Disturbed On A Passionate Night - A KaNik OS [Completed] - Page 2

Nehvait Relationship

*In this OS Nehvait are married to each other, learnt more about each other and kind of respect each other.

*Advait is slowly drawn towards Nehmat while Nehmat considers him a good friend,

*Which is why the slight awkwardness they feel in the scenes which I have written.

*There were similar hand touching scenes (like the one I wrote in this OS however mine is ORIGINAL, I wrote this OS before the Nehvait's hand touching scene came on TV😆)

But I felt the hand touching scene of Nehvait was not well executed like I wrote down here!👎🏼

There was one more Nehvait scene which I wanted to write that is:

After KaNik come home and narrate how Naaz spoilt their romantic night.

Both Nehvait will be angry and accuse the other on how Naaz came to know about the hotel.

They will fight however later reconcile to unite KaNik once again,

So Nehvait will then work together so that KaNik will express their feelings to each other.

And while working together, Nehvait will come closer.

Ab yeh kya hai??? New story or same one???

I am so lost with you literally spamming my notifications by tagging me in every thread😆

Originally posted by: la_Reine

Ab yeh kya hai??? New story or same one???

I am so lost with you literally spamming my notifications by tagging me in every thread😆

Sorry for the spam!

No I am just giving answers to your questions by explaining the backstory of this OS.

KaNik Relationship

Kanik I know is a bit horny in this OS.

The backstory is that KaNik are already married.

After marriage, Nikhil learns that Naaz was only marrying him for his money,

While Mallika realises that Advait never loved her and was only using her all this while.

Both have their own heartbreaks, however they try to move on.

And in an effort to move on KaNik fall in love with each other.

So the KaNik in this OS are already madly in love with each other,

Which is why they are horny and ready to pounce onto each other.😆

Naaz as kabab mein haddi

Naaz completely lost control over Nikhil when he came to know the reason behind her marrying him.

Now Naaz wants to get back the control over Nikhil,

So when she got to know through Nehmat that Nehvait have arranged a romantic plan for KaNik she reaches there.

And the climax scene in this OS was Naaz trying to win back Nikhil.

Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Sorry for the spam!

No I am just giving answers to your questions by explaining the backstory of this OS.

Thanks but you dont need to tag me in each and every post😆 once is fine😳

Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Hi guys, when yesterday I saw that Kanik will not mostly happen I got an idea of a short story of Kanik (Mallika-Nikhil) where Nehvait (Nehmat-Advait) are helping out Kanik to express their love for each other,

Just read it and tell how it is!😳

Part-1

The story starts with the scenario where Nehvait and Kanik are married to each other under dire circumstances.

Nehvait are still trying to sort out their differences and trying to lead a life together while Kanik are slowly drawn towards each other.

One such day, Nikhil and Mallika were having a casual talk when Mallika asks, "I can't believe you fell in love with that Naaz, what did you even like about her?" Nikhil, "Naaz is one of the most beautiful and sweetest girl I have ever met" Mallika disgustedly "And you never found any girl better than her?" Nikhil is startled with that question and looks straight into Mallika's eyes. Mallika starts feeling nervous with his stare. Nikhil, "I did find one....", then he leans and slowly moves close towards Mallika's lips. When Mallika feels Nikhil's breath near her lips, she quickly gets up saying, "Ummm....I think I forgot something, I will come back in a second!" and quickly goes out of the room after saying that. Nikhil gazes at her disappointingly from behind.

Outside, Mallika sweats bullets and catches her breath saying, "OMG, what was that?" Just then Advait passes by that way and seeing flustered asks her, "What is the matter, are you alright?" Mallika gets surprised to hear his voice and says, "Yes I'm alright" Advait, "Are you sure? You don't seem to be." Mallika, "Yes yes I'm fine, Can we talk?" Advait surprised, "Yeah sure why not?" Mallika "Not here, shall we go out to the verandah?" Advait nods and moves towards to the verandah along with Mallika.

Inside Nikhil's room, Nikhil is waiting for Mallika not seeing her return gets up and goes outside to look for her. Once he is out, he looks for Mallika everywhere and slowly comes to verandah where he sees Mallika with Advait. He clenches his fist in anger turns back and goes inside, when he bumps into Nehmat. Nikhil apologizes, "Oh I'm sorry bhabhi, I was thinking of something else" Nehmat is surprised with his apologetic tone and looks forward to see Mallika seated with Advait in the verandah. Nehmat senses Nikhil's jealousy and asks him, "Are you disturbed because of seeing them together?" Nikhil tries to ignore her questions and leave. However, Nehmat stops him by catching his hand and says, "I know you are not that close to me as you are to your brother but you can still share things with me like you do with your brother" Nikhil looks towards Mallika-Advait seated in the verandah and tells Nehmat. Shall we go in and talk. Nehmat nods. Nikhil and Nehmat go inside.

Inside Nikhil explains all that just happened to Nehmat while outside Mallika narrates it to Advait. Nehvait are shocked. Nehmat to Nikhil "So that means you have fallen for my best friend?" Advait to Mallika, "Don't you like my brother?" Nikhil to Nehmat, "Yes kind of I thought I will never fall in love again with another woman other than Naaz but now..." Nehmat, "You love Mallika?" Nikhil nods. Nehmat smiles in excitement. Outside, Mallika, "I always felt that I loved you but whatever I had for you was an infatuation but now whenever Nikhil I feel that my heart is not in my control, it starts fluttering really fast and I don't know what is this feeling..." Advait smilingly says, "You are in love with my brother!" Mallika looks on.

