Our tangled star strings, From you to me (FF on hiatus) - Page 13

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Sathya, you're back with a Big Bang!!🥳 How I missed this story!❤️ Another wonderful update❤️

I enjoyed reading this very much🤗

Oh, And third year, already?😆Goodluck love👍🏼❤️

Pooh🤗!!! I'm glad you loved the latest! There's ANOTHER twist, that'll probably be here next update that i think will make things a little more interesting than they are right now... 😳

As for third year, I wasn't really expecting a holiday, so I suppose I'm good... 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Pooh🤗!!! I'm glad you loved the latest! There's ANOTHER twist, that'll probably be here next update that i think will make things a little more interesting than they are right now... 😳

As for third year, I wasn't really expecting a holiday, so I suppose I'm good... 😆

Another Twist?

Aw I really liked this!! I genuinely love the idea that you introduced in the very first update! Something about imagining a red thread that connects us to our soulmate is so beautiful It really fits our Shivi well!

I really loved reading Shiva's POV! It was so well written! The part where he holds out his hand for Raavi during the phera's and Raavi ends up holding the sleeve of his sherwani melted me 😳 it was incredibly cute! Also, Raavi's condition was so amazing! I'm glad that she decided to draw a clear line between her past and her present by starting things anew! 👏

Originally posted by: mandira2

Aw I really liked this!! I genuinely love the idea that you introduced in the very first update! Something about imagining a red thread that connects us to our soulmate is so beautiful It really fits our Shivi well!

I really loved reading Shiva's POV! It was so well written! The part where he holds out his hand for Raavi during the phera's and Raavi ends up holding the sleeve of his sherwani melted me 😳 it was incredibly cute! Also, Raavi's condition was so amazing! I'm glad that she decided to draw a clear line between her past and her present by starting things anew! 👏

Yes, it is so beautiful, isn't it? The very idea of a soulmate? Someone who understands you no matter what?

I'm glad you loved Shiva's POV! The sherwani thing was meant to be about her willingness in their new relationship. Not for something romantic, not yet. But for basic understanding and new beginnings, no matter where they may lead... Also, glad you loved Raavi's shart so much, because I feel like it's one of the main factors that pushed Shiva so much. That she wouldn't move forward completely... That she regretted things initially... You know?

PS Found it, and got back to you! As promised! 😆😎

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

RES

UNRES

Okay I don't know how I feel about the start, starting with Dev and Rishita. Rishita being absolute moron is no news, we've all known it. What is surprising is Dev doing or feeling something else than "Bas Karo Rishita!" about the things she says. It's actually very good to see him repent for what he did and how he was off the hook too instantly in my opinion. Even though it has been a long road for his brother, finding love and being happy.

I LOVED how you kept Suman, grey as we know her, accepting the wrong her family did but also in no mood to repent or be ashamed enough to let her be coddled into saying yes to Raavi's demands. That is true Suman, the one which we expected and never got. Though, she's ruined now I don't know what she would have done in the show if Raavi had actually put forth some condition.

The second best part of this chapter (I'd come to first one later) is Raavi asking for a different Mandap because the current one has simply been tainted by fraud and malice. BOMB MOVE really. Of course Suman would misunderstand, of course she'll go ahead and prick every little demand because that's just how she is. Callous in nature, firm when necessary but mostly callous of everyone apart from her own sons. I am going to zone out Raavi thanking Kaaki because I don't think it was an unreasonable or a BIG demand you know? It was something I wanted to happen because the sanctity of the Mandap had been ruined by lies, drama and deception. GREAT MOVE.

Shiva's POV about the refusal scene was an added bonus. Made him give much more depth than in actuality.

The HAND STUFF though. Oh My World. Hands are so underrated when it comes to intimacy, recent Bridgerton season would concur what I'm trying to say here. Raavi willfully clutching his sleeve after his hesitant withdrawal was very beautiful.

The BEST part for me had to be Raavi grasping her husband's sleeve when the man who had wronged her tries to go ahead and congratulate her as if he hadn't done any damage at all speaks a lot to me. It is the trust, the acceptance that she had thrown his way as his wife that got to me. It was the slightest of moments but very very very beautiful.

I'm sorry this comment might be full out of place because it has not been an easy day...I want to succumb and cry myself to sleep, only thing is that I can't. Because WE DON'T HAVE choices anymore, or a room.

Ooookkk. Dev. OG Dev? Regretted instantly. Apologised right in the mandap to Shiva. Actually tried to talk to Rishita so she wouldn't make life so hard for Raavi. The guy was truly good at heart, you know? And I still felt like he got off the hook easily, so this Dev is suffering sooooo much more.

I think actual Suman would have made Raavi's life a living hell, in retrospect atleast. But my Suman is going to be gray with a good heart.

I'm glad you loved the shart! And i know Raavi didn't have to thank Suman, but does Raavi know that? Hm hmm?

Hand intimacy, i think, is a very Shivi/KDice thing. It signified her grudging acceptance for him on the show, and here it shows her hesitant willingness.

And as for holding on to Shiva instinctually, it's a pre wedding Raavi thing. When she's in trouble, can't spoil her image with something, she goes to Shiva, not Dev. Atleast in my headcanons.

Hey loved your story. Please continue this. Waiting for update from long time. I hope you will continue it.

Ye aage nahi badh raha naaa ab 😆

Please please update and complete the story.

Have you stopped writing this story.

I really wanna read.

Please I request you to update.

You are such wonderful writer.

I am loving this FF

Originally posted by: RichaPaan

Please please update and complete the story.

Have you stopped writing this story.

I really wanna read.

Please I request you to update.

You are such wonderful writer.

I am loving this FF

Hey there.... I'm really sorry I've left you hanging here, but I've disconnected a bit too much from Shivi, what with the way the show's been handling their story. So yeah, currently this is on hiatus, and although I might update at some point, in my heart I feel like that's just not happening.

Thank you for all the love! And I'm really sorry about this. I hope you understand where I'm coming from though.

Love,

Sathya. ❤

Dont be sorry dear. I can understand. Even I dont feel connected with the show anymore. I have stopped watching and started reading FF, which are giving more peace.

No prob, I will wait once you feel to write it again and wait for the update.

I soo hope you will get inspiration to complete this.

You are brilliant writer. And I crave for good writing and finished stories.

Thanks for replying.

Love,

Richa