I hope they suffer!!!

Worry not. If there are things that no longer make it to the published drafts, I will add few extras. Plus, there is second ff, which is on hold till two more chapters of this one. I have few options available at the moment. Serial mein toh bilkul bakwas kari hai.

Serial bakwas hi rahega 🤪

Exactly. They have neither logic nor consistency. Kuch bhi chal raha hai.

And they will never the logic or consistency. It's ITV meri jaan.

I am not sure what 'kado' means. I suspect two entirely different meanings and they change everything. Please explain.

Also, are you a Punjabi speaker?

Yes I am a Punjabi speaker. And boy i hate when they mix Hindi and Punjabi in movies and serials. Bhai mujhe hi Punjabi bhul jaye gi.

Kado- meaning kabki ya kabka.

Kahdo- means throw out. Abhi Punjabi me toh iske hazar matlab pata hai. 😂

You see, I had a DD National wali upbringing, which means the shows were either gold or maha bakwas - no inbetween.

So, when I see this, I wish to return to DD National of childhood.

Your wish will be fulfilled eventually. Sahiba will strike back in her own style.

Also, thanks for telling me. ❤️ I hope you do not get similar crappy language experience in the ff. I have constant doubts in my head if it is correct or not, or did I mixed multiple accents or worse made it meaningless. (I lived next to a Punjabi family for some time, and all Punjabi that I know is because of them.)

Please correct me if I write incorrectly, it is never too late to learn something.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

You see, I had a DD National wali upbringing, which means the shows were either gold or maha bakwas - no inbetween.

So, when I see this, I wish to return to DD National of childhood.

Your wish will be fulfilled eventually. Sahiba will strike back in her own style.

Also, thanks for telling me. ❤️ I hope you do not get similar crappy language experience in the ff. I have constant doubts in my head if it is correct or not, or did I mixed multiple accents or worse made it meaningless. (I lived next to a Punjabi family for some time, and all Punjabi that I know is because of them.)

Please correct me if I write incorrectly, it is never too late to learn something.

Bold- that's good! Considering you lived with them for sometime only.

I will definitely correct you whenever, wherever i can! Because if i started doing that it's gonna take me ages but the ones i come across reading will definitely be added it to my comment next time!

Edit- so i went back to the chapter and read first conversation you started. There is alot of Hindi in it 😬. But it's understandable but i will change a few things.

Thank you. It was long ago - like in the first decade of my life.

Take your time and let me know I will make changes and add credits to you. Google translation is hardly helpful.

PS: not sure what accent people in Ludhiana speak. I think the conversation is in multiple Punjabi dialects.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Thank you. It was long ago - like in the first decade of my life.

Take your time and let me know I will make changes and add credits to you. Google translation is hardly helpful.

I understand i will try to see what i can work with lol.

PS: not sure what accent people in Ludhiana speak. I think the conversation is in multiple Punjabi dialects.

Yea, like Punjab state is divided into three regions. Majha, Malwa and Doaba. Punjabi differs from region to region. Ludhiana people will speak the Malwa region Punjabi! I live in the majha region but I speak Punjabi of Doaba and majha mix 😂 .

Bold.

Thanks Lizzy for the PM. Sorry got to read the chapter now. What an amazing chapter. Absolutely power packed

I loved the way angad and sahiba complimented each other. They have actually started behaving as perfectly married couples when they can pick up thread of conversions effortlessly.

Loved how angad had her back when she was talking to santosh and how he let her choose the way she wants to behave with her family.

Loved it that they will go away for some time which is really needed as they need to start at somewhere. The way angad equated his marriage with the sandwiches was unexpected but welcome thought to be honest

Now coming to seerat. What a self centred, selfish brat. Absolutely can't see anyone getting any importance than her. She has the audacity to expect angad treating her well after everything she did? And slapping sahiba and even justifying it. God Garry is going to bear the brunt of it now

What did Jasleen did to manbir and indar. Would love to read that. I think seerat will do one more kaand and Jasleen ke 2 options bhi chale jaane Wale hai

Overall enjoyed it thoroughly

Thank you for tagging me 🙏🏻🙂

Now come to this part, oh I love the growth between Sahiba and Angad! It feels like that both are entering the phase of that mushy romance! They both are comfortable with each other and of course they both want to work on this relationship so it’s beautiful 😍! The whole comparison with sandwich also makes sense ! Regarding Seerat, she is delusional I mean did she even know what she has done and why Sahiba and Angad are married! In this part I really really dislike her! Jasleen is another annoying family member! I felt like she is going to take her share and then lose it and would come back again 😏

Love your writing style! Very nice and realistic/ practical 👌

Loved the chapter. Can you please show Santosh and seerat regretting hurting sahiba, angad and keerat but they do not give a damn. Also can you please tag me on the next updates. Do not want to lose out on any update.

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Thanks Lizzy for the PM. Sorry got to read the chapter now. What an amazing chapter. Absolutely power packed

Hi Ashviniv. It is fine, we all have things outside of the forum. I am happy that you enjoyed the update.

I loved the way angad and sahiba complimented each other. They have actually started behaving as perfectly married couples when they can pick up thread of conversions effortlessly.

Because they had grounded themselves and their marriage with few rules, which makes it easier to establish the routine.

Loved how angad had her back when she was talking to santosh and how he let her choose the way she wants to behave with her family.

Angad is attentive because he dislikes Mongas and they pose a threat to his world order - they already messed it once. Plus, he is aware of Sahiba's vulnerabilities, which he fears might hinder his plans.

Loved it that they will go away for some time which is really needed as they need to start at somewhere. The way angad equated his marriage with the sandwiches was unexpected but welcome thought to be honest

I had thought a lot about that particular scene. It took me two attempts (excluding the first draft) to write it the way I wanted. I feel this is one of the few ways the couple could relate. Sahiba gets to work in a kitchen without being interrogated or taunted by anyone and Angad is attentive to it. I like to think of it as a domestic act in otherwise a very rich, joint family. And we humans, tend to notice unusual things around us.

Now coming to seerat. What a self centred, selfish brat. Absolutely can't see anyone getting any importance than her. She has the audacity to expect angad treating her well after everything she did? And slapping sahiba and even justifying it. God Garry is going to bear the brunt of it now

Yes. All is true. She thought everything will be easy for her like it always was. She always felt wanted and never had to struggle for herself- not even in the toughest times. So, yeah she would suffer along with Garry.

What did Jasleen did to manbir and indar. Would love to read that. I think seerat will do one more kaand and Jasleen ke 2 options bhi chale jaane Wale hai

I am definitely going write it - if not as the part of this ff or the spin-off, then as an extra.

And no, Seerat won't do, she can't do it. There is already a reality check awaiting her, which will be disclosed in the spin-off.

Overall enjoyed it thoroughly

Thank you for reading this. I am always grateful for every single reading. ❤️