New Maan Story.....kuch hatke haii😉👍 FF Ch UPDT PG 17- Page 6

Nice update... good to see an intelligent Anu... do continue🤗

It was sooo fabulous part again!❤❤ Do make it interesting my adding twists n turns😌.. uhh who is this mr!?😗 I wanna know him, pls update soon!🤧

This was so beautiful...Anu ko pata chal gayaaa ki Anuj loves someone

Please twists and turns nahi...woh show me kaafi hai..let Anuj propose and them start dating please please mat tadpao hume 😭

Very well written...🤗❤️

Jaldi jaldi likho wanna see more...itna accha plot hai😻

Originally posted by: Kitty584

This was so beautiful...Anu ko pata chal gayaaa ki Anuj loves someone

Please twists and turns nahi...woh show me kaafi hai..let Anuj propose and them start dating please please mat tadpao hume 😭

Very well written...🤗❤️

Jaldi jaldi likho wanna see more...itna accha plot hai😻

okay......will try to write a good story with no twist and turns😊

Chapter 4

Inside the club

Anu tries to find the person for whom she came here…….

Devika - yaar Anu….I think woh toh yahaan hai hi nhi….

Anu - yese kese …..bulaya hai toh jarur hoga…or vese bhi mein ache se janti hi ki voh itni asaani se samne toh nhi ayega……

Bunty - vese Anu hm yahaan kiska wait kar rahe hai ?

Anu - mere bhai Adi ka….says trying to find him….

Anuj- (in mind) acha bhai hai….mein toh dar hi gaya tha…

Anu - devu tu msg kar use bol aa raha hau toh theek varna mein jaa rahi hu gaana gane……

Devika - tujhe abhi bhi gaana gana hai…mtlb isse Acha dhundh le use.

Anu - mein kyu dhundu…??..aa jayega apne app…..

Mr unknown to Anu - excuse me ??

Anu turns and looks….he is boy of just little bigger then her age….and he is wearing a cap and googles…..

Anu - yes ….

Mr Unknown - kuch kehna tha….

Anu - kaho…

Mr unknown - mene na pura club ghoom liya pr tumse jyada haseen ladki pure club mein nhi hai 😉

Anuj fumes with anger and closed his fist….

Devika - areey yeh kya yeh toh samne se line mar raha hai….sharm nhi aati

Anu smriks…..😏

Anu - ruk toh sahi Devika……

And turns to Mr unknown and takes little steps towards him and seeing her getting close he takes step backwards……..

Anu - acha…ji……toh ye bhi bata do ….aisa kya haseen lag gaya mujh mein….???

and she raised her bow….

Devika,Anuj and bunty - 😶

Anu - bolo….

And the person hits the wall and there is a little distance left between them……

Devika- Anu….

Anu - shh..sh…and signals Devika to be silent….

Anu - tum bolo…hmmm..

Mr unknown- w…..w….w…woh…..

And Anu came closer to him and removes his cap and wears it….

Anu - hogaya tera…..itni gandi acting….bhai sahab…..fifth class ka bacha bhi tere se achi acting kar leta hai….kyu bhaiya ji….

Devika , Anuj and Bunty- bhaiyaaa….😲

Adi removes his googles……

Adi - yaar Anu …..tune mujhe itni jaldi pehchan liya…

Anu - toh….Acha chlo mere dosto se mil lo….

Anu- bhai yeh hai Anuj or yeh hai Bunty or ise tum janti hi ho Devika…..

Adi shakes hand with Anuj and Bunty ……

Bunty - ik min…ik min….Anu yeh tumhara bhai hai toh ….yeh. sb jo abhi hua….voh kya tha….??

Anuj - haan mtlb…vo chedna….?

Devika raised bow to Anuj …….

Anuj - mera mtlb hai yeh sb kyu ?

Anu - batati hu….Anuj woh Adi or mene bet lagayi thi ki hm dono mein se Kon behtar act kar sakta hai…..soo yeh sb wahi….??

