MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111

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N_sharmaa

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Originally posted by: zalima

Bully nasheela kamina sexy Neil ❤️

And it's 68k🥳

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@su_94

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Posted: 3 years ago

#1442

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

69k

Love ,kitten Neil are giving tough competition to each other

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Anj01

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Posted: 3 years ago

#1443

Originally posted by: Krithzz

71🥳

This was love❤️

Want to rewrite this and cure me

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krithika

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Posted: 3 years ago

#1444

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

This was love❤️
Want to rewrite this and cure me

This was best ..no rewrite but you can write again on them on their different phases🤣but before that complete the other stories

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Anj01

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Posted: 3 years ago

#1445

Originally posted by: Krithzz

This was best ..no rewrite but you can write again on them on their different phases🤣but before that complete the other stories

No story or characterisation wont change just the paragraphing and mistakes and some scenes where now i think should have written differently without changing its essence 😆

Aur baki stories....hongi hongi...wo bhi jarur puri hongi...ek din🤣

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krithika

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Posted: 3 years ago

#1446

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

No story or characterisation wont change just the paragraphing and mistakes and some scenes where now i think should have written differently without changing its essence 😆
Aur baki stories....hongi hongi...wo bhi jarur puri hongi...ek din🤣

That we always feel na we would have written better 🤣done better 🤣 be it anything🤣