AryLie Drabble - Take Me Back - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

18

Views

4.4k

Users

16

Likes

82

Frequent Posters

Sarcy thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: komald718

SHEER RESILIENCE AND LOVE FOR THE SAME ARYAN❤️


That doesn't help me much. 🤔

nehaahmad thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Thank you so much for writing this. So much more complete and nuanced than the actual episode :) but we know that already about your writing 🤩

He is just so in love and even despite not declaring it has declared it through his actions. But I love this aspect for ASR that he doesn’t give into to emotional melodrama and blackmail being dragged into by Imlie.

I love that his actions speak louder isn’t just a bhashan he gives but lives it too

He is so awkward in love despite being so sure of himself and confident in all that he does. Not that he isn’t confident and doesn’t know that he loves her it’s that he is A bit rusty in how he expresses his ‘pheelings’ and how he deals with them.

His sensitivity is what gets me. You know what my favorite part of last week fridays episode was. When he says to Imlie. You say whatever you want to me did I ever stop you. Did I ever make you feel insulted. Did I ever stop you from saying whatever you have wanted to me. I hate you looking at me like this. With these questions in your eyes.
thank you for writing this lovely OS.




Baarish_Sim thumbnail
Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 3 years ago
#13

You are a brilliant writer! You capture their essence softly but its still so potent that it moves the reader

egle thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 3 years ago
#14

🤏 introspection taken from this OS and shown on screen would turn the Fandom around. We've put up with so much bull shit that this needs to happen so that the angst is worth it


CREATIVES lurking about- for God's sake take the good ideas like this and make it real

Edited by egle - 3 years ago
mahiaana thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Komal she did the malam patti in real too 😭🤧 i saw a clip her doing malam patti


And after reading all of your reviews, takes...


Girl you just HIT the correct note smiley27smiley19 Itni pyaar se in dono gadho ki emotions ko likha...bina kuch thik se kahe ek dusre se kitna kuch bol gaye dono.

And the last bit...he's done with imlie


And imlie's too but he wished imlie's wasn't.

😭 Aryan's pain in this lil part


No one was.. is ...and will never be done with none gadheros. You will eventually get back to her and she to you 😭


Again a beautiful piece komaliya 😘😘😘

180506 thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#16

KOMAAALLIYAAAAAAAAA, I was a pyassi but you made me classy just by reading this 😩🤧🤍.


girl you showed the prolonged angst and defo foretold part of what happened in today’s episode!! She did actually end up tending to his wound so you were right on the money!

Beautiful as always, ugh these two slay meeeee 🔪🔪🔪


Sir-Please thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 3 years ago
#17

This destroyed me emotionally!

Image

This is just beautifully written and I love that you kept the essence of these two characters and wrote them in a more realistic and palatable way.

My gifted and talented sister, keep 'em coming😍



...my bedsheets would like to thank you for once cos it was the only thing not destroyed🌚


Edited by Ahlaam5 - 3 years ago
sue1o1 thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#18

please i am obsessed with your writing! I am obsessed with your perception and portrayal of Aryan and Imlie! I am obsessed with the way you narrate their thoughts! Their voices! Their feelings! I NEED MORE! 😭😭

sue1o1 thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#19

At this point is there anything you have written on them that I'm not going to want to make into a blunt and smoke it until I pass out in ecstasy because this is freaking beautiful, AGAIN 😭

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".