What is working in show?
Samrat look and his attitude and charisma as business man even in late 40s (With 20 year leap i assumme hes 45 to 48 years)
Sam and Pradhyuman relationship foster son. How i wish this Pradhyuman was related to Saransh he should have been Saransh son than the emotional bond would set screen on fire like Rudra Sraansh bonding
Whats not working in show?
Many things not working in leap
1) Samrat does not look like father of a 19 year old girl or 25 year old Prem or 23 year old Pradhyuman uncle/foster dad or 20 year old Mahima foster dad later. At most 5 to 10 year old kid is okkk like Ruhi or Sranash
2) Nayan no way looks like mother of 2 kids who are 20 year olds again 5 to 10 year olds were okkk
3) Story as usual is rinse and repeat bichadna than angst than come together nothing new. I would say i wish Pradhyuman was Samrat elder brother Sarnash son just to get that emotional bond going than a friends son. This absolute no connection love towards foster kids is unbelievable
4) Ideally this Sabharwal fellow should have been alive to make more angst for Samrat once they meet after 20 years
5) The new leads are bland and have no chemistry or anything. Best part new leads look so big they look bigger than Samrat/Nayan in age especially that Mahima looks too big than Samrat/Nayan in age
6) Ideally this Pradhyuman should fall for Samrat daughter, why is Sabharwal daughter after him? Than that emotional bonding scenes where father daughter interact without knowing they are father daughter would come out. I mean Pradhyuman should love Kashvi Samrat daughter not Mahma. Pairing is all wrong.
7) Easily CVs could have made Samrat Nayan like Bajaj Prerana iconic older couple with big kids. But sorry to say all 4 kids are too big unlike Kasauti zndagi kids. Atleast keep Samrat daughter as kid 10 year old and let others be 20 years or whatever who will watch them anyways and their stupid stories? Ideally a 10 year leap would be good with Sam daughter real one as 10 year old Sabharwal and other kids as 18 to 20 year olds. Honestly who cares whether a 20 year old Kashvvi misses her father Samrat. Audience would prefer a 5 or 10 year old kid miss her father Samrat not a 20 year old anyways
8) I mean can you imagine Sam who looks so young will call a girl whose same age as daughter or beti. That new Kashvi girl looks elder than Samrat by age if they stand with each other. Samrat and she look like siblings. It will be so funny watching her call Sam as daddy. To make it emotional scene a 10 yaer old daughter would do. Ideally i wanted a 10 year old son for Samrat than daughter this time. Like a naughty Sranash who gives love tips to daddy and date tips would be fun to watch.
9) even more funnier sam daughter wants to be IAS what a joke? Atleast Sam was a singer like Rudra Khurana. I mean with a great singer like Sam his daughter is IAS not singer. Hoping Prem becomes singer atleast. Honestly Nayat looked like Rudra Khurana family but this new gang looks like new serial no connection no interest. We love Samrat because hes Rudra son. Cannot say same about Prem or Kashvi or other extra Samrat foster kids. Instead of such stupid story and leap Samrat Revathi Aliya story was million times better the revelation and tashan and heart breaks. They could have got Sarnash and Ruh and had a billiant story of past revelation and heart break and angst and revenge.
I can go on and on on all thie issues in show anyways it was best they took older people for Samrat Nayan than Abrar and Sargun its looking very odd for them as 20 year 25 year old parents. They do not look late 40s or 50s
Once Samrat Nayan leave show after few weeks or months this show will crash land more worst than any bhagyas as leads are bland and story is rinse repeat. Anyways with this leap only Samrat was there 2 mins who will watch other cast for 18 mins and Sam only for 2 min lolipop. Better watch sam Nayan scenes on twitter or hotstar and skip TV is what most viewers will do now
This is like showing 2 minute instant noode Samrat and givigng 18 mins sideys story who cares who wants?
