MaAn FF Our Little World Completed pg114 updt Jul 5 - Page 68

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kp26

Totally imagine the shah drama happening 🌝 itni jaldi itne saare hafte bita diye tumne but bahut ache se!!❤ me is also confused- was samar actually in love n trying move on or maybe it was infatuation which he misunderstood as love😗🙃

mr. bholuram is not so bholuram and doing things which is making his gf go crazy🤣🙈


Ha ha I wanted a small leap for the story to move on... hence❤️ yea only time would tell...


Yup Mr. Bholuram becoming Mr. Besharam by the day😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kp26

Oh god, story from aarav's pov is soooo wonderfully written tbh! could feel every emotion which is described! Amazing huh Tiana❤❤


Aarav has been looking at the Kapadia's life from the outside so I thought he would be a better person to explain❤️


Thank you❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nysha11

Loved everything be its samar's situation 😕

Anuj ☺️☺️

Stop being so limited increase the love does man😛

Finally the most awaited bond aarav and anu ❤️just loved the convo

What is V upto❓🤔


Congratulations on 100th page Tiana 👏


Anuj is ❤️


Aarav has always seen the Kapadia's... been an observer hence I thought him explaining would be the best for Anu to know the truth😊 So so happy you liked it❤️


V does things to make MaAn close...😆 So let's cheer him up...Bring it on V🤣

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Aww you bought it to the 100th pageThank you my bhichdi behen❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Tiana. Absolutely brilliant. Loved it. The whole backstory of Aarav and all.


Wow. I'm so glad you're keeping Mukku smart and independent as well. Loved it sooo much..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: Amykapadia

Tiana. Absolutely brilliant. Loved it. The whole backstory of Aarav and all.


Wow. I'm so glad you're keeping Mukku smart and independent as well. Loved it sooo much..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Thank you very much🤗❤️ It's truly encouraging to see that you are enjoying the backstory of Aarav given that he doesn't belong to the show❤️


Mukku is Anujs sister... She may make mistakes but she isn't dumb❤️


Thank you🤗❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Tia I just read all 4 chapters together...loved every bit of it❤️... mukku being smart... much waited for Anu and aarav conversation... loving his honesty...🤗waiting for vanraj to make a mistake 😁

Congratulations on completing 100❤️

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absolutely loving this build up. Like wow 💖💖💖

Also please update whenever convenient. No pressure at allllll 💖💖💖💖💖

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~35~


"Sorry..."


Anu gave a small smile.


"You know... I believe that I did a mistake too..."


"No, no... I uh.. I..."


"You really think a girl doesn't know if she is stared at?"


"Huh?"


"I knew that someone was looking at me... but being brought up in a very strict house where I was taught from a very young age that boys are monsters, I dared not to look at whoever it was. I was so scared that I told my mother that someone was looking at me and she immediately started to look for grooms out of fear that her daughter would be tainted. Had I had some courage and turned around and looked at him... I would have known it was not a monster.... Because of my fear, I lost 25 years of my life living caged with that monster. I think I was punished enough for that foolishness of mine... now enough about me... tell me more... I know Anuj came back after the accident..."


"He did... but everything had changed by then... Aunty-Ma and Uncle were gone all of a sudden and Mukku was broken... she knew her mother and father would never come back... she was only 12 and to shut the pain... she started imagining that you would someday come and become the mother she had lost... I was so frustrated and tried to make her see sense at first but then let her have the fantasy after Mom told me it was her way of coping grief... she kept the faith that you would come... and it helped her through the toughest days... I hated you more then because I knew you would never come... then we fell in love... and... and broke up..."


He paused and wiped a tear off his eye.


"All the years alone I kept hating you because I blamed you for our misfortunes just as much as I blamed Anuj... ever since you entered Anuj's life... life became bad for all of us... then, that day I came back and saw you... I was so angry... at you... because you had come too late... but then... Anuj explained and finally this dumb brain saw sense... I know I made a lot of mistakes in the past because of my anger... but I really want to make it up... and I believe the first thing is to stop hating people for no reason... so there..."


She nodded.


"I hope someday you will love me for who I am too... Until then let's be friends."


