AN:- Since I was not satisfied with the way the makers ended the show so I am writing an OS in my style here I am keeping Prisha in a positive role(like Prisha from ll world)but don't worry itna bhi achaa naii rakhungi 😂 and I am skipping that mental hospital thing
The scene starts when everything got clear in front of all Armaan was caught red-handed police were called before leaving the whole family is taking his class along with Prisha
Thud!! Armaan recieved a slap from Sushma
"Tum mere bete ho hi nahin sakte..."cries broken Sushma
"Armaan how can you....?? Main tumhe male great hote sikhayatha jiske liye regreat kar raha tha par ab main regreat kar raha huin tum mere bete ho tum itne niche kaise gir gaya" shouted Harsh
"Armaan apne toh ab koyi choda nahin jisne aapne chal na kiya faida na uthaya ache beta na sahi ache pati na sahi kam se kam pita ka toh nibha sakte aapne toh wha bhi bigad diya kaise insaan hain aap"said Saumya "na jane kitne chhal kiye the nere sath mummy ji ka itna istanal kiye the jis pita ne kandhe pe bithaya ungli pakad chalna sikhaya unhe bhi lalach main chod diya" "aapne toh mere khilaf Prisha ko use karna cahate the kiya socha tha apne serials ki tarah ham dono jhuk jayenge ladhenge aapke liye fir aap dono ka faida uthayenge"said Saumya in disappointment while Prisha was rolling her eyes to Armaan's cheap thinking
Flashback
Armaan started his game with Prisha
Prisha was working as Armaan's PA in between a discussion Armaan started his game of playing with emotions
"Jiju aap thik hain aap upset dikhrahe"said Prisha with concerned voice
To which he replied, "nothing much you know ur sister na"
"Saumya se jhagda huya?"Prisha asked
"Ham aksar jhagdate ishme naya kiya hain" said Armaan "main tang aacuka personal life thik nai ja raha professional main bhi prblm aate par personal ke chalte kanhi dhyaan nahin de paraha" Armaan was sounding upset which makes Prisha to worry for them
Seeing his drama is workings Armaan continued..
"Tumhe toh pata hi hain hame se happy married life cahata tha but Saumya main jaisa socha tha waisa nahin hain maine galti ki tumhe chodke Saumya ko use kiya ab pachts raha...plz mujhe maph kardo" said Armaan while joining jis hands
"Jiju yeh aap kiya kehe rahe..."Prisha said being confused
"Jo tum sunn rahi ho sahi sunn rahi ho main Saumya se shaadi karke fas gaya Shaadi se pehel jaisi thi ab wha nahin rahi sayat usse writer banna ohh janti mere through ho sakti mera faida uthane ke liye mujhse shaadi ki fit waqt ke sath rang dikhane lagi"main budhu bewakoof usse innocent dil ka achaa samajh kar pyaar kar betha kabhi tumhare pyaar ki kadar nahin ki par ab nahin"
He turn toward Prisha and asked her, "ek nayi shurwat karte purani baato ko bhula kar main Saumya se tang aa cuka dhoka khaje realise huya ab mujhe shanti cahiye plz mujhe ek mauka do mujhe pata hain tum bhi mujhse bahut pyaar karti" he tucked her hair and wraped his habd around her shoulder "kiya tum mujhe ek mauka dogi?"asked Armaan
Prisha freeded herself and gave a slap to Armaan
"Armaan aapko sharam aani chahiye kaisi ghatiya soch hain aapki aap pita bane wale fir bhi aap mujhe propose kar rahe affair rakhne bol tahe aapne aisha soch bhi kaisa liya ki main aapko hnn bolungi acha huya apne mujhe bola barna kisi ur ko bolke Saumya ko dhoka dete main abhi jake Saumya ko batati" Said Prisha in anger
She turned to leave but she get a pause when she find Saumya there..
