Originally posted by: Gundamwing
These are very valid criticisms. These missing details stop the drama from being great. Accident is a turning point in their relationship we should have seen what happened after in the car, if he saved her the Audience should see it and feel it, somethings have to be shown can’t be just said. Now when we see murtasim upset we will know why because he suffered to save her and she doesn’t even visit him, but now there is a disconnect why does she suddenly care so much.
yes the pool scene was bust, it was edited badly it was lacking any flirting emotion, or romance or Desire or was it supposed to be angsty, I don’t know what was point of the scene except wahaj flexing, what am I supposed to feel. Because after that scene they were back to normal so yeah watch the fish.
wahaj yumna are cracking it, but the material seems to be letting them down. It is still very very good drama, a pity mistakes here and there are holding it back from perfection.
The plot premise is total rip off Jodha Akbar, but they have hit jackpot with lead casting, Yumhaj chemistry is what pulled audiences and it’s still chemistry that’s holding them and also Wahaj as Murtasim, he has put in lot into this char and its visible on screen. Be it’s styling or voice modulation he was spot on .For Yumna, meerab must be one of her easiest role, but it’s there chemistry which is soul of show.
All the team had to work was on good screenplay and sensible dialogue, few dramatics and it would have been so better. It could have been story of this feudal lord who is bound by his duty and traditions falls in love with this stubborn, urban, independent girl and how they both try and , understand each others perspectives and learn to respect , fall in love and bring in balance.
Given Wahaj and Yumna are such terrific actors they would have been awesome in both clashing and emotion scenes.
But no they had to mess up everything with their logic less sub plots and twists.
What a total waste of entire pool scene. Koi na atleast Wahaj got his shot at fame :-)
Edited by Winterberry - 2 years ago
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