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To be continued

Sorry dear for commenting late 🙏

I ran away awhile after hearing Jasmin to enter again 🤣🤣🤣

Can't stand her.

Had enough in season one.

Glad that trp also decreased.

The write up here is excellent.

Nikhil Malika convo was cute 🥰 and funny 🤣.

U should have at least allowed him to kiss her before she took off🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Part-2 continued

Inside, Nehmat jumping in excitement "That is great news Nikhil, I'm really happy for you and my best friend!" Nikhil, "Wait wait Bhabhi I don't think she feels the same way about me" Nehmat's smile vanishes. Outside, Advait, "Isn't that a good sign? It shows that you have started to move on" Mallika sadly, "But I don't know how to express my feelings to him Advait" Advait looks on. Inside, Nehmat, "There's nothing like that Nikhil and I think Mallika has moved on from Advait and has started developing the same feelings for you as you have for her." Nikhil, "But how will I know that Bhabhi?" Advait, "Knowing Nikhil well, I think you should advance towards him to express your feelings otherwise he might back off" Mallika, "But the question is how to do it, Advait" Advait reflects for a moment and tells Mallika, "Let me see. Don't worry I will surely find a way out" Mallika thanks him and leaves. Advait gets thinking and says, "I need to talk to Nehmat about this" Inside Nehmat "Knowing my best friend well I don't think she anymore thinks about Advait. She has moved on!" Nikhil "Are you sure Bhabhi?" Nehmat nods. Nikhil, "Just wait and give her some time, I'm sure she will come towards you to express her feelings!" Nikhil thinks for a moment and agrees to Nehmat's idea. Then he takes from Nehmat and goes inside. After Nikhil leaves Nehmat proceeds to her room.

In Nehvait's room,

Advait was waiting for Nehmat. He tells her that he needs to talk to her. Nehmat nods and Advait tells her what Mallika had just told him. Nehmat is surprised and tells him that she just spoke to Nikhil and narrated to him what he just told her. Nehvait together "They need some private time together!" Advait, "So what shall we do?" Nehmat thinks a moment and tells an idea to Advait. Advait exclaims in joy and hugs Nehmat on hearing it. Nehmat feels awkard when Advait hugs so she slowly tries to free herself from his hug. Advait senses it and slowly takes his arms off her. He then puts his hand forward and asks Nehmat so shall we work together to unite Nikhil and Mallika? Nehmat catches his hand and shakes it in agreement.

The next evening, In Nikhil's office

Nikhil is busy going through some important files when Advait comes there. Nikhil, "Veere you here?" Advait, "Nikhil, I want to meet an important person in Hotel Sunrise Room no:128 this evening." Nikhil, "But isn't it you and Dad who make the final decisions?" Advait, "Yes, but this time I want you to meet that person, so leave everything and go now!" Nikhil is confused while Advait pushes him saying, "I will manage the rest of the things here today." Nikhil was still confused however listens to Advait and goes. Advait smiles.

Hotel Sunrise, Room No;128

Nikhil enters saying, "Hello Sir I'm Nikhil Kapoor...." and was surprised to notice the room decorated with red flowers, balloons and candles. He unconsciously shuts the door and moves forward calling out "Hello..." Soon he hears footsteps and turns around and was shocked to see Mallika in pink sexy nightware. He was mesmerized in her beauty, while she comes forward and stands close to him. Nikhil feels nervous with beads of sweat formed on his forehead. Mallika runs her finger onto Nikhil's forehead wiping off his sweat and asks him, "What happened Mr. Nikhil Kapoor?" Nikhil gulps his saliva and asks her, "You here?" Mallika, "Yes I came here to continue what you started yesterday!" Nikhil asks "What?" Mallika leans forward and brushes her lips across his. Nikhil takes his lips off from hers and asks her, "Are you sure about this?" Mallika replies "Yes". Soon Nikhil and Mallika were sharing a passionate kiss. Nikhil forgets everything and runs his hands through Mallika's body while Mallika runs her hands on Nikhil's neck and hair. The two continue to share a passionate lip lock.

In Nehvait's room

Advait to Nehmat, "That was a great idea Nehmat to bring the two together for a romantic date in Hotel Sunrise. Well do you think it will be a new beginning for them?" Nehmat keeps her hand on Advait's. Advait was surprised and could feel goosebumps popping through his skin. Nehmat to Advait, "Mark my words Advait, today the two will surely be able to express their feelings." Advait gets looking into Nehmat's eyes. The latter reciprocates it.

Hotel Sunrise,

Mallika and Nikhil continue to share the lip lock. Soon Nikhil digs his head onto Mallika's shoulder and kisses it. Mallika passionately hugs him back. As the the two move together they hit a vase on the table kept aside. Both laugh. Then Nikhil lifts Mallika in his arms and takes her to the bed. And he draws near her, there is a knock heard on the door. Both Nikhil-Mallika were shocked to hear the knock. Nikhil tells I will look and come and after that we will continue what we were doing. Mallika blushingly nods.

Nikhil goes and opens the door and as soon as he opens the door. Naaz from the other hugs him tightly saying, "I love you Nikhil" Nikhil was taken aback while Mallika had tears filling her eyes seeing the two hug each other.

THE END

The twist at the end was interesting 👍and annoying 😟 . Naaz interruption at the wrong timing 🤣🤣🤣 poor Malika.

But she can actually push naaz through the window. 🤣🤣🤣

Do us all a favor too😎

Love how advait tricked Nikhil for the date. That was very creative.

Love how admat getting closer.

In ur next OS u should book a hotel room for admat also😍😍🥰

One passionate one on them

Overall well written 👍

superb story

do write on nehvait