Raya SHORT STORY: Tvam, Mama Jevana Hetuna(NOW ON WATTPAD, note Pg.20) - Page 13

What a pleasant surprise , mujhe do do naye parts ek saath mile padne ke liye

I m so happy that u dedicated an entire episode to Pri dealing with this news, her insecurities, apprehensions about embracing motherhood.

Extremely heartwarming n beautiful, made me a little emo too ...

Can't help but be reminded of how the makers made Pri rot in jail away from mom, husband , family, during this vulnerable stage.. 😡

Anyways it's been almost more than a month I think since I stopped watching the show completely..

It's only through these ff that I feel connected to RaYa..

This 5th part is my favorite amongst all the parts so far ..❤️❤️

Brilliant! Pregnancy tracks typically present only the happy side. Truth is, it's a also a time when all your insecurities, fears surface to the top. It's a LOT to deal with - and the emotional upheaval combined with the physical changes & mood swings make it a bumpy ride, altleast the first 3-4 months.

You have captured her thought process amazingly well! Kudos to you!

Again, Pri's character on the show was reduced to her mard rants and father's shraap dialogues and turning her into the stereotypical mahaan FL.

It never showed how a troubled childhood leaves you with insecurities that take many many years to stop tormenting you.

And it will be interesting to see how Ram & Priya deal with the insecurities - both hers and Ram's. Looking forward to the next part..😊

SB❤️ ..... I loved that you detailed more on Priya's thoughts, it gave us more insight on what she thinks, and you have nailed it to the T!!!

I am curious to know of she shares it with her beloved, and they have a deep nice convo about it, for that I am ready to wait for the home kit results.😆

Awesome update loved it continue soon

Aaah SB kya slow, sweet torture karti ho!! Such a long detailed part on Priya’s apprehension and how she's feeling. I understand this is important but you deprived us of having RaYa and that I can't handle 😩😭

When is the next part coming? I want it NOW!

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

Aaah SB kya slow, sweet torture karti ho!! Such a long detailed part on Priya’s apprehension and how she's feeling. I understand this is important but you deprived us of having RaYa and that I can't handle 😩😭

When is the next part coming? I want it NOW!

Originally posted by: Anonymmus

SB❤️ ..... I loved that you detailed more on Priya's thoughts, it gave us more insight on what she thinks, and you have nailed it to the T!!!

I am curious to know of she shares it with her beloved, and they have a deep nice convo about it, for that I am ready to wait for the home kit results.😆

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Brilliant! Pregnancy tracks typically present only the happy side. Truth is, it's a also a time when all your insecurities, fears surface to the top. It's a LOT to deal with - and the emotional upheaval combined with the physical changes & mood swings make it a bumpy ride, altleast the first 3-4 months.

You have captured her thought process amazingly well! Kudos to you! THANK YOU DAZZLE😘

Again, Pri's character on the show was reduced to her mard rants and father's shraap dialogues and turning her into the stereotypical mahaan FL.

It never showed how a troubled childhood leaves you with insecurities that take many many years to stop tormenting you. Which is why your SB took matters into her hands🤣

And it will be interesting to see how Ram & Priya deal with the insecurities - both hers and Ram's. Looking forward to the next part..😊

Waiting for the next part❤️

Aa bhi jao greeshmaputri ab kya seedha sardiyon me darshan dogi ? 😭