Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 17

Originally posted by: Monkish

Koi aise rokta hai kya?? Rhythm el dum sahi pakde hai. Dev and Vidhi are from different planet in your universe. Absolutely love the chemistry and the boldness Vidhi's character has, not the sehmi hui ladki.

Yes they are multiverse videv.

Sorry this is my first ff.. Got cold feet..

Hopefully morning after will thaw me🙈

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Thanks sns23.. I was a bit apprehensive about the intimacy part so toned it down. My version of videv is a bit contemporary..they believe in living in the moment.

I thought it was perfect. And living in the moment is much needed. I love it!

Very well written and so vivid.

ViDev are so realistic, I loved their progression is so organic.

The teasing, chasing each other and yearning has come out beautifully... scenes are paced well.

Kudos!

Very bad! You stopped at the wrong spot! Eargly waiting for the next update now ❤️🥺

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Chapter -13 The Treat

Read it twice ❤️❤️Rachana looks so nice in non vidhi clothes

The progression and pace is amazing. Why do i have feeling they are about to hit a hurdle after their confession

Looking forward to the next part

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Yes they are multiverse videv.

Sorry this is my first ff.. Got cold feet..

Hopefully morning after will thaw me🙈

Now need the next update really quick. The desperation is not for the hot stuff, but for the story progression. I can't wait to know where the characters are headed to. Loving their journey.

Continue writing please..loving it ❤️

loved it, mere videv ek ho gye, now excited for next part, their reactions after doing the deed in the morning. ☺️

Uff!! It's so wholesome. I really, really like your version of Dev and Vidhi and they never disappoint! The chapter was bang on! Loved the after thoughts of Vidhi after she walks back to her room, it was really well put, the emotions, the picture, everything. Teasing part in the study room and in the lift is my favorite bit. Their progression is organic and that's the best thing about it. Nothing looks forced.❤️

Please update real soon, I am too excited to know their interaction the morning after.☺️

I have re-read past couple of updates endless times that I now remember them scene by scene.

Aapke ye ff ne mere sare romantic neurons Jo hibernation main the , inko wapis activate kar diya hai.😂😂😂

Please update soon.

Also, do you have any other work, I would like to read it.