"Saumya?" Prisha asked
Saumya was looking shocked but this was nothing as today she is receiving this type of shock at 1st she got to know about the 'chhals' of Armaan when she came to confront Armaan she recieved a new one she was losing all her strengths but she managed to stand stronger as she know she has to stand for her children, for herself too today she has confront him for all this year of 'chaals' there relation is stand for nothing but 'chaal' now Saumya's determination is going to speak
'Saumya' Armaan called her after coming from the shock
'jo tum soch rahi waisa..'Armaan was continuing but was stoped by Saumya
'Bas Armaan bas ur kitna dhoka denge ur kitna chhal karenge mujhe sab pata lag cuka aapka mere samne aacuka main aapko confront karne aayi pata chala idhar aap ek ur ki plan kar rahe' Saumya shouted at Armaan
'Mera sapna bas writer baneks tha apne mere sath aisha kyun kiya? Main sapne leke aayithi Mumbai aapse shaadi karne nahin apne fasaya ur bol rahe ki main aapko fasai sharam karo aap' Saumya continued
'Saumya ishme meri galti nahin hain Armaan ks liye kuch feel nahin karti main tumhara ghar main tod rahi thi' Prisha started begging for forgiveness
'mujhe pata hain Prisha' said Saumya
She turned back to Armaan
'Aapne Kiya socha tha main apne saone bhula dungi aapko biwi nahin naukar cahiye tha aapke liye banungi aapko toh kathputki cahiye tha jo kuch na bole bas aapke isharo main nache.. nahin bani katputli aoni parvarish banaye rakhi toh main buri ban gayi', 'kiya aap ache pati ho? Questioned Saumya 'ache pati chodo ache inshaan bhi ho kiya?' 'aap jaise serials ke trp le liye karte aapne logo le sath yahi kiya mummy ji ohh toh aapki maa hain unka bhi istamal kiya sab pata lag cuke mujhe' saod Saumya in verge of breaking down
Saumya was feeling dizzy she loosing her strength whole scenario has make her weak she was falling
'saumya' both Armaan Prisha said in unison runs toward her but Armaan was stopped by Saumya
Simi entered 'Armaan sir aapke office ka scene live hogaya and media bahar hain'
this was shocked to Armaan his real face was revealed he notice the Smirk of Prisha this was a plan of Saumya to trap him this realisation stuck him in mean time Saumya was taken to hospital in fear of media Armaan has hidding in office he escaped to hospital in disguised when doctor gave the good news of Twins have born
Since everything was revealed it didn't take much time for Saumya in getting divorce (as family except Harshvardhan was in support of her
It was decided that Armaan can take kids to his house in weekend only kids
Time was passing like this Saumya with her own effort turns into a successful writer whole chaos starts the downfall of Armaan
Flashback end
"Itne se mann nahin bhara jo bacho ko nahin choda" Saumya voiced raised
Kids were looking scared so they hid themselves behind Tara and Kashis both of them are comforting them
"Saumya tum kuch bhi bolo bache toh mujhse bahut karte hain na champs" Armaan asked to his kids
They were scares but then they came in front and denied with this
"No ham aapse love nahin karte we hateyou aap worst father hain haam aapke pass kabhi nahin aayenge" said Jashan and Jahan respectively
After families confrontation police take Armaan with them
Here Jashan Jahan hugged Saumya and then family share a hug promising each other for a happy snd beautiful future
Prisha too starts her emotional drama asking Saumya for money Saumya too want some peace so she settled her matter she helps her in finding house and job in Pune she too give her quite a handsome amount of money and ends that chapter of her life
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In jail
Kaidi 1 to Kaidi 2 "Yeh dekho Armaan the great" both of them started laughing at him
Other kaids are talking among themselves and were making fun of Armaan
"Yeh kabhi producer ths aaj apne kidnapper bana" he said ehile laughing
Another one started, "kyun bhai Producer serial karte karte real life main bhi drama dal diye kiya" "Apne hu bacho ki utha laye?"
