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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Beautifully written!❤️🤗


Thank you, Smitha ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: SKCS

This is so so so beautiful. ❤️❤️❤️

Made me cry🫶🏽🫶🏽🫶🏽
Amazing words!!!


Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: DJ_3

Always love Anuj's prespective and this was heartwarming 💕


Thank you, DJ ❤️

It was interesting to write from his POV 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Kitty584

This is so beautiful..you really made me cry🥺❤❤


Thank you, Kitty ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: snehaz16

It's so emotional dear...

U have written Anuj's POV with depth and it is do heart touching...

Kudos for this amazing piece of writing ❤❤


Thank you for your lovely compliment, Sneha ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ilfordian

Hi Ruchi. I loved the story. I could feel the emotions of Anuj when he spent time with little Anu. He wants to be accepted by Anu .He wants to be the father Anu is waiting for.

He remembers when he was adopted.He remembers that he was wanted and loved by his Maa.So he is hoping little Anu will accept and love him.

Thank you Ruchi.

It is a lovely evening.I have been eating the ripe cherries off the cherry tree.


Thank you so much for being here, Hansa ❤️

Such an idyllic way to spend a summer’s evening 😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Koms9

Can't stop crying Ru, this feels personal. I've seen the yearning and expectations in my kids' eyes. Hoping every kid gets to live a happy childhood coz no child deserves any less.


You know I love your writing and this pic in your story is ❤️


To know my words have touched your heart is the best compliment. Thank you ❤️

Those little ones have the best Mum 🥰🥰


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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Oh so lovely ❤️


The little soul that doesn't want another little soul to bear the longing it once held❤️


So beautiful...


Loved it❤️❤️


You always express your thoughts so wonderfully, Tiana ❤️

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: V_ka_attitude

Ruchi, you have captured Anuj's feeling, so beautifully penned them down, deep down you can feel his yearning.

Simply soul stirring, thank you for sharing your creativity and his POV as seen thru your eyes.

Love it~Vaibhavi


Thank you so much for your kind compliment, Vaibhavi. It’s a special feeling to know your words touch a reader's heart ❤️



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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

not really sure what to say that will justify how i felt reading this but, well, this is the depth the show is lacking.👏

we need more of ^ and less hamming.

this would make for a beautiful FF. i would love to see how little Anuj adjusts to his new home. 🥺

the baseline of his character was so endearing before they turned him into Dance Deewane. im always interested in hearing about his life pre-Anupamaa.

p.s. you’re making me want to go out there and adopt a child, Ruchi. 😆

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