In this story somewhere emotional connect not there. Thats because in starting story there is no relationship properly established between Samrat and his family If you observe any serial thats successful the bond between male lead and most of his family is established be it father, mother, sister, brother etc to some extent. Because large part of serial is mostly in male lead home so establishing his bond with his family is important. Here in YHC2 it jumped direct to hate story than when that did not work to love story. So emotional connect missing like happen in YHC1. Any serial will become hit only if in first 3 to 4 months you can establish emotional connect of Male lead female lead with the main family staying in serial. Here main family is Choudharys now and Khuranas(Samrat) but they are no way there or shown no bonding between ML and his family members. Its so funny to watch that hardly Samrat and Aliya talk to each other like siblings. They only keep arguning or fighting or Aliya stays in back in most scenes. If shes front its to fight with Samart and audience not liking it. Usually audience like even if step sister and brother they should have emotional bonding only than audience accept.
Viewers do not really care for ML establishing chemistry or relationship much with FL family. Like Samrat trying to have relationship with Nayan family is going flop. Audience is not interested in watching samrat relationship with Ishani or Chintu or Patti or Malathi etc truly. Audience is not interested in Mansi too as shes over bearing. Audience not interested in Prem too as kid dialogue delivery not good. They could instead just bring back old Saransh as Prem actually it would have much better imapct as Prem. No audience interested in this kid Prem too. So whose remaining is only Revathi and Aliya. But problem is writer has disappeared Revathi to God knows where. What was need to show Revathi trying to kill Malathi first only?
They should first get back Revathi and establish a relationship of her with Samrat. Revathi must have max time space after Nayantara with Samrat. Aliya should get next max screen space in seral as Samart sister. Till may be Ruhi, Saransh are reintroduced later as his real family. No one interested in Iyer family at all. Yes they can provide some momentary comedy relief thats all. Better to phase out this chintu, mintu, patti, malathi, ishani from khurana home and get Samrat adopted family than real family later on show because only Samrat family whether adopted family or real family can truly get any emotional connect with audience. Who cares for these chntu, mintu, patti, ishani, not audience for sure. What is real story? Samrat was stolen by revathi and brought up as Choudhary. Story in YHC2 should be how Samart comes to know how hes stolen and about his real family. And how Revath betrayed his family etc. Where is Ruhi, saransh etc instead some iyer family who has no ABC with Samart is being pushed into audience threaoart as his family. Why should audience know about Iyers. Samart story is with Choudharays than Khuranas. Larter you can introduce that Arman and his child to create havoc in Samart life. Than Yuvraja nd his son etc Who cares for Iyers no one not audience for sure. Iyer has nothing to do with Samrat or Rudra Khurana or Preesha for audience to feel anything for them
Mohit can remain on show ashes best friend of Samart but he should have been paired with Aliya or Ruhi later actually. It was very bad idea to pair him with Ishani. If Mohit marries he should marry Aliya or Ruhi ideally. If Sarnash comes back make him pair with Aliya and Mohit with Ruhi Khurana. Audience not interested in Ishani being paired with Mohit. Because Mohit is best friend of Samrat his wife should be one of Samrat sisters not Nayantara sister. Like i said audience do not care about Ishani and Mohit love story. But if Ruhi Khurana paired to Mohit than audience will give importance to pair as shes Rudra daughter and Samrat sister. Aliya can be paired to saransh actually they are same age and in childhood liked each other. And Revathi should have lot of story and time with Samrat atleast. Only than when truth comes out impact in story if you now establish relation of Samart with his adopted family. No ones intersted in Iyer family members or Mohit Ishani love story. Get Mohit Aliya or Ruhi as pair. You have already shown Mohit hates Aliya so now pariing him with Aliya may not work pair him with Ruhi Khurana later.
