Pandya Store | Episode Discussion #243 - Page 87

Originally posted by: Saumyas23

They deliberately screw up screenplay when shivi are in narration....taking all the emotional connect out from it ( only show an anxious/ jealous Raavi and an abusive Shiva, for their part)...no love, longing to be together, efforts to make things correct for themselves, caring for each other even unknowingly.... Emotional/kismat connect (especially from Shiva's side)---> people are looking for this

Instead of showing good emotional shivi narration when their story is in focus....you throw to show all sasta random others in their place at OTT level ( bhabhi dhakosla, piddhi prerna, villains, kanta, neighbour hood,) for major part of time .....do they contribute in building emotional connect with audience in the story???

Showing Shiva raavi (sans villains/ third angle) for major part of the time was the justice required which you failed to deliver.

This is how you frame the narrative to say shiva-raavi don't bring trps.

When piddhi wedding drama was going on....no chiku pareshaani was to be seen.... Here in shivi story, instead of elaborating for Mithu-Raavi which is required, you are elaborating for chiku-bhabhima ( what is this twisted narration? Because people are empathising with Mithu-raavi.... Want to see them so instead let's use this audience demand for chiku-bhabhima ( whose story fails to connect just coz of bhabhima alone, your writing and her acting). ----> all this takes away the audience's hold

What was the need to waste time on ' chalo Ishq ladaen' dance, chopping off 'accidental haldi', Shiva only taking the haldi to gobarr's place ( here you could have shown comic gombi aur postive shweta alone messing to support Shiva raavi)

When kidnapping scene recreation was shown( audience likes it)....why didn't you pickup from their?? Why no Shiva longing for raavi trying to figure why he feels connected to her ( in a serious and intense manner and not comedy) ? Why no intelligent questions/ investigation done by Shiva for his past years???

I refuse to believe that writers and executives are unware of this audiences demand. They are so good at screenplaying villains/ third angles.... Why not the most loved jodi???

Do you even watch the episodes? 🙄🙄

Raavi is very much shown to be having an emotiknal connection. She has been having it since the IVF/Divorce kaand. Its Shiva who completely lacks any emotional connection with her or the child. He lost it during SM track from August to December of last year. and never got it back.

So lets not demean, disrespect abd devalue Raavi’s efforts and her emotionsl connection. Though I feel she should leave him for good for her and Mitthu’s future. This guy will be a liability for her if she is stick with him. But then Choubays have made her lack self respect, self love and most importantly she has become a doormat🙄

https://youtu.be/SF1fWX_9o3Q

Originally posted by: mpks1

Do you even watch the episodes? 🙄🙄

Raavi is very much shown to be having an emotiknal connection. She has been having it since the IVF/Divorce kaand. Its Shiva who completely lacks any emotional connection with her or the child. He lost it during SM track from August to December of last year. and never got it back.

So lets not demean, disrespect abd devalue Raavi’s efforts and her emotionsl connection. Though I feel she should leave him for good for her and Mitthu’s future. This guy will be a liability for her if she is stick with him. But then Choubays have made her lack self respect, self love and most importantly she has become a doormat🙄

I have said it's lacking from Shiva's side.

Their mutual connect in the overall story is lacking.... Their emotional connect / buildup is not given time on screen in shivi tracks.... They use Raavi's emotions to highlight humiliation for her.

After kidnapping recreation they should not have shown Shiva just excited about his marriage to arushi without recalling what he felt for raavi in kidnap recreate.

Originally posted by: Lauzi

https://youtu.be/SF1fWX_9o3Q

Please some one throw this gobar in kua.

Piddi prerna gets married is confirmed.

How did they show piddi marrying prerna? Prerna is still married to Shivank.

How casually they are showing:

Man is mentally sick, has memoryloss - show him get married.
Woman went through fraud wedding is separated but still legally married/well doesn’t matter -show her getting married.

Choubey Ben, ansari, khan Saab illegal 2nd shaadi karwayenge. no morals, no sensitivity. No story , only crass bakwas.

Familydrama 😡

Next morning

All of them come to the aangan with packed bags.
Shesh asks, “ hum kahan jaarahe hain, picnic or jaa rahe hain kya?”

Bhabima says, “ chup chaap jahan le jaacrahe hain chalo, no sawaal- jawaab ok?”

Rishita says, “ Maa, aap ye kya karwa rahe ho?”

Suman sats, “ chupkar, Kanta ne abb tak poore mohalle mei abb tak khabar faila di hogi ki hanare gjar mei function thaa, sab deewaron pe kaan lagake baite honge, chup chapp jo mein keh rahi hoon, karo”

All of them ready to leave, Bhabima asks Bailbuddhi to open the door , just the 4-5 ladies who were eavesdropping at the front door, stumble and fall when the door was opened.

Kandyas are shocked buy not Suman. She looks at her nalayak sons and bahus, with a I told you all so expression.

Kanta and other mohalle aunties smile and looked like deers caught in the headlights.

Suman asks, “ what? Kya kar rahi hai Kanta yahan?”

