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Posted: 3 years ago
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LMAOOO I figured but something close to similar will do ๐Ÿ˜œ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Miracle_lover

LMAOOO I figured but something close to similar will do ๐Ÿ˜œ


Why don't u try writing it ๐Ÿ˜œ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Ahaann I always like jealousy track ๐Ÿ˜‰


And yes I will be more happy if makers treat us with like these tracks


But you should write more on Biwi manao mission ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

I donโ€™t want the writers of this show to pick up on my bad writing from the forum and ruin it ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Dear, it's not an os.๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Just a simple plot

I've taken break from fictions.

U are more creative than me.

Why not??

Ginni keeping him there would be better.

And how it could be

On the way to Amritsar to meet her, he met with a minor accident.

So she brings him to singhs with permission.

Amber is already sweet with her

So she nurses and takes care of that guy

Aditya sneaks on them burning with jealousy


Achha i didnt saw the title๐Ÿ˜†


Thats better.. everyone taking care of that guy nd Adi feeling jealous๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Aniash


But i am hoping ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

What could be better than misunderstanding over a simple word

Boyfriend actually do mean a boy who is a friend.

Adityaji would naive to understand.

Ginni is already a naive at times

What to say

Easily falling into amber's trap

I can actually expect this from her ๐Ÿ˜œ

To be honest i dont like jealousy track on ITV bcoz they show the leads so stupid and dumb who cant sense their respective partners behaviour are changing...they don't see the pain, frustration, irritation are they going through...they just merge all their attention in their "so-called bf or gf" and i can't take that as it's no fun in seeing that ๐Ÿคข


If cvs wanna show jealousy that show ur leads sensing the changing in their respective partners...question themselves and even better sense their jealousy thus it makes sense.


Until now i hvn't sense such a worth watching jealousy on ITV ๐Ÿ˜–...so generally i skip jealousy track

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Ahaann I always like jealousy track ๐Ÿ˜‰


And yes I will be more happy if makers treat us with like these tracks


But you should write more on Biwi manao mission ๐Ÿ˜†


At the moment i surrendered fictions.๐Ÿคฃ

They take time.

But simple plots are easy.๐Ÿ‘Œ

If any idea comes i might try .๐Ÿ˜

Discussions are less time consuming.

Will stick to that a while ๐Ÿ‘Œ

Biwi menap would be interesting if it comes onscreen.๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ziva01

To be honest i dont like jealousy track on ITV bcoz they show the leads so stupid and dumb who cant sense their respective partners behaviour are changing...they don't see the pain, frustration, irritation are they going through...they just merge all their attention in their "so-called bf or gf" and i can't take that as it's no fun in seeing that ๐Ÿคข


If cvs wanna show jealousy that show ur leads sensing the changing in their respective partners...question themselves and even better sense their jealousy thus it makes sense.


Until now i hvn't sense such a worth watching jealousy on ITV ๐Ÿ˜–...so generally i skip jealousy track


I don't blame u for saying that coz itvs don't handle things well when it comes to certain tracks

Jealousy tracks are supposed to be short, crisp and light hearted.

But they go too far with it that it becomes ridiculous or unbearable to watch

Basically is the execution.

Jealousy is part of reality.

We do get jealous when our spouses are attracted or gives more attention to another person apart from us especially a close friend.

So that was what the plot i written was all about.

The fault is on both sides

Ginni instead of using boyfriend could have said childhood friend.

Aditya instead of getting things wrongly should have checked the details like ask her mother or other family members about the guy

So a small conflict within husband wife due to the entry of a childhood friend.

Newly wedded still getting to know one another through a forced marriage.

And the track can be used for realization as well.

Bringing them closer like the bullet one.

What is important is the good intention of bringing up the track like aditya will realize his feelings and Ginni will notice some changes in him.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miracle_lover

I donโ€™t want the writers of this show to pick up on my bad writing from the forum and ruin it ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


U should try and get the forum reviews..

Forget the makers.

U never know people may adore ur writing and u actually have the talent hidden in u. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


U should try and get the forum reviews..

Forget the makers.

U never know people may adore ur writing and u actually have the talent hidden in u. ๐Ÿ˜Ž


Thanks for the push and motivation! Maybe I will try and write something next week during Thanksgiving holiday ๐Ÿ˜Š

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