| ShiVi DRABBLE : Kabhi Kushboo | | His POV | - Page 6

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Bhaaaiiii chhod 😆😆😆

Kon likhe analysis I'm happy with one lamba comment haan...I ain't greedy 🤪

Good! Because my chotu message kind of got my point across, haina? I'mma never love you any less. Bas! 😆

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

What an amazing piece of writing! The angst, the pain, the tadap was so real. If only we’d gotten even half of this on screen for their wedding. KDice would’ve nailed it like nobody’s business.

And please tell me you are going to continue this. I so want to face off between ShiVi and Suman and basically the whole family. I don’t want either of them to let any of them off the hook.

Okaaayyyy I'll see what I can do...as of now though NO-FURTHER-IDEAS-DETECTED in this brain but you never know lmao 😆

Thank you so much for reading🤗

Hey Ritu 🤗

If only this happened on the show but never mind, reading this gives me peace of mind.

Will there be another part?

Originally posted by: Paru95

Ritu🤗

Congratulations on completing 9 yrs on IF🥳

I was waiting for this drabbles sonce ages and this worth all the wait😍

The angst, all the emotions, the way you portrayed Shiva's pain were all on point👍🏼And as always you tugged a string👍🏻Although it wud hv made me even more happier if Shiva did something to find her...may be thats how you wanted it to be....

"TU APNA KUCH SAMAAN WAHAAN CHOD AAYI THI

KYAA??

MAIN"

This just melts mee

Throughout the drabble you have beautifully penned down what Raavi is to Shiva....his thoughts and everytime he refers to her as his dream girl...he has atlast started to prioritize her and i can feel it that this time he wud do it 4ever😳

But i cant believe what the family is doing...itna sub kucch woh log karke they are ignoring and isolating him..its soooo relatable...its sooo THEM👏🏻

I just loved it Rituuuu😍....sooooooo much❤️

Paruuuuu you sweetheartttt 😭❤️

I know everyone's kinda disappointed he made no effort but for me I think him letting her go represents the intensity he felt for her.

He knew she'll be unhappy in his house and that is what he didn't want.

Thanks for reading.

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Congratulations on 9 years bro !!! 🥳

And what a lovely update to celebrate. Lucky us fans.

Jab se iss story ka 1st part parha hai I've been trying to imagine in my head ... what Shiva must've been feeling leading upto that moment at the door .. and you wrote it .. and how beautifully so .. bass ab tjmhare kahaniyon mein hi ShiVi and khushiyaan dhoond lenge .. cuz canon mein toh milega nahin .. so please keep writing. You're our saviour.

Awwww Sweeetttuuuuu ❤️

Probably giving me more credit than I deserve but I'm glad you liked this.

Originally posted by: Magestic

It was heart warming update..

Your descriptions❤️

Loved it....

Thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Congrats ritu 🥳🤗 i m definetly gonna read it and will give lamba sa comment for sure 😌

Palluuuu 🤗❤️

Will be waiting for your review.

Originally posted by: mandira2

Aww this was lovely! ❤️

I 'awwed' at so many points during this story ☺️

Your words always get to me 🤗 It was written so well!

Lol loved how Shiva turned into a Devdas hehe! I can imagine him doing this in his ghum for Raavi 😆

Thank you for giving us that sweet moment with Shiva and Rishita! Their relationship was so beautiful during the first divorce track! I'm glad you decided to write about them!

When Shiva revolted against Suman in his own way, I was soooo happy! 😆

Raavi finally got her 'samaan' 😳

Thank you for this beautiful piece 🥱

I loved Rishita back in that track, really spot on she was!

That Shiva-Suman eye contact is the highlight of this story for me.

Glad you liked it! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Good! Because my chotu message kind of got my point across, haina? I'mma never love you any less. Bas! 😆

Bas nipat jaye jo socha hai tho ganga naha aaun main 🤡

Originally posted by: Seja1

Hey Ritu 🤗

If only this happened on the show but never mind, reading this gives me peace of mind.

Will there be another part?

Heeeyyyyy! 🤗

As of now? I don't have anything in the brain for the continuation of this...maybe in future? 😳

Kuch keh nhi sakte 😆