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Posted: 3 years ago
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hey guys!! This is my first story on my favourite shivi I love them so much so thought to write on it I am not a writer so sorry for mistake I'll post introduction soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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introduction Shiva pandya ( main lead ) A hardworking man, who loved his store and family a lot, hate Raavi but just to say and always have a soft corner for raavi. Raavi narayan ( main lead ) cheerful, bubbly and innocence girl. Loved dev so much from childhood. hate Shiva but just to say. Dev pandya second son of Suman pandya, is in a secret relationship with rishita, complated his study and now work in store with his brothers. Rishita Seth Daughter of janardan Seth, Is in a secret relationship with Dev pandya, and love him so much Gautam pandya Eldest son of Suman pandya, Loves his family a lot, Owner of pandya store. Dhara pandya Wife of Gautam pandya, Loves her family a lot. And a Elder sister for Raavi and loved her as her sister. Suman pandya Head of pandya family, Mother of Shiva, Dev and krish, loves her family a lot. what will happen when Raavi comes to know that Dev loves rishita, what will she do?? stay tuned for upcoming first part will update soon
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Plot is pretty interesting..

Update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#4
chapter 1 - Their fight Raavi is stood in front of mirror, All set to go pandya niwas, to meet her love dev and annoy Shiva. she smile and was about to move out when Anita come and ask her, Anita : Raavi itni subhah subhah kaha ja rahi hai?? Raavi stopped and said, Raavi : Anita dii main pandya niwas ja rahi hoon... please maasi ko sambhal Lena... pleasee☹️ Anita : Achha thik hain...par jaldi aa jana. Raavi happily hug her and said, Anita : Thank you so much... Anita dii main jaldi ghar aa jaoongi.. byee with that raavi move towards pandya niwas... TBC...
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interested yaar please write more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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if you want to read the story further you can read this on Wattpad...
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Posted: 3 years ago
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if you want to read the story further then you can read on Wattpad
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Posted: 3 years ago
#8
1. their fight To be continued.......Shiva and krish sleeping peacefully on their cots in aangan... Dev was not at home for some work ... Dhara came and said, Dhara : Shiva, krish utho... Hey bhagvan!! Kab se utha rahi hoon... Utho jaldi...krish collage ke liye late ho jayega jaldi uth...Shiva tujhe bhi dukaan Jana Hain jaldi uth... But they still sleeping... Dhara : Tum dono uth rahe ho ya mein paani daluu... As Dhara said that they both get up and Shiva said,  Shiva : kya Bhabhi subhah subhah Gussa mat hoo... 😴 Dhara : kya gussa na hoo... Tum dono jaldi utho aur nahalo... Tab tak main nashta banati hoon... Shiva : Thik hain bhabhi... - Raavi enter pandya niwas and shout, Raavi : dhara diii !! Dhara was preparing breakfast, Raavi came and hugged her... Raavi : Dhara dii kesi hain aap?? Dhara : main to bilkul theek hu tu kesi hain?? Raavi : Dhara dii main to ekdum tip top hoon... Raavi said and tried to find dev,and ask dhara Raavi : Dhara di dev kaha hain?? Dhara : dev to kisi kaam se bahar Gaya hain... Thodi der main aa jayega. At that time Shiva came out from bathroom shirtless... And said, Shiva : lo aa gayi Maami ki behan ki beti... Dimag khane😏 Tujhe kya vo maami Ghar main rehne nahi deti...Jo har wakt yahi pe padi rehti hain... Raavi : Tujhe usse kya?? Dekh Shiva mujhse tameez se baat kar main teri hone wali bhabhi hoon. Shiva : aye chipkali!! Ye sapne dekhna to tu bhool hi Jaa kyuki Teri shaadi to main Dev se kabhi hone nahi dunga samjhi tu. Raavi : Dekh Shiva... Raavi was about to say something but Dhara interputeed... Dhara : Aree... Tum dono bas karoge... Tum dono ab bacche nai ho. Raavi : Dhara dii Maine kuch nai kaha Ye gadheda hii.. Shiva : aye tu naa.. Dhara : Shiva tu chup kar... Aur chalo nashta taiyar Hain nashta kar lo jaldi. Raavi : Thik hain Dhara dii.. Shiva : haa bas... Thoosne hi aati hain yaha pe... Woh maami tujhe khana Thoosne ke liye nahi deti kya jo har wakt yahi padi rehati hain... Raavi : Tujhe usse kya main jaha bhi khau... Aur vaise bhi tujhse kisi ne pucha nai hai to apna muh bandh rakh... Dhara dii ne mujhse kaha hain. Dhara : hey bhagwan ab bas karoge tum dono... Aur Shiva raavi yahi pe nashta karegi... Ab betho tum dono. Shiva and raavi both sat at dining table and have breakfast...when raavi's phone ring...call is from her friend sneha... Raavi pick the call... On call Sneha : Raavi tu kaha hain?? Raavi : sneha main to pandya niwas main hoon koi kaam hain kya?? Sneha : haa raavi... Bahot important kaam hain... Please tu jaldi garden pe aaja. Raavi : Achha thik hain main abhi aati hoon. Call ended _ Dhara : kya hua raavi kon tha?? Raavi : Dhara dii meri friend sneha ka phone tha... Woh mujhe Milne ke liye bula rahi hain to mujhe Jana honga.. main baad me aaungi. Dhara : Achha thik hain. Shiva was moving out for goes to dukaan when Raavi said, Raavi : Shiva tu dukaan ja raha haina? To mujhe bhi garden main chod de. Shiva : aye chipkali!! Main tujhe kahi nai chodunga... Tere paas do( two ) pair haina ussi se chal ke ja. Raavi : Shiva esa kya kar raha hain... Aage hi to hain... Dhara dii please aap kaho naa. Dhara : Shiva aage hi to hai chod de ja Shiva : Achha thik hain... Ab chal jaldi mujhe late ho raha hain.. Raavi : ha ha aa rahi hoon With that they both move out _ Shiva and raavi both sit in bike, Shiva started bike, Raavi : Shiva jaldi chala na. Shiva : aye chipkali main na thik hi speed se chla raha hoon agar itni jaldi hain to utar bike se... Khud chali Jaa. Raavi : kya Shiva tu bhi tu to gussa ho gaya... Tujhe jaise chalana hain chala. Shiva : Ab aai na line pe chipkali 😂 Raavi : 😏 _ They both reach garden, Shiva was about to go when Raavi stop him, And they both was shock to see... _ Hii guys, How was the first part, I know this is short but this is just like a promo so I kept is short. What do you think why Shiva and raavi shock?? Do comment. I hope you guys love it, Please give your honest review. Do vote and comments. Stay tuned for upcoming. Byee.
