TERE BIN -Yumna Zaidi - Wahaj Ali DT#124 - Page 29

Originally posted by: Kiwicy

4 kisko chahiye. Ek ho tab bhi chal jaayega.

Aree ek hi baat kar rahi hun. These 4 charge a lottt. A-listers hai ye.

Originally posted by: FireSafireFiree

. Also because of Haya TB is actually very memorable!

Haya alone managed to irritate all of us to a point we went crazy 😂😂

Without Haya TB may not be as this great 😂😂

Let’s appreciate Behaya 😂😂

🤣🤣true. But it becomes toooo irritating at some points.

Originally posted by: Snowflakes_04

Also whatever murtasim has done like that jump kaand, or leaving meerub in her parents house or shouting at her was done after being pushed by meerub a lot of time, he didn't do any of these things on his own, it was his reaction rather than action, and every character in tb has been doing grey things on their own not being pushed or something like that except murtasim but it doesn't mean murtasim is not a grey character definitely he is, he has his own set of faults in him and wahaj also said they had tried to kept murtasim's character logical, So ig that's where yumna was coming from 🤷🏼‍♀️

his action actually was shown! Bcs whole drama is from Murtasam POV.

It’s not from Meerab. (At some extent)

so his explanation was shown in more logical way

but of course all those above has some shades of grey. We can’t deny that!

Originally posted by: Sera-high123

Aree ek hi baat kar rahi hun. These 4 charge a lottt. A-listers hai ye.

This I know. Toh ye paagal log leap kyun le rahe hain jab paise na ho toh. 🤔🤔😵‍💫😵‍💫

Originally posted by: FireSafireFiree

. I don’t think that happened!

She is getting offers and she is busy writing!

Her initial episode is good, and there is a grip in the story

other than 1 blunder and stupidity of Haya and lack of logic.

hopefully she will improve on that in next project

She had a good concept in mind and she knows to write romance and couple scenes. She lacks in weaving story and portrayal of emotions.. She better work on subtleties required in a story telling..

She also gets carried away and focuses only on one character.. The show would have been more enjoyable if she had given depth to Meerub's characterisation too.. Hope if and when she writes her next script she gives equal focus to both the leads and other characters...

Har baar swag or looks of leads se kaam nahi chalega😆

Originally posted by: Kiwicy

🤣🤣true. But it was becomes toooo irritating at some points.

Originally posted by: nightingale1234

She had a good concept in mind and she knows to write romance and couple scenes. She lacks in weaving story and portrayal of emotions.. She better work on subtleties required in a story telling..

She also gets carried away and focuses only on one character.. The show would have been more enjoyable if she had given depth to Meerub's characterisation too.. Hope if and when she writes her next script she gives equal focus to both the leads and other characters...

Har baar swag or looks of leads se kaam nahi chalega😆

Next she will write evil saas. 😱😱😱Soch kar hi dar lag raha hain. Toh Bachke rahiyo.

Originally posted by: nightingale1234

She had a good concept in mind and she knows to write romance and couple scenes. She lacks in weaving story and portrayal of emotions.. She better work on subtleties required in a story telling..

She also gets carried away and focuses only on one character.. The show would have been more enjoyable if she had given depth to Meerub's characterisation too.. Hope if and when she writes her next script she gives equal focus to both the leads and other characters...

Har baar swag or looks of leads se kaam nahi chalega😆

she copied this character arc! And didn’t build upon it. Which I would say cheating.


So needs to proper think from each character POV and put some logic so the flow is smooth.

The transition from one story to another , and her twists is been horrible.

she really need to work on twist.

TB would have been a master pice if she included the above.

One thing I like:

1. Her characters

2. Romantic scene

3. The ups and downs of episode. (She gave 1 happy chapter 1 sad chapter. That was really good.

4. Fast pace of story

Originally posted by: FireSafireFiree

. Wish Behaya was played by some other actor! We probably appreciated the acting 😂😂

Hmmm. May be. We would've appreciated haya more then. Who knows?

Didn't that Marie lady say yumna and wahaj have another show in winter? Kahin TB ke success ke baad kadwani uncle ne Yumna ,wahaj aur nooran madam ko firse sign tho nahi karliya?