Kanta says, “ kuch nahi hum toh yahan se guzar rahe te bas”

Suman says, “ socha Suman ke darwaaze le chipkali ki tarah chipak jaate hain”

Kanta says, “accha mazzak kar leti hai Suman”

Bhabima says, “ maa toh mazaaki hai Kaki, abb aap apne gjar ki chipkali baniye naa, hume late ho raha hai, summer vacation par jaa rahe hain”

Rishita says Goa

Bhabima says Mumbai

Raavi says Mussoorie

Dev says Kashmir

Comedy BGM starts

Suman manages, “ matlab pehle jaayenge Goa, wahan todha swimming karenge, phir uske baad jaayenge Mussoorie, uske baad Mumbai phir Kashmir pahunchayenge phir ghar aajaayenge”

All of them nod with a fake smile on their face.

Bhabima sats, “ chalo maa”

All of them push aside Kanta and mohalle aunties, go outside to get on the van arranged to take them,

Suman says tata bye bye to the mohalle aunties and one by one Kandyas get inside the van.

Bhabima locks the house and the last one to get on the van. They afain say bye to the mohalle aunties and Gautam asks the driver to go to the alley at the back of the house.

Mohalle aunties scold Kanta for wasting their time.

One says, “ arrey kuch bhi baat kar rahi hai Kanta tum, kahan hai shaadi yahan, sab log toh ghoomne gaye, chalo kaali fokat mei tome waste karwa diya”

They all leave.

When the van goes through the alley, all of them ask the driver to stop the vehicle.

He asjs, “ yahsn kyun gaadi roke? Itna toh paidal aajaate”

Suman says, “ hum toh hai naa bathroom jaate toh bus arrange karke hi jaate, tum ko kya lena dena hum kitna dhoor jaaye, kitna laas jaaye”

Gol maal BGM starts,

All of them get down and enter Kandya Nuwas through the back door. They forget Suman, Gautam and Krush comeback with her wheel chair and get her off the van.

One by one everyone is jumping into the house and finally they all assemble in the aangan.

Suman says, “ abb khelo, jotna shaadi shaadi khelna hai toh khelo par khabardaar awaaz neeche rakhna, bilkul, bilkul, awaaz mat karna ki bahar sunayi de”

Gombi says, “ Maa, mein woh kaam niptake aata hoon”

About to leave but Bhabima stops him, “ Gombi, Gombi, Gombi, suno mein kya keh rahi hoon, baachon ko saat mei leke jaa”

Gautam says, “ Dhara mein wahsn situation sambhalne ke lite jaa raha hokn ti bacchon ko kause saat mei leke jaaoon”

Bhabima says, “ tum donon teek se sambhaloge, jaao”

Gautam asks, “ tu mujge dara rahi hai ya hosla”

Bhabima curs him off, keeos her hands in her hips, says assertively, “ abb dara rahi hoon, leke jaa”

Gautam says, “ teek hai mein bacvhon ko leke jaata hoon”

Bhabima says to others, chalo, chalo sab jaldi tayyar ho jaao.

All of them disperse and take their bags with them.

Last scene - This scene had comedy BGM

Bailbuddhi is trying different sherwanis but nothing fits him. Raavi quietly places one in the bed when he is not seeing and leaves from there. Finally he sees the sherwani Raavi left on the bed and tries it on. It fits him and he gets flashes of their first marriage, when Raavi and him reluctantly get married. He looks at himself on the mirror. Raavi is anxiously waiting to see if he is going to wear the sherwani she left on the bed and he remembers something.

End of Episode

Precap is the same as the past 3 days

Throw some family members in jail for supporting bigamy- especially, Shiva, Bhabima, Bhagodi Maa and Gobarwaali.

Idiotic writers Shaadi aur husband-wife relationship ko mazaak banake rakha hai
They think everything is either comedy or R- rated. There is no true feelings from anyone except Raavi, even that has been mocked with a comedy BGM, her pain is mocked. They show her to be jealous and insecure when its not her fault at all.

How do they expect the TRPs to go up if they mock everything under the sun. Ktna sasta nasha phoknkte hai Choubays aur baaki saare creatives ki aise gobar tracks likhte hain😡

https://www.indiaforums.com/article/pandya-store-shiva-to-run-from-his-wedding-to-marry-arushi_197608

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Originally posted by: Lauzi

https://www.indiaforums.com/article/pandya-store-shiva-to-run-from-his-wedding-to-marry-arushi_197608

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Ooh .... I had just fell in their trap and had begun to imagine this (below) alternate storyline. But.... My bad....

They are as twisted and screwed as ever..... Don't know how much good is in store for us..

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Current track they have botched up big time ( all failed creativity to attract audience)

How would it be if they show.. Shiva now marries Raavi just to find out why he keeps getting glimpses of Raavi and feels connected to her? ( Coz she is now divorced from dev🙄) And making all the efforts towards their relationship, feels more and more drawn towards her, slowly realising his love for her ( he can continue to play fun Tashan / nok jhok with raavi which is their beautiful part, but with toned down rudeness )...While Raavi continues with her efforts to get his memory back. it can be a raavi arushi face off. Gobarr will hang on and try to get shiva for whatever reasons ( a danger lurking for excitement). Mithu- Shiva and mithu-shiva-raavi bonding being higlighted. All this culminating in Shiva regaining his memory and shivi happily reuniting forever.

But for this drama to successfully attract audience, first they need to show (screenplay) Shiva not caring for gobarr, running away from gobarr ( trying to palla jhado from her all the time) with comedy bgms and not make raavi jealous. Screenplay should glorify Raavi Shiva ( as husband wife) bond.

https://youtu.be/mPPEXEq7XJg