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RaYa OS: Blind Love


Book Cover credit : PriyaArshiSarun


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Love can be blind at times. For Vedika, her love for wealth and obsession with gaining the title Mrs Ram Kapoor blinded her to the truth that not everything can be attained by persistence and evilness. Which only made her an a scorned women intended on revenge.

Love can be blind at times. For Kanika, her husband's blind love for her remained an unbreakable chain that kept her trapped in their marriage. In an desperate attempt to break the chain, she set out to destroy her name making her an desperate women intended on getting her freedom.

Love can be blind at times. For Priya Sood, her blind love for her husband meant she had to go to his rescue even when in turn she would only get insults and see the hatred in his eyes directed towards her. In her attempt to help her husband, she opened the gates of truth that can never be shut down again. Her attempts to help caused the secret to break and made her a liar in front of her husband.

Love can be blind at times, For Ram Kapoor. His blind love for his family would always be the cause of pain. It didn't matter when it broke him into pieces. Because he had been too blind in his love, he could never see the truth about the destruction it left behind to those he claimed to love as well. What will happen when for the first time, Ram Kapoor's blind love for his family gets shaken


Author's Note:

I had an idea based on Kanika's part of the story as an one shot. About a wife who tried to have an affair to escape her marriage. I just incorporated that part of the idea with this one shot.


Readers Age Group : 13+.

Trigger Warning: " Affairs, Mention of domestic abuse, infidelity, drinking habit"

Extent of the Triggers :" Low"

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so beautiful ❤ Were you going to deprive us of this? I am glad you wrote this, loved your RaYa. You have explained even Kanika's behaviour so beautifully. I wish Priya could see Ram making his choice in the end, but tomorrow is another day. 💔

Beautiful work, Nita 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so beautiful, I just loved it.😊❤

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Amazing OS! You write so beautifully!

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WOW in capital letters 👏👏👏 this is hands down one of the best pieces I have read on the revelation ⭐️ and one thing I loved the most in your story which I seldom see in others, is the importance you have given to supporting characters and used them well. They r no mere props and I loved that. How I wish the minister track could unfold this way if CVs had enough brains things wouldn’t go this bad in the show. But if anyone were to do damage control to this show they would have written it the way u did. Brilliant and I hope u continue to write on RaYa 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I don’t even have words anymore. You write so exceptionally. This piece is BEAUTIFUL!! 🥺❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: tournesol


This is so beautiful ❤ . Thanks Tia. So glad you liked it 🤗.


Were you going to deprive us of this?. Yep. I almost gave up 😆. I did try after your words. So in a way you are responsible for making it happen .

I am glad you wrote this, loved your RaYa. I am kind of glad too. Now it won't haunt me like the past two days 🤪.


You have explained even Kanika's behaviour so beautifully. I originally planned a one shot as original fiction similar to Kanika character arc in this OS. But then end up adding it to this one 😆


I wish Priya could see Ram making his choice in the end, but tomorrow is another day. 💔. Aww I wish I could have shown it too. But I was determined to end it as OS and it was already reaching around 3000 words. So couldn't add more scenes.


Beautiful work, Nita 🤗. Thanks Meri Tia. Your support means a lot ❤️.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it... This is so beautiful.... Do write more on Raya... Awesome it is

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You giving it a try means a lot to me 🤗 and I am glad you added this character arc for Kanika, because it gave a new dimension to the story. Keep writing more. ❤

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