The Earing - Fan Fiction - Page 3

Originally posted by: sumaishu

Thanks for tagging me dear 😘 ❤️. So beautiful os🤗🤗🥳

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: Chakor07

Just love to read your writings.. 🤗

kyunki show se jo emotions ki bhookh adhoori reh jaati hai wo yahan poori ho jati hai..

It registers as an episode itself with rachana and iqbal executing it😃👏

P.s. will listen to listen to Manchala from Hasee toh phasee while readig it again.. aur rone ka mann hai abhi😂

कभी गर्दिशों का मारा

कभी ख्वाहिशों से हारा

रूठे चाँद का है चकोर

ज़रा से भी समझौते से ये परहेज रखता है क्यूँ

माने ना कभी कोई ज़ोर

दुनिया जहां कि बंदिशों की ये कहाँ परवाह करे

जब खींचे तेरी डोर खींचे तेरी डोर

मनचला…मन चला तेरी ओर

Thanks a lot. It means a lot to hear that this could be an episode. Emotions ki bhookh ke chakkar mein hi likh deti hun main. Like confession toh main likhne ka date bhi nahin karungi because it was so so picture perfect.

And thanks for the song recommendation. Will definitely listen to it. The lyrics seem so apt.

Originally posted by: Anupreeya

Tags

Baakiyon ko kar do tag. Sabka name yaad nahin rehta.

Dhanya vaad , humein yaad rakhane ke liye!

And enjoyed this piece like an actual episode happening in front of your eyes.....your writing is very picturesque and your imagination prolific.

Aap yuhin agar SS likhate rahe

Dekhiye ek din aap serial writer ho jaayenge

👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Anupreeya

Hello Suvika,

Nice to meet you. Please don't apologise. The tag is for people who usually read my stories and ask to be tagged so that they don't miss it in hoard of posts here on the forum. The story is for everyone to read, so please don't say sorry.

Thank you so much for your kind words. It really made my day thinking this could be an actual scene on the show from your perspective. Mehnat safal.

I do like to write but I am a very slow writer and flow of ideas don't come to me in one go, they come in bits and pieces over days in form of 2-3 dialogues at a time. So it really takes so much time to write a small piece. I will write in future as an when I feel something is missing in the show and if I feel I can do justice to the situation. I don't know if I can expand on the current situation at hand, that's why the abrupt ending actually. Because I didn't know where else to take it.

My only motivation to write this piece was to show that elements of progression (Meri Vidhi, hug, holding hand, desperation) could be shown without typical ITV tropes. I am so glad you liked it.

There are other beautiful writings by other writers on this forum as well. Please do explore them and give your feedback. They will love to hear from you. Feedback is bread and butter for anyone who writes anything.

Thanks again.

@blue - that's how my writing journey began too. It takes time but totally worth it.

@green - I have a few ideas if you are interested. Can PM you. You can think and if you want, take it fwd or leave it as is - your choice.

@maroon - totally agree with you on this.

@bold - will definitely do. And you are so write that feedback is bread and butter. It is fuel for the writer - can vouch for that.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

@blue - that's how my writing journey began too. It takes time but totally worth it.

@green - I have a few ideas if you are interested. Can PM you. You can think and if you want, take it fwd or leave it as is - your choice.

@maroon - totally agree with you on this.

@bold - will definitely do. And you are so write that feedback is bread and butter. It is fuel for the writer - can vouch for that.

Sure sure. Please share your ideas. Can't promise to execute everything but click Kiya kuch toh palla I will try.

PM is fine and posting here is also fine, better actually. Baaki apne writer mandali ko tag kar dungi. Even if I can't write on some ideas, baaki log likh sakte hain. Or another idea, we can make a separate post to discuss this, that will be more helpful. But depends on you, whatever you prefer, I am fine with everything.

Written so beautifully.... Literally crying for both of them.

In dono ka dukh zyada nhi dekha jata. But u have put their emotions gracefully😳

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Thanks revutty for tagging me

awwwww thats my Dev.

thats exactly my Dev and I love him to the moon n back... so beautifully written and conveyed their pain and sufferings and feelings emotion.... sab ek saath...

abhi main bhi ro rahi hu.... how ❤️ lovely this is... made my day.. abhi hume sapne me baal ghar aayega aaj aur aayenge ye do dahakka pyar me pagal...

hehehe.. thank you for this beautiful piece.. thoda aur OS likha karo yaar... bahut jarurat hai emotional stories ki.

Originally posted by: Anupreeya

Sure sure. Please share your ideas. Can't promise to execute everything but click Kiya kuch toh palla I will try.

PM is fine and posting here is also fine, better actually. Baaki apne writer mandali ko tag kar dungi. Even if I can't write on some ideas, baaki log likh sakte hain. Or another idea, we can make a separate post to discuss this, that will be more helpful. But depends on you, whatever you prefer, I am fine with everything.

Done. I'll post here in this thread. Or you make a separate post and tag me. I will add my ideas there tomorrow morning. For now, off to bed.

Originally posted by: Loving2Missing2

Dhanya vaad , humein yaad rakhane ke liye!

And enjoyed this piece like an actual episode happening in front of your eyes.....your writing is very picturesque and your imagination prolific.

Aap yuhin agar SS likhate rahe

Dekhiye ek din aap serial writer ho jaayenge

👏👏👏

Thanks a lot. Yeh episode waala compliment bolke dil garden garden kar ditta. Try karungi likhne ki agar koi idea aaya toh future mein.

Originally posted by: Parud7

Written so beautifully.... Literally crying for both of them.

In dono ka dukh zyada nhi dekha jata. But u have put their emotions gracefully😳

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Thanks revutty for tagging me

Thank you so much..... Will try to write but wahi bahut slow writer hun......