FF - SHATTERED - (Angad* Sahiba) - Aurhors note imp -9/4/23 - Page 9

Wow.

I wasn't expecting an update today as you updated last night only. But thanks for doing this. Loved the disclosure. Seerat has really been taken for a ride by Gary and deserves every bit of it.

As or Gary, In initial promos etc he was always been shown as third lead. His wrongdoings doesn't justify him being that.

Waiting for Gary and Jasleen to face the humiliation.

Well written ❤️❤️👏👏, so finally Angad got to know seerat secret , loved it , eagerly waiting for them to trap Garry 😀

Wonderful update❤️❤️❤️

Loved Sahiba and Seerat interaction and also Seerat and Angad👏👏

Finally everyone knows who the puppet masters have been for this miserable scene. 👍

Jasleen and Garry you better watch out!!!

Wonderful update dear!

I liked how you portrayed Seerat’s miserable condition. Yes it’s very much right that we can run in the entire whole world but cannot run from ourselves. She is regretting her deeds. Like they say better late than never. I appreciate her for accepting her mistakes and feeling guilty. I am glad she didn’t mistrust Sahiba. The sisters meet was emotional. So now Angad here everything from his precious Seerat. I loved how veer supported Angad through out. I liked the way the entire truth came out. It’s a pleasant surprise to see Seerat standing up for truth even though how much ever ugly and bitter truth is. Sahiba is surprised to see Angad standing upon his actions. I am glad you didn’t portray Seerat as a victim and held her equally responsible. Sahiba wanting to take Seerat with her is so understandable. Towards the end of the day Seerat is her sister. How much ever angry you are but you cannot deny this fact & has to stand up for your siblings when they need u. Waiting for next part.

The fact Seerat admitted her fault was so nice. Her breakdown felt so real 🥺🥺 How will Gary be punished here? Because he should be punished for what he did with Seerat and all his plannings for Angad. 😤😤😤😤

Great chapter. Well written ❤️.

Originally posted by: averma4583

A wonderful update packed with punches and the fact you kept everyone true to their depicted characters!

Thank you so very much jiiii🙏🙏😃 glad you enjoyed reading this updateee😳

Originally posted by: piyushi

Wow.

I wasn't expecting an update today as you updated last night only. But thanks for doing this. Loved the disclosure. Seerat has really been taken for a ride by Gary and deserves every bit of it.

As or Gary, In initial promos etc he was always been shown as third lead. His wrongdoings doesn't justify him being that.

Waiting for Gary and Jasleen to face the humiliation.

Hello ji...

Actually I am quite excited to write the tale dancing around in my head...hence back to back updates ji😃 So glad you enjoyed the update! Yup you are right she deserves every bit karma serving on her plate...

And yup I also agree...that garry as third lead is simply just not digestible at all...like even if I have thousand hajmola's or hingoli's na will not be able digest or look at garry as a lead👎🏼

Yup and exactly the last part you mentioned is coming up in the next couple of updates ji😃

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Well written ❤️❤️👏👏, so finally Angad got to know seerat secret , loved it , eagerly waiting for them to trap Garry 😀

Thank you so very much ji...glad you enjoyed reading the updateee😃 Bass ji that trap only is coming up next ji..😃😉

Originally posted by: kalavathi5

Wonderful update❤️❤️❤️

Loved Sahiba and Seerat interaction and also Seerat and Angad👏👏

Finally everyone knows who the puppet masters have been for this miserable scene. 👍

Jasleen and Garry you better watch out!!!

Thank you jiii😃 so glad you enjoyed reading the various scenes and convo in between sahiba×seerat and angad×seerat yup now all these people know and they will make sure that enough rayta Phelo's around garry na...ke woh toh doob hi jayega..😉

Originally posted by: Az07

Wonderful update dear!

I liked how you portrayed Seerat’s miserable condition. Yes it’s very much right that we can run in the entire whole world but cannot run from ourselves. She is regretting her deeds. Like they say better late than never. I appreciate her for accepting her mistakes and feeling guilty. I am glad she didn’t mistrust Sahiba. The sisters meet was emotional. So now Angad here everything from his precious Seerat. I loved how veer supported Angad through out. I liked the way the entire truth came out. It’s a pleasant surprise to see Seerat standing up for truth even though how much ever ugly and bitter truth is. Sahiba is surprised to see Angad standing upon his actions. I am glad you didn’t portray Seerat as a victim and held her equally responsible. Sahiba wanting to take Seerat with her is so understandable. Towards the end of the day Seerat is her sister. How much ever angry you are but you cannot deny this fact & has to stand up for your siblings when they need u. Waiting for next part.

Thank you so very much jiii😃 so happy to know you enjoyed reading itI really wanted to show her misery more on the lines of ultimately one does eventually reap what they sow..she's totally being served the exact dish by karma that she prepped up for otherwise...and the only saving grace for anyone doing such a monumental blunder is to first start with the act of acceptance...which she has...and yup...she knows she cannot even try playing victim here for at every step on the way..it has been her choices...despite the manipulations...in the end..it has been her choice..toh she'd have to consequences of it eventually...

Angad finally sees Sahiba through a clean slate lens now..and realises how wrong he'd been with every passing day in this story...and ofcourse our darling sahiba simply isn't in the mood to give any bhao whatsoever...and rightly so...