Raya SHORT STORY: Tvam, Mama Jevana Hetuna(NOW ON WATTPAD, note Pg.20) - Page 7

Thank you dear. I liked it more than much, Priya and the smell of Ram is the same bond that we share with the people we love.

I'm worried about Priya, she's so sick, but it's lucky and Ram will be there to take care of her.

Great story

Will keep you in my prayers…may you stay focused and May your exams go better than expected…Aameen ❤️🙏

I don't know if it's because it's the end of the day but at the end of the part, I was equally exhausted and drained as Priya. I could relate to her predicament whether to use the lift or the stairs and that relief when you finally sit and remove your shoes at the end of the day 😩

Have you read Twilight? Priya being affected by Ram's smell reminded me of Edward and Bella and he used to say 'you'll be the death of me' ☺️

Not happy that we have to wait for a week until the next part. Why not Sunday after your exams? Anyway, wish you all the very best 🤗

Priya is so vulnerable 😭

So glad she will have her man around.

You have portrayed the changes she is going through both physical and emotional so beautifully.

I especially love the way u hv written how she is adamant to accept the needs to visit the doctor yet her fatigue takes over and she rests her weight on Ram and relaxes. So beautiful!!

Waiting already for the next part ❤️

Originally posted by: Anonymmus

Hayyeeee.... you stole me heart now❤️ Priya's obsession with his scent... Ram's gentle words... I loved it, all of it...

All the best for you exams, I am sure you'll do well😳

Originally posted by: Monaparekh12

All the best for exam hope you will pass with flying colours

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Bonjour mon amie! Tu es vraiment une magicienne ! (You are truly a magician!)

Beautiful....just beautiful. Let's just say I'm going to remember this part of your story for a very long time 😉 ☺️

Can't wait to read more!

Good luck for the exams 👍🏼

I am glad i gave you a memory to keep in your head

Tha k you for the good wishes, dazzle.... need it the most😅🙃

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Shukriya...apni chutti par jaane ke pehle itna accha Tohfa dekar jaane ke liye😎

I loved this part so much❤️ - with our Drug & Druggie parts too ... Ohh! How soft Ram is with Priya here ....Gosh! I wish I had someone like that for myself😭

Their kisses culminating at the end of a scene make it so wholesome😳

And that Wallpaper Story - 'Tu Dil Mera Lut ke le gayi'🥳

All the Best for your Exams. Bas ab exams par dhyan dena hai. Idhar dikh mat jaana warna bhaga denge😲

Kar Har Maidan Fateh🤗

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

I don't know if it's because it's the end of the day but at the end of the part, I was equally exhausted and drained as Priya. I could relate to her predicament whether to use the lift or the stairs and that relief when you finally sit and remove your shoes at the end of the day 😩 sorry it got l9 ger than i expected it to be....😂😂😂

Have you read Twilight? Priya being affected by Ram's smell reminded me of Edward and Bella and he used to say 'you'll be the death of me' ☺️ seen and read... and i get what you mean😅

Not happy that we have to wait for a week until the next part. Why not Sunday after your exams? Anyway, wish you all the very best 🤗 because its my first pre-birthday dinner night tomorrow with my one aunt and then another one on monday, i guess😅

Thanks for tagging me and it was such a relief to read this after enduring that torture for more than two weeks now. This is something what all would have liked to see in the show but wishful thinking 😭 But thanks for writing this and making us relive the RaYa moment we would have loved to see in the show. I know I am late, so not sure if I can say all the best but I hope ur exams went well 👍🏼

P. S - can you please add an index to ur first post? It will make it handy for ur readers to navigate through the story especially when u add more parts to it.