FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 9

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Dear readers,

You must have noticed this FF has no title. Initially I had thought of giving it a title later, but so far I have no ideas. What title would you suggest for this fanfic?

I feel Tuhi Toh kismet meri suits well.

You left off on a really intriguing cliffhanger! Yeh Seerat bhi na mar jaaniye hai! How in the world are the Brars going to accept her!

Awesome update 👏 👌

You depicted Sahiba’s emotional turmoil very well. No matter whom she does things for in the end - uski hi bali chadthi hain. I like the clauses she placed - ensures her safety at least and I respect Angad for accepting them.

Great cliffhanger and oh boy! I would love to know how Garry is here, seeing as he married Seerat.

As for a title for the FF, how does Duty and Desire sound?

(I am assuming there is a romantic track in the future 😆 if not it can also mean all other desires that one may have as a human of course.)

Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely update.

Through out the update I felt sorry for Sahiba. She has to end up paying the mistake of her sister & to save her younger sister had to marry a stranger.

This was a deliberate move on my part. She is pitiful character. She is slightly stronger character than the OG female lead, who looked a lot more pitiful. Maybe because it is how she is appearancewise in Gatchora: small and childlike. So, I felt such a character must be tired being so proactive, even when she does things for people willingly. In both versions, there are also very few scenes where her character can cry or process. All she has is huge confrontational scenes. And so to me, such absence make her character less relatable.

I liked how she put the conditions in front of Angad. Keerat’s guilt was palpable. But I liked that she was more mature & responsible than her age. I liked inder’s concern for a girl whom he didn’t even knew.

Keerat was suppose to feel so. I mean in the serial there is no reason why female lead would prefer her when she is the most dependent figure in the family. The only reason I could think was Keerat's acknowledgement that makes her standout from the rest of the members in female lead's eyes.

Inder is nice character in this FF because I do not like the bewada version of the serial. All he does in the series is appears with a drink, speaks his lines and leaves. Zero contribution.🤢 Bhai aise kaise jeene de rahe hai iske parents isko. 😒 Humare parents to hum kahi aise hi baitha hua bhi dekh le toh sunane lagte hai.

Now that Serry are married wonder what follows next
Serry I think will be less clownish than the show. Maybe more mean and risktakers. They are too shallow in the serial repeating everything on loop. Ye dono bore nahi hote ek hi types ki line bolte hue. OG mein bhi inka sabse complicated on and off love triangle hai.

Originally posted by: averma4583

You left off on a really intriguing cliffhanger! Yeh Seerat bhi na mar jaaniye hai! How in the world are the Brars going to accept her!

Hint: They wont.

Originally posted by: NidhaA

You depicted Sahiba’s emotional turmoil very well. No matter whom she does things for in the end - uski hi bali chadthi hain. I like the clauses she placed - ensures her safety at least and I respect Angad for accepting them.

This is the first thing she does for herself without thinking about others first. And Angad did kyunki he is older than her, and uska koi tax nahi lag raha. I mean uski dulhan bhaag gayi toh uski priority ye hai ki uski biwi na bhaage. He is simultaneously selfish, cautious and vulnerable.

Great cliffhanger and oh boy! I would love to know how Garry is here, seeing as he married Seerat.

Uska hi katega.

As for a title for the FF, how does Duty and Desire sound?

(I am assuming there is a romantic track in the future 😆 if not it can also mean all other desires that one may have as a human of course.)

I like your logic, the FF does explore desires the ones that cause regret and the ones that fill ourselves with happiness. How does imperative impulses sound? Is it too fancy for a FF.

This is quite romantic! I might end up writing one shot on this.

I finally figured how to tag members. Turns out I have make buddies first. I swear all these sites are so challenging, they make me feel so stupid and ancient.

Thanks for helping me.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

I finally figured how to tag members. Turns out I have make buddies first. I swear all these sites are so challenging, they make me feel so stupid and ancient.

Thanks for helping me.