He smiled at her, her offer of friendship after knowing his true feelings making its way inside his otherwise closed heart at once. He took her outstretched hand and shook it. Someone clearing their throat made them look towards the door. Anuj stood there looking at both of them.


"Coach...? You called me..."


Anuj nodded and walked towards him settling himself down in the couch beside him.


"I wanted to talk... but before that congratulations kid for winning the cup."


"Thank you, Coach... my Lady luck did wish me the best before I left..."


He gave a wide smile and Anuj's eyes widened in surprise.


"She met you? She never told me that..."


"She came home the day before I left... uh... we talked... finally..."


"So is she... did she...?"


"No no no, she asked me to give her time..."


Anuj heaved a sigh of relief.


"I told you she still cares... ok I wanted to talk something important... it's about Mukku's business partner..."


"Mr. Shah?"


"Yes... as I said before, I don't trust him... he is cunning. I am sure he has planned something big. I am worried about Mukku... she said she would take care... but..."


"But you don't trust that guy so you want me to do something..."


"Yes..."


Anu looked at Anuj, feeling hurt. They had been talking every single day about the same and yet he had felt the need to call Aarav. She opened her mouth to protest, but Aarav spoke first.


"Coach... I think you need to wait... you know Mukku... she would run away if you push her badly..."


"But..."


Aarav sighed knowing that Anuj and overprotectiveness walked hand in hand. He knew of the habit only too well.


"I promise nothing will happen to her... I am going to her, now."


"Will you talk to her?"


"About Mr. Shah? No... if she says she will handle, she will handle it... I am not going to push her... but you don't worry... I will be by her side... that man cannot hurt her..."


Anuj didn't look convinced but Aarav stood up.


"You need to stop worrying, Coach... Let go. Things will be alright soon"


When Anuj said nothing, Aarav turned to Anu whose eyes were fixed on her man.


"Bhabhi... please handle him. I am leaving..."


With that, he left. As the cabin door closed shut, Anu raised her eyebrow


"So... you have something to say... I believe."


"What?"


"I guess I have been repeating those words that Aarav just now said everyday in vain... what's the point when you don't even listen..."


"I do listen... I do listen, Anu... but how do I get over the fear of losing Mukku again..."


"You think you are the only one who is afraid? Do you know how many nights I have nightmares of something happening to her?"


"Then why don't you stop her...?"


"Because she's not a five year old whom I can lock inside a room... she has asked for some time and I promised her that I will give it... you promised too.."


"I can't Anu... I can't..."


Anu sighed.


"You need to let go. She is 32, she knows what she is doing and she has promised to treat Mr. Shah as nothing more than her business partner... From our bedtime conversations, I do know that she treats him as professionally as she would treat any other colleague... in fact she doesn't even trust him..."


"But she is my baby sister..."


"She is my baby too... It's not that I don't worry... but sometimes we need to stand at a distance and watch... if you hold too tight, it may break... I only know it too well... I promised her I will be there for her and I will be there... if she rises, I will be there cheering... if she falls, I will be there to catch her... That's all I can do right now... and that's all I will do..."


He said nothing and she stood up.


"You always say that I am the hero and heroine of my story... Let Mukku be the same in hers..."


She turned to leave.


"Where are you going?"


"To the Shah house, Bapuji has been calling me over for a long time... I am going there and staying there tonight... oh... and you may think I haven't noticed... but I do know that you have been creating excuses to prevent me from spending time in the Shah house... I never complained about it... but not today. I am leaving now."


"No.."


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He reached out his hand and held her pallu tight in his hand.


"No..."


She turned around and looked at him, her eyes demanding answers.


"Why?"


He opened his mouth to say something but she interrupted him.


"And don't you dare tell me that we have this conference, that meeting or this visit... I have had enough of excuses... I want the truth, the absolute truth... else I leave this minute..."


"Are you really ready to know the truth?"


Something in the tone of his voice suddenly created a lump in her throat. She swallowed it and nodded. He dropped her pallu and took her hand in his and gently pulled her towards him making her sit right next to him. He clutched her hand tightly as if holding on to her dear life.


"The truth?"


He took in a deep breath.


"The truth is you still think thats your home."


"Anuj? What are you saying? I left that place.."


"Yea... You have been in our home for sometime now too... yet I feel a part of you is always there at that toxic place..."


