Whose fault is it?? - One shot

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It was a dark day for Nehmat. She had hoped it to be a relaxing day with the warmth of her nani and nanu but it turned out to be a mad day with Naaz pointing out Ekam in each and every instance. Starting from the food to the dress that Nehmat was wearing to the childhood memories that she was sharing with Nikhil at their house every corner had nothing but Ekam and more stories of Ekam. How was she supposed to move on??? How was she supposed to even try to move on if this kept of happening?? How was Advait supposed to see her in any other light if this kept on happening again and again. And if that was not enough when Advait came to her room the room desk had Ekam’s photo. She was trying to remove all their gifts and memories when Advait had walked in on her. Why?? Why?? Had Naaz sent him there when she had specifically told her to keep him away from her room while she finished everything and take whatever was required. Suddenly the car came to a halt and she came out of her thoughts.

“Ab yeh gaadi ko kya ho gaya??” Advait shouted and came out of the car to check

“Kya hua??” Nehmat asked concerned.

“Tumhare saath hoon kuch na kuch to hoga..” Advait replied. Nehmat looked away.

“Ab please jaakar gaadi main betho andhere main kahi kuch ho gaya to ek aur musibat aa jayegi mere sar pe” Advait said irritated. Nehmat quietly went inside the car. After some time Advait realized that the car had a major problem and won’t start. He called for another one but even that would take time as that other car was taken to airport to drop his father. He saw a nearby dhaba and went to get himself some water. Nehmat saw him leave and got scared.

“Advait!!!! Advait!!!! Kaha ja rahin hoon??? Advait…. AAhhhhhhhh” Nehmat ran after Advait and tripped her leg onto some rocks and fell down. Advait irritated walked towards her.

“Problem kya hain tumhari??? Kyun nikli gadi se bahar??” Advait shouted at Nehmat.

“Tum bina bataye kaha ja rahe the?? Main” Nehmat said wincing in pain again. Unwillingly Advait helped her and took her inside the dhaba and asked for some ice. Just then the owner of the Dhaba came out.

“Are Nehmat beta aap yahan?? Itni raat ko ?? Akele?? Hmm… jhagda karke aayi hoon Ekam se….. Kaha hain who pagal main abhi uske kaan khictha hoon” The owner said smiling.

Nehmat looked scared while Advait looked irritated. He had had enough of this Nehmat and Ekam love story. He roughly grabbed Nehmat’s arm and starting dragging her while Nehmat winced in pain. The dhaba owner tried to stop him but Advait paid no heed.

“Chalo!!!Chalo!!!!” Advait

“Mujhe dard ho raha hain Advait please” Nehmat shouted. They went to the car.

“Chodo please mujhe dard ho raha hain” Nehmat begged

“Are koi bacha hain is sheher main jise tumhare love story na malum hoon. Mazak banke reh gaya hain mera jisko dekho tumhare love story ke kisse sunata rehta hain.Isliye ki mujhse shaadi thaki mujhe har waqt insult kar sako mera mazaak bana sako. Haan???” Advait spat grabbing her arms again. Finally, Nehmat patience broke and she pushed Advait freeing himself from his clutches.

“Haan isiliye maine tumse shaadi ki…. Isliye maine ki ….. tumhe nicha dekhane main mujhe itna mazza aata hain ki maine apne bachpan ka pyaar who insaan jo mere liye is duniya main sabse jyada maine rakhta tha use chodkar maine tumse shaadi kar li kyunki us pyaar se jyada mujhe tumse badla lena tha. Isliye maine apni best friend ko bhi dhoka diya Un sabse ….. sabse … sabse….. maine yeh sab kuch kiya isiliye”Nehmat shouted while unknowingly moving towards the middle of the road and away from him.

“Maine yeh sab kiya yeh sab” Nehmat shouted. Just then Advait saw a truck approaching Nehmat.

