TERE BIN - Yumna Zaidi - Wahaj Ali DT 49 "Murtasim Ki Biwi" - Page 91

Originally posted by: NINALOGY

She could have written better than this. Inconsistency is on peak.

Oh no..

She can't.

I was stupid and if you expected from her than you also.

Look its our mistake that we imagined her calibre beyond words while she is novice..

She herself seem to be brought up in a very conservative manner as well as protected first by her fatger than her husband.

So she doesn't have strong idea of how a strong women will.behave when put into situations in which she usually put meerub.

In same way,she always dreamt of an image of a perfect man,she herself is fan of murtasim,so he is not human but a god like cteature she imagined as perfection,its nothing to do with any reality or real basis...

So this writing in itself is absurd.

There is no logic at all..

Yeah she weighed sympathy and liking factor towards murtasim by writing him in detail be it his flaws,his goodness,eveilness,anger becoz she herself in love with his ML.

But she couldn't do that for meerub..

Originally posted by: Alizba63

Is that the writers background? I'm not surprised. How did I miss this?

Agree to the bolded part

We have better writers here neha can be the writer 😉

Her work is 😍

Awww!!! That is so so kind. You made my day!!
🤗

Originally posted by: -INAAYAT-

More than defenders, speaking for myself, I try to understand where she's coming from

There's no point in defending any character from this show because there is no moral ground for grey characters like they have here

Pls count me in.

My friends who are neither in twitter nor in IF seem to be enjoying this show a lot more! So I am now leaning towards a little detox from social media!

Originally posted by: Neha_S

Thank you for reading Mahi!! And your lovely commentary is always awesome. 🤗

Well...iss bar ke comments lovely to nahi the!

I was kinda worried you know ...ki tumhe bura lag jayega 😅 bura na manna neha..all those comments were nothing against your writing. It was all towards the characters! But I'm still sorry agar mere ek bhi comment se tumhe personally bura laga ho!

And if anything, i would say your way of writing is just sooooo good smooth and brilliant, that it goes right under a reader's skin and gets reaction like those out from them. Make them react like all these happening for real. ❤️

Originally posted by: NINALOGY

Ladaiii

I guess healthy discussion is happening. Which is fine, otherwise Ma shaa Allah sy TBA of IF is super amazing and super sweet

I have met some really amazing people here so I agree to this

https://twitter.com/ramshakanwal04/status/1644327736582742017?s=20

Gorgeous, cutiesss

Originally posted by: arshi1983

Pls count me in.

My friends who are neither in twitter nor in IF seem to be enjoying this show a lot more! So I am now leaning towards a little detox from social media!

People around me are enjoying it as well. They treat it as any other entertainer, watch reels, shorts and done. It's us obsessed ones who are doomed , and yes a detox would make us enjoy it better

Originally posted by: NINALOGY

Ladaiii

I guess healthy discussion is happening. Which is fine, otherwise Ma shaa Allah sy TBA of IF is super amazing and super sweet

Well mujhe to clearly ek do post direct taunts nazar aye!

Plus hum jo bohut dino se hein, purane members hein, hum ladenge bhi nahi.

Hum ek dusre ke saath aise jor chukhe hein ki acche se samajh te hein ek dusre ko.

But i guess jo naye arahe unko...thori problem hogi match khane mei...shayed dhire dhire woh bhi set ho jayenge 💗

Bas jo bhi ho ladai or taunting na ho!

Originally posted by: Nephy1

Oh no..

She can't.

I was stupid and if you expected from her than you also.

Look its our mistake that we imagined her calibre beyond words while she is novice..

She herself seem to be brought up in a very conservative manner as well as protected first by her fatger than her husband.

So she doesn't have strong idea of how a strong women will.behave when put into situations in which she usually put meerub.

In same way,she always dreamt of an image of a perfect man,she herself is fan of murtasim,so he is not human but a god like cteature she imagined as perfection,its nothing to do with any reality or real basis...

So this writing in itself is absurd.

There is no logic at all..

Yeah she weighed sympathy and liking factor towards murtasim by writing him in detail be it his flaws,his goodness,eveilness,anger becoz she herself in love with his ML.

But she couldn't do that for meerub..

I haven’t seen the writer IV but given the context of her background I think she views modernism and in adjacent feminism with the lens of her traditional background- nonsensical and troublesome. So Meerab is written as badtameez instead of strong and her modernity/liberalism is always leading her to trouble.

We will get a sense of traditionalism is the best in the end with a sorted Meerab after her suffering

Originally posted by: arshi1983

Pls count me in.

My friends who are neither in twitter nor in IF seem to be enjoying this show a lot more! So I am now leaning towards a little detox from social media!