"Anuj, my children are there... a part of me will always remain there..."


"Oh I don't mean the children... Pakhi, Samar, Toshu and Kinjal will always be in my life too... I am talking about the rest of the people..."


"Mr. Shah and Kavya don't mean a thing to me..."


"But his parents do... don't they?"


She raised her eyebrow shaking her head slightly.


"They have done a lot for me... they are like my parents..."


He removed her hand from his and looked away from her.


"See... this is exactly what I am afraid of..."


"Anuj...?"


His voice a little louder, he said


"Those people manipulate you, play with your emotions and get what they want... yet you never seem to want to draw any boundaries.."


"They don't manipulate me... why would they do that? They love me..."


"Love what love? Oh they say they love you... Really, Anu... then why is Bapuji calling you to stay there when he knows that his dear son tried to play mind games on Christmas Eve?"


"He said he will talk to his son not to trouble me."


"But that didn't stop him from sending Pakhi... Is he oblivious of that too? And Why is Baa calling you there only when there is too much work to be done or when people come over? Can't she hire a maid or ask her daughter in law for help? She taunts you and disrespects your decisions yet she claims to love you and calls you whenever it's convenient for her. How selfish..."


Anu shut her eyes as her brain told her he was right and her heart refused to believe in him. She mumbled


"It's not like that... they love me..."


His voice now rough and harsh, a tinge of irritation in it, he said


"Come on, Anu... why are you being so blind? Love? What love? 26 years... 26 years you obeyed them, served them and cared for them... but they were never there when you needed them."


"They were there... Bapuji..."


"You often say that Vanraj respects his mother and father the most... Had they stood up for you... do you really think that Vanraj would have abused you all these years? Just saying a few words of assurance after being quiet throughout the abuse... you think it's love? Will you stay quiet if Aarav says a word against Mukku...?"


"No how can I?"


"Exactly my point... the day he came back you were ready to raise your hand at him when he wanted to touch her after she said no... you didn't even know what she meant to him and it had been hardly 10 days since you had met her... all you knew then was that he was doing something she didn't like and you stopped him... all those years, the man had hurt you yet you tell me they didn't stop him once..."


"That's different..."


"How different? You said 17 years ago Baa was also against you going to the dance competition... How sure are you that she had not planned with Vanraj to stop you?"


The missing passport flashed in front of her eyes.


"She wouldn't have..."


"Okay, even if she didn't, she didn't support you did she?"


"She was scared of people talking bad about me... that's why..."


"What nonsense... Stop it, Anu... why don't you see the plain fact... they are not your parents... they never were... you know deep down that is the truth... you just don't want to accept it because if you do... your little pretend happy family will break... just once... just once remember how your life was and then think... this time don't pretend... you don't have to live there anymore... no use in pretending everything is rosy posy... it's not wrong for once to see the truth as it is..."


She trembled remembering the loneliness she had felt over there while he continued without noticing her.


"All these years they never said a word when he kept abusing you... they either added to the insults or stood silent letting you get abused to the point that you still carry scars..."


As the conflict between her brain and heart intensified, she whispered.


"Anuj... stop..."


He turned and looked at her trembling figure and wrapped his hand around her holding her tight. His voice soft and gentle a complete contrast to the rough tone he had used till now, he said


"I am sorry, Anu... but you needed to know the truth... if not today... someday you would have known it..."


She pushed him away and released herself from his embrace. Standing up, she turned to leave. He gave a defeated sigh.


"So you are leaving..."


"I will come back..."


He said nothing as she walked out the door.


***


A/N 1: Please don't be mad at Anuj for being harsh. The man is already restless because he feels he is losing his sister to Vanraj. Now his love is also going back there. His excuses didn't work. It's a moment of weakness where he spouts the harsh truth. He is being a human.


A/N 2: Please don't be mad at Anu for not staying back. For 26 years she believed that whatever she got was love. A single word from Anuj would not make an immediate difference specially when she is already mad at him. She has seen what a family is at the Kapadias. She knows now yet she is hanging on to the old dream castle she built. She is being a human.


Please be kind to both of them🙃 as the story progresses you would know more of their perspectives. Thank you.

Edited by ...Tiana... - 3 years ago

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