Writer has messed up a great story badly in YHC2
First establish relationship of Samart with Revathi and Aliya and Nayan. All scenes should have these 4 people not Iyer family. Only than this serial will get some interest
1) This story is going too fast and illogical - In January Samrat hated Nayan tara and married her to punish her for troubling his sister aliya
By feb 20 hes got his mom Revathi arrested and hes warned Aliya that he will throw her out of house. In 50 days will anyone go from loving his mom sister like crazy to nayan changed me
Chameleon also will not change colors as fast as Samrat
Somehow this Samrat from bad boy mamas boy to nayans lover has happened too fast to be believable
It should have taken atleast 4 to 5 months for Revathi to push Malathi off stairs
2) Scenes are disjointed and confusing
Kabhi sam hates prem kabhi hes carrying him fast asleep kabhi hes saving him
kabhi aliya is in love with mansi next minute shes laughing at her plight
previous scene Sam is warning aliya next scenes both are talking happily like siblngs
Kabhi nayan and sam fighting next scene both are all nice and lovey dovey eyes
What thee confusion either an person can hate someone ya love someone dono ek saath confuses viewers
3) Innocence is missing in Nayat that Rusha had
Not sure why? May be way scenes are written or they look big now compared to 3 years back
The innocence when Preesha talked
The puppy face Rudra who looked more like a kid himself than Saransh
That innocence missing in Nayat
4) Story has no logic at all unlike initial Rusha days
So Samrat married Nayantara to take revenge
Instead now hes got full Nayan family at his home and Revathi is missing
Aliya whose his sister for last 27 years is being treated like starnger in her own home
Its like its Iyer and mansi home not Samrat Khurana home
Somehow its tough to believe that Revathi Aliya ka 27 years relation with Samrat can end in 2 months thanks to Nayan and Iyer
This is where real story went llogical that someone who loves his mom sis so much can just forget ignore them 2 months later unbelievable actually
If Nayan or Iyers had done something great for Samrat phir bhi we can believe but they have not done anything that aliya revathi never did for him for him to go bonkers in love for iyer famil and nayan tara
5) The heart break and shock is more if you truly trust and love a person
If Samrat hero worshiped his mom revathi and had great realtion with aliya and than one fine day he knows revtahi killed rudra preesha his family and stole him the impact of revelaation would be tremendous
Now Samrat is already no longer bothered about revtahi or aliya tho when truth of preesha rudra murder comes out impact is not much on samart or even aliya samrat or revthai samrat relation as its already gone kaput
Your ikka you have spoiled in story
The revelation and Samrat reaction and aliya him and revthi him scene after that would have been most powerful scenes of the serial
You have spoilt it by making samrat not caring much abour revthi or aliya after marrying nayan
If Samrat had great loving relationship wth his revtahi mom and sis aliya than when rusha murder revealed it would have made impact now that also scene no one will bother because already relation is spoiled between samrat and aliya revathi toh kya faraq padega
6) Fact Samrat loved mansi married her is not right. For Rudra preesha was his first love and first wife
For Samrat mansi was first love first wife
7) Rudra had a proper family a loving step mom a narcissist over bearing dad a snobbish bhabhi a elder brother he worshipped whose child was saransh a bhabhis sister. Its not like he only hero worshipped preesha family mom dad sisters. Because emotional scenes look good with own family not wife family.
Matlab imagine samrat emotional scene with revthai if their bonding had been shown over next 6 months when truth that she stole him from rusha came out. Now that scene will not have any impact on viewer
Or imagie Aliya and Samrat had good bonding as brother sister and aliya gets to know one day that her mom kidnapped him from his parents the scene where she feels guilty about her mom doing and consoles Samrat or ask him sorry on behalf of her mom or family for all they did to his parents and him
8) Characters too one dimensional,, samrat all family bad and nayan all family very good no grey shades
Maza tab ayega if malathi is one who kidnapped baby ruhan aka samrat - it will be twist worth watching
It would uplift this serial
Too many errors in story if i keep lsting it it will take 10 more pages so i stop now
Edited by myviewprem - 2 years ago