“Nehmat!!!Hato!!!! Nehmat!!!” Advait shouted. As much as he hated he didn’t want her to die.

“Yeh sab maine kiya hain main pagal hoon pagal” Nehmat kept on shouting when Advait realising that she is not listening ran to move her from the way and just in time saved her.

“Kya kar rahin hoon tum??? Hosh main aao?? Piche dekho mar jaati tum” Advait shouted

“Mar jaati ….. to mar jaati shayad sab theek ho jata. Kyun bachaya mujhe kyun bahacya …. Tum Ekam Malika Naaz sabki life sorted. Tumhe bhi mujhse chutaka mil jata. Sabki….. Kyunki wiase bhi meri life ki kisi ko thodi na kuch padi hain. Kisiko nahin padi Advait kisi ko nahin. Ek din main ek din main meri puri duniya ujad gayi. Mera pyaar…… “Nehmat paused and Advait stared. Nehmat wiped her tears.

“Mujhe koi sharam nahin hain Haan main karti the Ekam se pyaar maine kiya tha Ekam se pyaaar aur mera pyaar sacha tha. Saath jeene marne ki kasme khayi thi humne. Har sukh dukh main har halat main. Bachpan se bachpan se jaanti hoon use aur ek din main ek din main sab khatam….. who mujhse nafrat karta hain Malika meri best friend nahin meri sister thinaaz se badhkar thi who mere liye. Aaj mujhe apni sabse badi dushman maanti hain…. nafrat” Nehmat said

“Are to kyun kiya yeh sab??? Mana kar deti shaadi se …. Tum kar sakti the?? Mana leti apne ekam ko tumhare bachpan ke pyaar??” Advait shouted

“Koi shaukh nahin tha mujhe tumse shaadi karne ka…. Aur …. Aur ….Gayi the …. gayi the manane use samjhane Malika ko samjhane use kehne ki wapis chale lekin….”Nehmat fumbled

“Lekin kya ???” Advait shouted

“Main kuch puch raha hoon lekin kya??”Advait shouted

“Lekin kya??” Advait shouted

“Lekin nahin mani usne meri baat aur who bhi tumhari wajah se.” Nehmat shouted

“What nonsense??? Apne Ekam ki galti mere upar mat dalo.. Maine kuch nahin kya ”Addvait shouted

“Tumne kiya tumne hi kiya…” Nehmat shouted

“What??” Advait shouted

“Tumhari baat man kar maine Ekam ko shimla ke bare main nahin bataya aur kisine Shimla ki sari photos Ekam ko dekha di… Sab kuch TUmhari aur meri pictures dekha di… Ekam ko laga ki main tumhare saath use dhoka…….” Nehmat replied.

“Kaise photos...??” Advait shouted

“Kaise photos??” Advait shouted.

“Nehmat look at me kaun si photos …. Answer me…. Kaun si photos….” Advait asked grabbing her roughly.

“Tumhari aur meri photos …..Shimla ki monga ki” Nehmat spat while Advait looked on shocked.

“usne maan liya ki main main use dhokha de rahin hoon….. kaise maan liya usne ……kaise maan liya tumne ….. EKAM !!! Kaise maan liya…..Bachpan se bachpan se jaanta tha na mujhe …. Malika sabne maan liya kaise maan liye tumne kaise maan liya……Main tumhari thi sirf ……” Nehmat shouted crying…

“To mujhe bataya kyun nahin main baat karta unse…. main samjha leta Malika ko …...Ekam ko unko sach bata deta… mujhe bataya to hota yeh sab karne ki kyun zaroorat thi…. main mana leta Malika ko sab theek hota hum dono is Rishte main na bandhe hote….kyun nahin bataya mujhe….. kyun maang gayi is rishte ke liye???? Kyun??”Advait replied while shaking Nehmat at the same time.

“Naaz”Nehmat said in a whisper….