Adi - or mein bet haar gaya…..kyunki Anu mujhe pehchan gayi or mein pehchan bhi nhi paya tha…..😔

Anu giggles…..😃 - yaayyyy ✌

Devika - tu pehchan nhi paya mtlb….

Anu - ruk mein batati hu….tujhe yaad mein college start hone se ik din pehle mene tujhe kahaan tha ki mein kisi se milne jaa rahi hu….?

Devika - haan yaad hai….tu uss din bilkul alag lg rahi thi…mtlb tune zindagi mein pehli baar high heels …..knee length frock pehni thi…with makeup….

Anuj (tries to imagine) and 😊

Anu - haan wahi…woh mein bhai se milne gyi thi …

Devika - Adi se ….?? Un kapdo mein??... mujhe toh laga tu date pe jaa rahi hai ….

Anu - tu na kuch bhi sochti hai ….

Devika - ab tu aise kapde pehnke jayegi ….toh koi bhi dhoka kha jayegi….kyu Anuj ?

Anuj - h…h…haan..

Adi - yeh madam mujhse mili pr mein ise pehchan nhi paya….mein ispe fidaa hogaya….or ise date pe legaya…..

Devika - Anu…😲….

Anu- 😂😂

Anuj - fir ..??

Anu - fir kya ye mere bhai ne mujhe propose bhi kardiya or tb mene ise bataya ki mein Kon hu 😜

And all laughed..🤣🤣

Anu - yeh toh itna shock hogaya tha….ki do din tak sadmein mein rahaaa……🤣🤣🤣

Devika - kyaa Adi Lee Anu ne tujhe bhi ulu bana diya…….

Adi - mujhe bhi mtlb…..??

Bunty - yeh pehle kabhi bhi hua hai kya..??

Devika - or kya toh na…yeh madam kam se kam 5 din tak mere se Ashok banke dating app pe baat karti rahi thi….🙁

Anu - 😂 ache se yaad hai mujhe…..

Adi - Anu tu bahot shaitan ho gayi hai…….Acha vese tune mujhe pehchana kese…??

Devika - haan mtlb…mein kuch Adi ko pehchan nhi payi…thi…

Anu - yeh mera bhola bhai….jisse abhi pyaar karta hai usse toh propose karne mein itna darta hai……toh yeh kya ladki chadega……🤣🤣

And all of them laughed….

Anu - Acha ab mein bet jeet gayi hu toh fir mera gift kb aa raha hai…..

Adi - yaar Anu….nhi voo nhi haan…tu ache se janti hai mujhe bahot dar lagta hai……

Anuj - arey yesa kya mang liya Anu ne ?

Devika and Bunty - haan….

Adi - madam ko puppy chahiye….or mujhe dogs se bahot dr lagta hai…..

Devika - mtlb Anu tu saare badle nikal rahi hai…..

Anu - or kya toh na 😁… .or vese bhi dogs kitne pyaare hote hai…or tu itna bada hoke puppy se darta hai…..??

Bunty - vese toh Anuj ko bhi dogs se dar lagta hai …🤣🤣

Anu - sachmein…..fir toh tum dono ko pareshan karne mein or bhi majaa ayega….😅😅

Adi and Anuj - nahii …😨

Devika - Acha abb chale nhi toh late hojayengein

Anu - arey yahaan tk aye hai thoda dance or gaana toh gane de…😁

Adi- vese baat toh theek hai….mene book kiya hai singing room chaloo…

In singing room

Anu - toh pehle kon gayega….

Anuj, Devika, Bunty and Adi shook head in no…

Anu - arey chlo…mein hi Shuru karti hu…tum sb karo dance….

Devika (in mind )- ab mere plan ki baari…..

Devika - theek hai karenge dance pr couple dance….

Anu - OK

Adi - tum sb enjoy karo mein abhi ata hu….