"Hey u all tum jante hi ho main kaun huin fir bhi nautanki jyaada udde na tumhare liye bura hoga" said Armaan in his forever lasting ego
"Array ohhh jo tum the wha the ab tum jail main kaidi ho so ussi according raho"said the officer in round
"And Mr oberoie yeh aapka ghar nain hain na hi aapko special treatment milega sab kaam karna padega aapko"said the officer begoret leaving
Armaan is bounded with this now he is no longer the Armaan he used to be hid image is ruined all this year of success has gone into the thrash because of his ego and self obsession Armaan is a very talented guy he has everything but morals his egoistic nature bring doom for him his family has left him even he can't meet his children they hate him for his deeds he is all alone with all power which has gone now he is bounded to accept the rule of nature:- change is only consat thing happiness and sorrows are not constant this two are part of our life previously he was not ready to accept it he was not ready accept his downfall so for keeping himself at no 1 position he cross all his limits now nothing left for him so only thing he can do now is accept this change no matter how powerful ego is to destroyed everything but Karma is more stronger than ego to fight back with ego Karma can return the person his own action with double intrest this situation makes Armaan learn this too so accepting his new life he started his work
Since never in his life he has done a single piece work things are more difficult for him but all this thing has bring a small change him that rather than screaming around he decided to learn things other previously other prisoner used to tease him now they too have started co-operating him with there support he has learn a lot of things during his initial days he too used to fight with them but with passing time he started getting closer with them after losing his family they are now his close ones
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Saumya's shows are going well kids are too doing well in their schools three of them receives praises for their nature Tara Saumya Sushma and Harshvardhan are giving them lesson of simplicity so they are very down to heart sweet hearts who despite of power lives life like a commoner
Sushma's business is too growing now Harshvardhan has started helping her he supports every ladies of the house he too helpd in household works
Tara is now a teacher in Prince Jashan Jahan school she is teaching them music
Everything is going well with them they have not forgave Armaan but they have forget like a night mare for shake of children and life they have to live they are recieving news of changes in Armaan but past is too harsh on them that its hard for them to trust him again
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And time flies like this now it's been a year of that incident kids have overcome that trauma like before Tara and Saumya are doing well as a single mother Harshavardhan and Sushma and both Verma family and Tara's family are supportive towards them they helps them in every way every one in the family never let kids know the loss of power
Prince has cleared his 10th with good percentage he is not only a bright child but also he is good in music too he is dreaming to have career in this field his mother is his music teacher and his inspiration too like his family he too wants to make his career in his own without using any power his family is supportive too
Jashan Jahan have good vocabulary they are more interested in sports and campaigning and they are quite active kids there age makes them good in sports they are following the foot step of their elder brother
Three of them are ghar ki raunak after completing their daily ki padhai they love to spend time with family previously they have attitude of previous generation male but now they too have changed they are including their mother in everything for them their mother is super moms they hate Armaan but somewhere they miss him too but then for lightening their mood they go to their mother who brings smile to them who takes all their sorrow a hug and good night story makes them happy again
Saumya too understand her kids pain but then she has promised herself thar she'll never let kids no the loss of father she'll everything for them despite of busy schedule managed to find time to spend with kids as she know for now her care is mostly needed by the kids
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5 years latter they recieve a call from police department they got to know that Armaan's punishment period is over but Armaan is ashamed of himself so he want to spend rest of his life all alone in somewhere far way from all now he has no intrest in creating further problem for them family too wants the same they still hurt so they too agree with this as 6 year is long period and enough for people to forget Armaan so this make things a bit easy for him to start s new life forgetting thr world of glamour he settled in a small town and started working in orphanage kids of orphanage brings snile to him since his deeds are high enough to separate him from kids he wants to give all love and support to the one who are need if it he too for compensation of hid deed has started this work this orphanage also recieve donation from Verma production Saumya's nature of simplicity leads to donate a more than a half portion of their wealth to various organisations who are working for development of society
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Another leap of 10 years
