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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys i was really bored so i decided to write FF. it my first attempt so PLZ bare with me.

Characters:

armaan:

Riddimmia

Atul

Sapana

Muskaan

Rahul

Angelie

dr keerti

dr shubankar

all the characters are same in dmg.

Part 1

Chand chupa badel mein u cud see all the stars in the sky but u see a lonely guy looking through the window. you cud see his pain in his dreamy eyes it was full of pain like he hasnt slept for weeks. He was in pain cos of love. the love who he never belived in .(Armaan) but cos of one person (riddimma) he slowly started to fall in love. like the say hum to chale the dost banke jannie kaha dill mill gayye.wen he started to fall in love for riddimma he didnt know how much pain hes going to get like the say (LOVE HURTS) .

Next day in saanjeevni. armaan came face to face with riddimma he wanted to talk to her and explain to her what happened but she seen armaan and turned the other way around. armaan got the hint that she still doesnt want to talk to him. he felt soo sad he justed wanted to tell her how much she meant to him .he fellt so angry he punched the wall. riddimma seen armaan punching the wall she came upto armaan and said Same Armaan.what did u think armaan that Dr riddima gupta will fall in u r trap. you thought u will use me just like u used sonam. (armaans wannabe ex gf) well u were wrong. cos i never loved u i was just getting my own back what u did with my friend sonam. u know REVENGE.armaan pulled riddimma to the fire scape and pulled her against the wall and sd u always consider me wrong u onli know the half story u just want to belive ur friend fine belive her but atleast listen to my story aswell. and i know u love me cos i cud see love in u r eyes.and i will always love u. look into my eyes and say u dont love me DAMNT it say it . ........... riddimma looked into armaans eyes she didnt wanted to say it but the the she rembered sonam................ FlashBack.....................

she seen armaan and sonam in a room and sonam blamed armaan of molesting her. but armaan was onli trying to explain to her that the are not made for each other. but sonam had a plan she sd to armaan that if u cant be mine u cant be anyoned else aswell. and i will make u suffer.

Riddimma looked into armaans eyes and shouted no i dont love u cos u r just a loser who doesnt know how to respect womens u onli thinks about himself. armaan was heartbroken he got a hold of riddimma hand he squeezed it tighter and tighter cos of his anger.

Rid: U are hurting me armaan plz leave me alone

Armi: what about the pain u gave me does that not hurt after all i am human aswell even i get hurt by u r harsh words u think i was trying to molest sonam. u onli saw what u she wanted u to see. i dumped her that way she cudnt take rejection and she traped me.cant u just see that.

she grabed her hand and left. armaan cudnt belive that was riddimma who he loved who he treated her as life. that she doesnt trust him. how can she do that to me. is that all it is it over is thier nothing between us. she cant do this to me. she need to realise how much i love her and av not bein g playing around wif her i really love her.

ALL THE INTERNS PLZ REPORT TO DR KEERTHI AT THE NURSE STATION.

all the intern went to nurse station.

dr keerti: dr atul muskaan rahul child award

Dr angelia ICU duty

aur DR armaan and riddimma general award. u cudd all leave know.

riddima: Dr keerti can i plz change my duty cos i am not comfatable of working wif Dr armaan plz.

armaan felt so hurt and rejected how can she do that to me am i that bad have i hurt u soo much. cant u see my pain.

dr keerti: dr riddima u have came to do u r work and if u not comfortable wif working wif dr armaan that is not my problem the duty i have u gave will not be change got it.

plzzzzzzzz do tell me if u like it or not its my first attempt plz forgive me if i made any mistakes. so pllz comment if u want me to continue.i will to do better next time .

Part 1 page 1

Part 2 page 2

part 3 page 3

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part 4 page 4

Part 5 Page 5

Part 6 Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Sonia!

Wow congrats for starting your first ff! i really liked the beginning! continue it soon! (could u pm me when u continue?)

Thanks!

take care

Priyanka

Edited by *believeinlove* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i really loved it seriously it was amazing plz continue soon can't wait to see the next part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
tht was really good,
it doesn't seem like ur first time
do continue soon, i hope ridz finds out about her mistake soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It's really good, plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...its a fresh start...plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thanks for the lovely comments guys i really means alot to me. i will try to update soon so plz bare wif me.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update..continue soon..wil be waiting...
❤️MONA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nyc part!
do cont soon!

PM if possible! 😃

Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thanks guys for liking my ff am not that great at writing so plz forgive my mistakes


PART 2

Locker room

All the interns duties are over so the decided to go club just a small get together.

an. why dont we got club earth (disco) it a nice place and we will have fun.

muskaan and rahul and atul agreed but armaan was lost in his thoughts and he didnt care were the go he just wanted to meets ridz and tell her hes sorry.

rahul: so its decided we going disco ohye armaan and ridz are use cuming aswell.

Ridz: soz rahul i dont want to go.

armaan understood why ridz said no cos she didnt wanted to be near him.

rahul: wot about u armaan are u cuming.

armaan: i dont think i cud make it soz guys but use have fun and was about to leave the locker room wen angie shouted armaan she sd okey if u nt cuming then fine y dont u drop ridz home cos she not cuming aswell.and it quite late aswell she wont find a taxi that easily.

Ridz. no di it okey i go my self.
angie: no ridz armaan will drop u okey armaan

armi: ok.

on the way home armaan wanted to talk to ridz. he tried his level best. but she didnt wanted to talk to him. so armaan stoped his car and sd i need to talk to u.

Ridz: armaan there is nothing left for us to talk about.
armaan: u cant do that to me u know how much i love u cant u see that.

R. ohh u love me u dont even know the meaning of the love and u saying u love me.

armaan grab ridimma's hand and sd i dnt know the meaning of the love what about u. why u keep on denying that u dont love i cud see it in u r eyes but u afraid to tell me.

R. shouted out louded ha armaan mein tumse pyar kar te hui pal we were not made for each other u have betrayed me. i cant forgive u wot u did to sonam.

A. what did i do tell me damnt it. am telling u the truth nothing happened between me an sonam. u need to trust me.

R. i cnt trust u.

A. fine u cant trust be like that.wen u goig to relise my love it will be too late. i will move on but u wont be able to move on after u know the truth. cos ur soul wont let u live after u know how much pain u gave me. u know why our realtionship is like this its cos of u. U NEVER TRUSTED ME. and u never will. and u r rite we are not made for each other wen there's no trust how can we be happy.

by riddimma...............................


i know that part is not that good but plzzz bare with me am not that good at writing so plzzzzz do comment and be honest if u like it not. i will try to improve.


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