Os:jealousy - Page 3

Originally posted by: Nany

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Thank you buddy..aapki demand puri karne hi aayi thi😁chalo i m Glad u guys liked it...

Will surely write more n will tag u too...actually I m new to jyada kisi ke bare me nai pata tha ..next time will surely tag you 🤗

Tumne itna passionate kissing scene likha k pdh k mein to tumhari fan hi hogyi. Mjhe umeed hai tum or bhi bht kch likh skti ho jese ki abhi confession scene hua hai Dev ka to like k office mein vidhi or Dev jb aamne samne honge to Dev khud ko kese rokega vidhi k nazdeek jane se n than at last vo sunega to apne dil ki hi. I'm sure u can write over this part very well

Originally posted by: Parud7

Tumne itna passionate kissing scene likha k pdh k mein to tumhari fan hi hogyi. Mjhe umeed hai tum or bhi bht kch likh skti ho jese ki abhi confession scene hua hai Dev ka to like k office mein vidhi or Dev jb aamne samne honge to Dev khud ko kese rokega vidhi k nazdeek jane se n than at last vo sunega to apne dil ki hi. I'm sure u can write over this part very well

Hehehhe...u r giving me ideas...well surely write yaar...😁😁😁

Originally posted by: Nany

Hehehhe...u r giving me ideas...well surely write yaar...😁😁😁

Chlo tumne surely kh dia to mjhe intezaar rhega tumhare next os ya ss ka

Originally posted by: Parud7

Chlo tumne surely kh dia to mjhe intezaar rhega tumhare next os ya ss ka

🤗updated..kindly check it...n tell me how's it...

Originally posted by: Nany

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Arrey baap re baap isko padh ke to is Umar mein bhi main sharam se laal ho gayi!!!!!!

Kya baat hai kya baat hai. 🤪

Originally posted by: Saumya19

Arrey baap re baap isko padh ke to is Umar mein bhi main sharam se laal ho gayi!!!!!!

Kya baat hai kya baat hai. 🤪

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Kya hi bolu😆thank you🤭🤭

Loved it.

It was intense.☺️

Try writing opposite also where dev is insecure about vidhi's new friend/colleague of her age😆

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Loved it.

It was intense.☺️

Try writing opposite also where dev is insecure about vidhi's new friend/colleague of her age😆

Yeto ajkl bhut hi busy chlri hai. Agar ap likh sko kuch aisa to zrur likhna😆☺️

Originally posted by: Parud7

Yeto ajkl bhut hi busy chlri hai. Agar ap likh sko kuch aisa to zrur likhna😆☺️

I am new to this forum an to the show also so don't know the characters that well but will try writing one😆

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

I am new to this forum an to the show also so don't know the characters that well but will try writing one😆

Thanks at least u have considered my request😊