Anu starts the song……

Suna hai tere dil pe mera

Kahin na kahin naam likha hai

The lyrics of this song do something to Anuj that his heart beats faster…..💞💓

Devika take her position with Bunty and now Anuj is left only…..

Dekho na meri ankhoon mein tum chippa hai tera khaab chippa hai..

Seeing Anuj standing alone Anu came to him….and takes his hand in hers….and ask him to dance with her…..

Anu stood opposite to her and placed her hand on his shoulder and directs his hand on her waist…and she held his hand with her right hand

Kese batayu kitna chahu mein tumhe…

Lejaa zarurat ho toh meri dhadkane…

Inmein sunai degi meri khuaishee……

A sudden warmth rushed to his whole being. His face felt warm. The lyrics of the song and his hand placed on her waist and she is so closed to him…..play havoc to his senses…🥰🥰

Rehte hain na yeh hamesha rang room dono…

Zindagi ka yeh safar hai chau dhoop dono…

He slowly placed his foot forward and Anu took a step back …synchronising with him.

In hawaoon mein rahegi teri meri khushboo .....

Tere piche mein chalungi jahaan jayega tu….

Anu while singing get lost in his eyes…..she took a step back and he took step forward……

Taking her hand he turns her twice and takes her in a back hug…..

Suna hai teri takdiroon mein…tumhara mera Mel likha hai….

Anuj blushes and turns her …placing her hand on her waist again swinging……🥰☺

Jo aisa hai toh kya darta fir…

dekhe toh jara kya hota hai ….

marjaane se pehle mein jeelu tumhe…..

Anu (in mind) - he is not like others…..he is different…..and why I feel so secure with him….?

Lejaa zarurat ho toh meri dhadkane ….inmein sunai degi meri khuaishee……

Aaaa..aaa....aaa....aa......aaa...

Song ends but none of them leaves each other…..just get lost in each other…..

Devika - oooooooooo….

And her scream takes them out of their world….and they leaves each other….

Bunty - wow….Anu you sing very well….kyu Anuj tujhe kesa laga Anu ka gaana…?😉

Anuj - ….tum ..bahot acha..gaati hoo….

Anu - thank you…..Acha bhai aye….??

Devika - Adi bahar hai call pe usne kahaan voh hm sb ko drop kadega….

Anu - yeh toh Acha hai …kyunki mere pairoon ab jaan nhi hai vese bhi….mein bhai ke pass jati hu….dekhu toh kise baat kar rahe hai... ??😂

Anu leaves…..

Devika and Bunty tickles Anuj......

Devika - ohoo….kya baat hai….apni mehbooba ka gaana bada pasand aya tujhe…...

Anuj - aya toh aya…😊

Bunty- oho…acha..... tere liye mere pass ik bahot acha gift hai …..

Anuj - yesa kya hai…??

Devika - woh toh tujhe hostel jaane pata chalega…..😉😉

I will try to keep story full of msti and love just like college life.......

Kyunki show mein drama bahot hai......Will try to bring Anuj proposal soon......🥰😍

Abhi kesa laga voh jarur batana

Sorry I know only few.....so Don't have much name.........sorry if missed anyone........

Woah this is soo EXCELLENT one!!🥰 thank god voh mr. unknown was adi😂 anu is shaitan🤪 i lovedd update so much, them dancing n all🥰

Anu the prankster is⭐️

Nice update 👍🏼❤️

Wooowww arsh ua writing is improving⭐️

Yaar u wrote the dance sequence so well👏

Acha bhai tha thank God..😳

phirse cliffhanger kya gift hai yaar

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Wwwwmm

I will try to keep story full of msti and love just like college life.......

Kyunki show mein drama bahot hai......Will try to bring Anuj proposal soon......🥰😍

Abhi kesa laga voh jarur batana

Sorry I know only few.....so Don't have much name.........sorry if missed anyone........