RaYa SS - Accidental Soulmates [Part 4 - Page 13] - Page 2

Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15

Yayy! So finally we have YOU writing on Balh3! Congratulations for that firstly 🥳

Second, this is what we exactly wanted, finally we have Ram Priya at a stage where they started from in S2, a lifelong, loveless marriage, and what happens later, we all know.

But I really wanted a sorted, clear Kriti, unlike what we got in today's ep, an out of the blue possesive girlfriend

And I loved your take here, brilliant writing, left me wanting for more❤️🤗

Also, please do write second part, with priya saying yes, and also mentioning as to how yuvi dumped her like this exactly, the proper truth

Looking forward 😃

You make me blush! ☺️

Apart from giving Ram & Priya a clean start, I also didn't want to see Kriti being villainized. She has been shown as an independent, practical girl (I did not like when she fed Ram the idea of a contract marriage though, how easily she was ready to take advantage of Priya's mental state) - so it wouldn't have been hard for her to see that Ram will always put his mom's wishes first. And Kriti knows by now that Ram's mom clearly doesn't like her. Making Kriti initiate the break up was the one way I could think of to fix both these issues 😆

Second part, I still don't know yet..but the I'll keep the wheels turning in my head. It might just throw up some more ideas 😆

I like this version more

This is so well written 👏 This is how it should have played out in the show: where seeing Ram-Kriti and right after that Ram-Priya makes it difficult to relate to the thought process of either of the couple. I am glad Kriti in your story is sorted about her priorities. The dialogues, the cliffhanger are brilliant❤️

About Ram-Priya, I do not like how Ram saddled a heartbroken Priya in his situation, so secretly, I want Priya of your story to say no 😆 I would love to read more if you choose to continue. I am quite sure, you Ram-Priya would turn out to be soulmates <3

Thanks for the tag, Dazzle! 🤗

Awesome start

Continue soon

Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Aww such a lovely way to portray the character and their inner turmoil 👍🏼🤗. You made Ram and Priya make sense and that is far most impossible task with the current show 😆. So thank you for writing such a lovely shot. Do continue if you can and thank you for the tag .

Honestly, I’m still struggling to understand the Ram and Priya of this season - such a hotchpotch really 😆 Priya is only slightly better written than Ram. This is the season for senseless slapstick comedy it seems (also useful for hiding all the problematic stuff 🤪)

So so beautifully written. Ram's breakdown scene was penned so well. Brilliant.👏

Please continue this?!

This is awesome!!❤️❤️I am sure BALH writers will copy at least some of it.

Not only does he keep his handkerchief for her, but she too.

How do you keep your beautiful lines for us, thank you

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

👏👏 Wonderful!!

This is so so so much better than what is being shown... I can imagine it playing, both of them would nail this scene.

If I may make a request, could you please make this into a short story? 🤗🤗

Thank you!! ❤️

@bold: Are you a Legilimens by any chance? 😆 I'm working on the second part, but honestly speaking I don't where it'll end. So a short story is definitely a possibility 😉

Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

❤️

Thank you for reading 😊