Verma production house has completed its 15 years kids too have settled well in their career elder most generation are weaker now with passing ages Saumya's father Tara's parents have left this world Sushma Harshvardhan are too counting their days as they have received everything os settled now but a feeling as a parents can never be ignored no matter how much angry they are with Armaan but during there last days they want to meet him atleast for a few moments they too are upset as they couldn't convince Tara and Saumya for remarriage but seeing their happiness this worries of them got vanish they are more happy with the life they have
Saumya and Tara are there in mid and end 40s still they are known for their talent though they are growing older they are shining brighter Tara along with Prince are best known music band they perform at international level too Saumya's production house has faces losses at points but then she rise like a lion who turns more powerful after taking some steps back Jashan Jahan helps in her production house and too work for Bano as 'Bano' is a brand now despite if hier of thr band they never show any ego and adamant they act as a normal employee
Shipi and Mahi are best known doctors they too are married and have a son and a daughter respectively who are best friends and quite younger to rest three
Kashis has adopted a girl and a boy child from orphanage
Now like everytime they are planning fir celebration in orphange as they love to spend love so either its a bday or a sucess party they celebrate it in orphange for bringing smile in faces of those kids
Today also they are celebrating sucessful years all the members today is seeming different as if something for good is going to happen
Everybody left for orphange before them kids have gone to decorate and chevk everything themselves seeing their humble nature someone hiding behind smiles
Soon everyone approached their
"Attention everyone"Prince started
"We all know why we are" Jashan continued "Apart from this we want to say something"Jahan completed
Seeing their bond everyone smiles at them
"Aaj ham yahha success party karne aaye hain iss success ko toh sab jante par ishke piche ki kahani kam hi jante" Prince started "aaj ham aapko batayenge tin un strong women ke bare main jinke waja se aaj ham yanha hain"Jashan Jahan said getting emotional
"Aap hame down to earth gentlr humble jobhi bolte inke baje se hain aaj yeh nahin hote toh ham bhi nahin hote they are our stronger powerful super mom bachpan se kehena cahata tha par kehe nahin pata tha log ke liye superman hote super hero hote hame bas hamari maa hame superman lagti jinhone na sirf hamre bachaya papa ki kami aane nahin di career ki crucial stage main bhi hamara sath nahi choda ham pa ko miss na kare isliye waqt na ho kar bhi waqt nikalti hame chot na lage apni ghao ko geheta karte huye bhi hame sambhala thank you m thanks a lot mom we love of you we are proud of you" said Jashan Jahan making all emotional remembering past incidents kids run to her as Saumya action them to call they engulf each other
Prince too starts with tears in his eyes,"I used to be a spoilbrat I used to hurt you kitna torture kuhay aapko?"he asked to Tara who shook hetmr head in denying after a pause je continues,"main cahe kitna bhi bura raha aapka pyaar kabhi kam na huya papa ke jane ke baad main aapka duniya tha main aapke pain ko kabhi samjha nahin par apne kabhi mujhe pain hone nahi diya bachpan aapki insult karta tha fir bhi aapne mujhe pyaar kiyaa fir rastha dikhaya aapne apna talent tak mujhe diya hain main hamesha aapka rini rahungi main mafi ke layak nahin fir bhi sorry maa I love you maa and proud of you" he too runs toward Tara wiping his tears
Now three of them bring Saumya and Tara to the stage and everyone right there are clapping for them
Sushma too take the mick from them, "thanks mujhe Sushma se milane ke liye wha Sushma jo shaadi se pehele thi family ke liye khud ko bhula di thi"
Harsh, "Thanks for proving me wrong I have always prefer my sons over daughters I have four gems par value nahin ki bete ne rang badla toh pata chala, ab main proud feel karta ki tum logo ka papa huin"
Jashan Jahan helps him in walking as he was on wheel chair passing age has made him weaker while Prince hugs Sushma
"Children hamesha yaad rakhna janha bhi jao apne parents ki kadar karna unka janare life main bahut importance hain" said Sushma "and koyi bada nahin hota dono equally special hote apne main unique hote kabhi khud ko kam na samjhana and aaj kal ki ladkiyan ladko se kam nahin ladke kabhi jyaada nahin dono equal hain" added Harsh
"This is the surprise which is planned by three of them" said Kashis joining them followed by others
Saumya Tara looked amazed they are proud of their children all this years of struggle pays there kids are now good human how they wished them to
They shared hug after cake cutting and some emotional session they started serving others
This scene was witnessed by someone who was smiling them he was emotional unable to control himself Armaan decided to leave but while moving Jashan caught him
"Aap kanha ja rahe uncle aayiye plz" Jashan said while running towards him
Now its turn hard for Armaan to move away but still he tried but in vain
Jahan too entered the scene "Kiya huya Jashan?" He asked he tell him about him
Both of them try to convince when they touch his hand they feels familiar feeling after facing him whole world turns for them they are shocked to see Armaan call for their family everybody has the same reaction
Jashan started shouting at him bringing everyone back to normal, "Aap yanha jyun aaye?"
