OS: Tere Mere darmiyan hain baatein ankahi - Page 2

Suvika,

It's really heart touching.

Thank you for writing os.

(* Aapka dev bhi HP se bahot Pyar karta hai, sorry bol Raha unko 🤣)

Originally posted by: Revutty

Rula diya yaar. I can't even tell you what I am feeling now after reading this emotional piece. It was so apt portrayal of Dev's feelings to its purity at the level best. There could not be a conclusion regarding the barriers which Dev is gonna face, his fear, his deeper desires, his worries over Vidhi , his guilt feeling that he is not a teenager all were showcased so well by you . Much much much better than the faaltu things which I used to write here. Believe me I am not good in words and without thinking much I started writing here and it's because of the love and trust this forum people are giving I am trying at least a little. You are so professional writer and the wordings which you execute shows the skill of your writing talent. Thanks a lot for showing the realistic Dev here and very much thank you that you fullfilled my wish to read an OS from you. Love you dear ❣️

Thank you so very much, Revutty. 🤗

And please don't put your writing down. Because that's how I started my journey too. You just keep writing. It will change and get even better. Your ideas and concepts are really good. It's only language that needs a bit of polishing and that will automatically happen with time.

So very glad you found this Dev realistic.

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

galat telly addict ko tag kiya... i am in a meeting.. will be back to read in somw time

Oops. Sorry, Telly. I'll be careful next time. 😊

Originally posted by: Scissor

I hate crying....u made me cry....I just hate u 1000000

And love u dev❤️

Happy to have your hatred because you love this Dev 😉😆

Thanks for reading, Scissor

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

yaar itna dard bhara likhne ko kisne kaha tha... dil tut gaya dev ki ue halat dekh ke...💔💔💔💔💔

how beautifully you summed his emotions... and how painfully i read it all in one breath (may be 3 or 4)

but ek happy wala likhna please... show bhi rula raha and tum bhi... ek happy wala please next time

Thank you.

Happy wala - you want me to continue this one and take it fwd, get them to be happy or start a fresh one?

Which would you guys prefer?

Originally posted by: Dreamzz

Suvika,

It's really heart touching.

Thank you for writing os.

(* Aapka dev bhi HP se bahot Pyar karta hai, sorry bol Raha unko 🤣)

Thank YOU for reading.

Didn't you notice... he got more hugs from HP than from Vidhi. 🤣🤣 This OS has the same Dev na 🤣

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Thank you.

Happy wala - you want me to continue this one and take it fwd, get them to be happy or start a fresh one?

Which would you guys prefer?

Continue this one...get them some happy moments

Upto your wish, it's your decision. I am ready to read it

It means a lot. Thanks a lot 😊

Originally posted by: Scissor

Continue this one...get them some happy moments

OK. Will post it sometime over the weekend then. Sochna padega - how to bring these two together under the circumstances.