Iqbal-e-jurm by Dev - Ab Dev bhi gaye jail - Page 12

Originally posted by: Revutty

She haven't wrote it yet. Writers paradise pe sab talash karke daal Rahi hun . Telly aapki OS padke kaafi time huye. Aap likhogi toh Khushi milegi mujhe.

haan soch rahi hu aaj ek likh du. shinika bhut dino se intezzar me hai..

waise shinika hai kaha ???? shinika.. ooo shinika.. aawaz aa ri tumhare paas ya kaan ko bhejo yaha jara

Originally posted by: Revutty

Likhegi yaar. Let her take her own time.

That's why I'm shant bachi. Nany ko uske mann ka krne deti hoon🤣shin chan nhi bnti

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

behan humari aukat spice ke mamle kam hai... hum kam masaledaar hi likhe pate hai... to usi se kaam chala lo please

🤗

Koi ni ji likh...me padhugi...tag karna muje bhulna mat...vese b muje mere likhne ke alwa sabka hi psand ata.

apni murgi daal barabr wlaa haal he mera..muje utna nai lagta Mera...tum log jo likhte ho na..me to teri fan hu vese b

Mein tharki word use karke soch rahi thi kahin jyada to nhi ho gaya aur pages dekho kaise bhar rahein hai sab sirf es ek word per🤣

Telly , I badly miss your OS . And Anupreeya's too. You both are wonderful regarding the portrayal of deeper emotions of Dev. Anupreeya gives justice to the characterization to the maximum level. Telly your writings are so deeper and soulful. Nany had a different perspective and she has very classy style of writing in romantic Dev. She had a sense of making everything as beauty at its best when it comes to ViDev. I thoroughly enjoy works of you guys.

Originally posted by: Revutty

Likhegi yaar. Let her take her own time.

🤗🤗thank you

Originally posted by: Scissor

Mein tharki word use karke soch rahi thi kahin jyada to nhi ho gaya aur pages dekho kaise bhar rahein hai sab sirf es ek word per🤣

🤣🤣sabka sach bahar aa gaya🤣

Puri duniya tharki he bahen kahi na kahi...kyu fikar kar ri🤣

Originally posted by: Parud7

That's why I'm shant bachi. Nany ko uske mann ka krne deti hoon🤣shin chan nhi bnti

Thank you for being shant🤣

Yeah I am sorry I forgot to mention about Shinika's work. She presents the perspective of all characters to the full fledged way and some times it's so heart wrenching that your eyes will be teary. She is good in writing dialogues.

Originally posted by: Nany

🤣🤣sabka sach bahar aa gaya🤣

Puri duniya tharki he bahen kahi na kahi...kyu fikar kar ri🤣

sab ek hi thali ke baingan hai...tharki thaali