"Aab kiya cahiye kiya bigadna hain aapko" Jahan too joined
Armaan was speechless his eyes were filled with tears
"We hate you ham aapka sakal dekhna nahin cahate aapne kabse dekha toh chale kyun nahin gaye"Jahan said both Jashan Jahan are breaking Prince comes there to give them the required support all this year of pain was coming they are expressing themselves now this side was never witnessed by anyone everone was crying
Armaan replied while wiping his tears "galti sudharne" kaise yakeen kare?aap kitni baar dhoka diye ho mom ko dadi ko hame tak nahin choda hame toh paiso ke liye kidnap kiye the"Jashan countered
"Tum se tumhara pa China tha mom pa se beta khud se inshaan kehelana ka hak usi ko sudharne, main udhr nahin gaya kyunki bigadna nahin i cahata tha already bahut kuch kar cuks tha ab kar kuch problem na ho isliye main dur raha" main oldage home orphange main rehekar un bacho ke sath time spent karta tha taki unko ek parent jaisa pyaar de sakun ur orphanage main bete ki kami na ho kisiko yeh dhyaan deta tha" said Armaan
All of them are aware with this and witnessing after msny years was shock for them
He runs toward hi parents and ask for hug with his pleading eyes they too hug him
He turn toward Saumya with his eye looking down
Saumya look at him remembering all oas incident from their first meet to wedding from their lovely dovely moments to the day when they get the good news to his chaal
"Sorry tak bolne layak nahin fir bhi bol raha ji bhi kiya na ushks result bhugat cuka realise kar cuka sacha pyaar in bacho sang time spend kar pata laga bonding pyaar kiya hota " "main doobara start ki umeed bhi nahin rakh raha as is layak main huin nahin" Armaan put his apology
Saumya comes from her dumb stare and replied "aapke liye achaa hain"sahi kaha ur hima nahin" "aap apne parents ur bacho se mil sakte"
Jashan Jahan are protesting but then think i give him another chance
"Par kabhi wapas nahin ja paunga mera al nahin banta"he said
Harshvardhan health detorate as he was already weak this scene turns tougher on him his last wish of meeting his son before final good bye is fulfilled so he too was declared dead
Its comes the time of funeral everyone in the family crying Sushma waa at worss but still she is trying for bear in staying stronger
Armaan was there too remembering rhe moments with hi pa how his father was goid but he was worse
Priest call him for completing rituals but he stood there Sushms enters the scene declares that rituals to be done by Saumya Tara and Kashis Mahi as all thess years they are there support system Armaan was not there for them Armaan too support this he was thinking the same so he was bot moving at that time
Rituals were done performed by them
Armaan too take his leave promising to meet Sushma he said he is committed to those children wants fulfil his duty by spending life there
Within a year Sushma too left this materialistic world Armaan comes ti attend the funeral and as usual leave but this time before leaving kids hug him indicating that they have accept him he smiles leave the place
Now after settling the kids Saumya Tara announced their retirement charge was taken by the kids they started visiting Armaan Saumya and Tara are happy for their kids as they have turned into the men that a society need and they are doing good in their professional and personal life their DILs are good too life flows like this...
The end
Thanks for reading 💗💗
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Plz plz plz forgive me for typos as main College main break main karke likhi so it was hard for me to concentrate I hope its upto the mark I hope achaa ending de payi redemption is good decision or not idk I just want to show positivity so, I bring them from parallel world😂(jaisa sochi thi waisa nahin kar payi 😶)
Chalo I am leaving classes ka time ho Raha i just hope makers se jyaada bekar nahin banayi
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