A plot for future track on Admat and ekleen.

Dear members, would like to share a plot i sent to Rajesh chawla the screenplay writer of UD on 19 feb on his insta account

I told him i am a fiction writer and have ideas to share on future storyline if he and his team are interested.

Firstly i informed him that UD was getting too boring with no head and tail in storyline and just merry go rounds . On top of that adleen marriage had created chaos and confusion. Despite the high end one month plus drama weekly trps not increasing

I mentioned to him that it's mere foolishness to destroy two ships admat and ekleen for one ship nehkam when they have far better potential with good chemistry among the cast.

I told him smartness would be to sail two ( admat ekleen)and destroy one ( nehkam).

So this is the plot i shared with him on future storyline

Ekleen marriage track dragged to mandap. Jasmin comes and exposes adleen marriage truth to halt ekleen wedding. Ekam ditches harleen for hiding her first marriage truth.

Advait loses MLA post. Nehmat wins. She becomes the new MLA. Ekam breaks ties with Harleen and intends to marry nehmat. Nehmat moves on solo . Busy with her political career plus family didn't approve nehkam marriage.

Advait tries to proof the marriage cert is fake as Jasmin had bribed Canadian authorities to produce it. Harleen was a minor. Not even eighteen at the time of marriage. He will be successful and adleen marriage void

Admat marriage proven legal. Nehmat again tied to advait who seeks divorce from him but he refused to give and says to hand over the MLA post to him only then he will divorce her. She gives in. Advait becomes the MLA once again but still refuses to release Nehmat as he had fallen in love with her. But Nehmat is adamant for a divorce. He even tries to be a gd husband but his efforts goes futile.

One fine day, advait meets with a deadly accident planted by Jasmin. His life on stake. Nehmat prays for his safety. He survived but crippled. On a wheelchair. In this way advait will gain audience sympathy and his past deeds would be forgiven. He paid for his karma

Nehmat will take care of him. That's the time he wants to release her as he feels she deserves better but she refuses to leave him literally falling for him too.

On the other hand realising nehmat is moving on with advait, ekam tries to move on with Harleen but jasmin would be the obstacle.

Shamsher , naaz and Malika the obstacle for admat story.

I told him when u already have Jasmin naaz and papa sher as the main villains, why is it necessary to make advait a villain as well

I told him u guys are too obsessed with Nehkam that u are literally destroying the other two ships which has far better chemistry and potential.

I think it is stupidity to sink two ships to sail one when u can have more storytelling with two in parallel tracks

And i also apologize to him if he felt offended

Another option which i gave for admat was

Advait after becoming MLA would be kidnapped by Jasmin and stranded in a mental asylum given electric shocks . Nehmat will rescue him. He will be crippled. Another way to sew his seeds

I told him these are two ways Admat can kickstart.

I requested them to sail admat and ekleen and destroy Nehkam.

Sailing two ships and sinking one is better than sailing one and sinking two

I also shared with him that this plot can take upto a year with dragging and six mths in speed. The choice was theirs

I forwarded to sargun and rohit too

I decided to share this in the forum.

I sent the plot on 19 feb .

Hopefully they gave it a thought.

I also requested to reduce nehkam flashbacks and to move the story forward.

Ps

Onscreen i can see Nehmat trying to save harleen from advait by proving adleen marriage is fake so her marriage with him will be valid.

Earlier she saved naaz now Harleen

Meaning Nehmat will prove adleen marriage is void and admat is legal. To keep ekam away from her. To ensure ekleen happens.

New montage is out which is showing Nehkam separated

So looks like Nehmat will sacrifice for harleen now.

Perhaps they took idea from the plot i shared with them but with their own twisted ways 😜

Whatever it is , they are just egoist adamant people

I really don’t get the wrecking of admat and ekleen for nehkam. Those two couples were rather solid in their pairings. But oh, well. I quit a long time ago.

They can redeem advait anytime they want. just stop the nekham flashbacks. Those are the real killers to any story progression!

Originally posted by: Paulaonohi

I really don’t get the wrecking of admat and ekleen for nehkam. Those two couples were rather solid in their pairings. But oh, well. I quit a long time ago.

I don't follow full episodes lately. Only clips on ytb . I watched yesterday full after knowing adleen truth is out

I was surprised. That was fast and unexpected 🤣🤣🤣

I really hope Rajesh gave a thought to the plot .

And also they sail the two ships instead of one

Nehkam to me and few others here is really boring.

Admat despite don't love each other has the chemistry and spark

Even their arguments looks 🔥🔥😍😍

I am enjoying.

Hoping for push and pull

I have a story in mind for admat one shot for this track. Will pen it once free.

@aniash I think they may have taken up your idea. The episodes are moving a little faster since Thursday and they seem to have reshot some scenes. Today they talked about Canadian citizenship and in the original episodes it was PR.

The holi promo shows ekam proposing to nehmat on holi with color. But the precap yesterday showed him running with flowers with same dialogues to propose. Don’t think two proposals are coming up!

Originally posted by: Irshita

They can redeem advait anytime they want. just stop the nekham flashbacks. Those are the real killers to any story progression!

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Agree

Nehkam doesn't make sense at all

Advait redemption best would be to go through suffering like a tragedy or torture. What he did to Nehmat he had to repay

Best would be crippled on a wheelchair and she taking care of him

That guilt would kill him to the core

Onscreen i can only see Nehmat sacrificing for harleen now by proving adleen marriage was fake

In the plot i sent to chawla it was Advait who would prove that his marriage would be fake as he is determined to get Nehmat back since she has the MLA post and a ticket to his political career.

Perhaps they are using the plot but with their own creativity. They need to make Nehmat a bechari and mahaan.

I am hoping to see a desperate advait trying to prove adleen wedding was jasmin 's plotting.

Some anger and spark from rohit🔥🔥

But seems they are more keen to make Nehmat sacrificing through buckets of crying drama and advait with Kapoors torturing her more.😕

Can you please update romantic os on admat

Also tell him there is zero chemistry we can feel between Nehkam. Ekleen has decent chemistry and Admat is stellar. I watched their scene and decided to watch this show only to get disappointed.

I will add to this. Send Harleen back to Canada. Redeem Naaz and pair her with Ekam. If Advait can be redeemed then so can Naaz.

She even has that childhood trauma angle which they can explore

Originally posted by: Irshita

@aniash I think they may have taken up your idea. The episodes are moving a little faster since Thursday and they seem to have reshot some scenes. Today they talked about Canadian citizenship and in the original episodes it was PR.

The holi promo shows ekam proposing to nehmat on holi with color. But the precap yesterday showed him running with flowers with same dialogues to propose. Don’t think two proposals are coming up!

They may not follow the full plot. Perhaps just part of it.