“Kya???”Advait asked

“Naaz”nehmat whispers again

“Kyabol rahi hoon tum??” Advait asked again

“NAAZ NAAZ NAAZ meri behen….. meri behen” Nehmat howled. Advait shocked.

“Woh kuch kar leti apne aap ko who Nikhil se bahut pyaar karti thi main kya karti main kya karti…. Main kya karti…..”Nehmat replied about to fall dizzy when for the first time Advait supports and gave her support to sit.

"Aur tum mujhse keh rahin hoon tumne kyun nahin mana kiya?? Kyun nahin kaha apne papa se yeh shaadi nahin karunga.??" Nehmat asked while Advait moved his face away.

“Main majboor thi... meri family.... Naaz...... mujhe karni padi.. Meri kya galti hain….. meri kya galti ahin Advait. Kyun mera sab kuch lut gaya. Ekam ke paas gayi to usne kaha main tumhare paas jana chahti hoon tumhare paas aayi to tum khete hoon ki main sirf ekam ki ….. main kaha jao??? Main kya karo???Mujhe nahin karni thi yeh saadi mujhe nahin banana tha Kapoor khandaan ki bahu….Mujhe to bas…..” Nehmat continued wiping her tears…”lekin ab yeh ho gaya hain aur main kar rahin hoon main puri koshish kar rahin hoon ki mera kal mere aajpar hawi na hoon par sab kuch …. Sab kuch….”Nehmat whispered as she was aboutto fall unconsciousness…when Advait grabbed her.

“Nehmat!!!!Nehmat!!!!!” Advait shouted. He picked her up in his arms and went toward the dhaba. He asked for a bottle of water and tried to wake her up.

“Nehmat putar to theek hain!!! Nehmat tu theek hain!!! Kya kiya tune??? Hain kaun tu???Abhi bulata hoon main E…..” owner shouted

“Pati hoon main iska Advait” Advait replied. Just then he took out his phone and dailed the drivers no.

“Ho kaha tum??? Paanch minutes main pahuche nahin na to Naukri gayi. 5 mins” Advait shouted.

Assoon as the car came advait settled Nehmat in back seat and snatched the car keys from driver. He drove like a maniac to the house while frantically making call to the doctor. As soon as he reached home he again carried Nehmat to the room while the family members followed. Doctor examined that it is nothing but slight fever and stress. Once the doctor had left Advait was sitting next to Nehmat making sure that she is ok. Just then Naaz came with some soup. His mother and father were also there.

“Doctor puch rahin the ki Nehmat ko koi allergies to nahin hain all medicines dene hain”Advait asked Naaz.

“Mujhe to malum nahin jayada maybe nanu nani ya main Eka….. “Naaz stopped and had a smirk on her face. None of the family members were happy.

“Naaz!!!” Advait who had enough ….

“Ji Veerji” Naaz replied.

“Jo past hain uske bare main sab jante hain Nehmat ke bhi aur tumhare aur tumhari Maa ke bhi …” Advait said

“Veerji aap yeh…” Nikhil tried to say something but stopped as Advait showed a hand to him. Naaz looked on with a hurt face.

“Bura laga ….Baar baar kehne se who uska aaj nahin ban jayega. To agli baar dhyan dena aur apni zubaan par lagam do…. Nikhil samjha de isseee….” Advait warned and Nikhil nodded. Naaz left defeated followed by Nikhil. After sometime other family members also left.

Advait was sitting looking at Nehmat - “Is this all my fault??? Kya maine tumhari life kharab……” Advait sat thinking as he went into a deep sleep.

Edited by Tvfanatic85 - 2 years ago

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Nice story. Do keep writing more.

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beautifully written

wish we could get something like that in show

please continue next part

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Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

beautifully written

wish we could get something like that in show

please continue next part


Thanks so much but it is a one shot. Let's see how the story progresses and then will write some more.

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Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85


Thanks so much but it is a one shot. Let's see how the story progresses and then will write some more.

Ohh ok

But please write more on admat with plot ideas in your mind

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