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Posted: 3 years ago
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2. truth is out Raavi and Shiva both were shoked to see... Dev hugging a girl. And the girl was none other then Rishita... Dev and Rishita stood in garden hugged each other....They both break the hug and look each other lovingly...Then Dev Kiss her forehead...💋 Raavi and Shiva are so much in shock... and more shock is raavi...she just couldn't believe her eyes 👀 what she saw?? Her world crashing down...her dream are shattered... She can't proceed anything... Her love was standing in front of her and kissed another girl... Who was the girl?? Is she his girlfriend ?? What if he loved her?? Tears rolling down from eyes... Shiva was hell shocked... His brother was standing in front of him like this...he saw raavi... Tears rolling down from her eyes... She looks broken💔 He can't see her like this... Shiva shaked raavi so that she came out from her world... Raavi looked at Shiva emotionally and said in cracked voice, Raavi : Shi...Shiva yeh..yeh Dev Kiske saat hain?? Ye ladki kon hain iske saat ?? Shiva tu hi kar raha hain na yeh sabkuch... Tune hi dev ko kaha hoga yeh prank karne ke liye haina ?? Ye... Yeh sabkuch jhoot haina?? Shiva bol na... Jhoot haina yeh?? Bol na ?? Bol...🥺 Shiva hold her and said, Shiva : Raavi tu pehle shaant hoja... Aur yeh sab Maine nahi Kiya hain... Aur mujhe nahi pata yeh ladki kon hai ... Tu shant hoja.. aur chal main tujhe Ghar chod deta hoon. Shiva said while dragging her, raavi stopped him and said, Raavi : Nahi main kahi nahi joungi...Main na abhi dev ko call karti hoon. Saying this Raavi dialled his number and called him, on the first call he cut the call... Raavi looked at him shockingly... She again called him... This time dev picked up the call... On call Dev : Hello raavi... Kya hua koi kaam hain kya ?? Raavi: Hello dev... Tum kaha ho ?? Dev : umm... Raavi actually main dukan ke kaam se bahar aaya hoon So main tumhe baad main call karta hoon okay?? Saying this dev cut the call Call ended Raavi ran from the garden... Shiva was also running behind her... Raavi is aimlessly walking on road...she don't where she go?? But she just walking expressionless... Shiva came to her and stopped her and said, Shiva : raavi kaha ja rahi hain tu?? Yaha road par chalna thik nahi hain... Tu ghar chal main tujhe drop kar deta hoon. Raavi looked at him and hugged him tightly... Shiva too hugged her back... Raavi was crying her heart out... And Shiva know this is important... He also console her...  Raavi feel safe in his arm... She hugged him more tightly and cried... Shiva rubbed her back... For the first time raavi see the concern for her... Inside she liked it...And stay forever in his arms like this. After sometime raavi feels better... And she break the hug and not looking at him... Shiva hold her hand and said, Shiva : chal tujhe Ghar chod deta hoon. Raavi nodded and sit in bike... She hold her tightly from back. After sometime they reach Raavi's house... Raavi get up from bike was about to go inside when Shiva said, Shiva : Dekh chipkali jyada ganga jamna mat bahana... Dev tujhe deserve hi nahi karta tha... Aur ab ye sab baate bhool ja... Aur ab apni battisi ( smile ) dikha. Raavi smiled at Shiva's world slightly and move inside. Shiva also move towards pandya house... _ Raavi goes into her room and locked the room and jumped into bed...cried her heart out .... Raavi : kyu ?? Kyu ?? Kyu Kiya tumne Aisa dev ?? Maine tumhe itna pyaar kiya aur tumne Mere saath aisa kiya agar nahi pyaar karta to bol deta... Yun mere feelings ki majak banane ki kya jarurat thi?? Bas ek bar mujhe bata deta ki tu mujhse pyaar nahi karta... Tumhe to pata tha ki main tumhe kitna pasand karti hoon....bachpan se pure somnath main cheek cheek ke sab ko batati rahi ki main Dev se pyaar karti hoon....ussise shadi karungi...par dev ne kya kiya?? Mujhe batana bhi jaruri nahi samjha?? Kyu Kiya tumne Aisa dev ?? Kyu?? Raavi cried so much. In the afternoon, maami called raavi for lunch she don't came so she goes her room, Pruffula knok the door and said, Mammi: raavi... Raavi beta darvaja khol, raavi... Hearing maami's voise raavi get up see herself in mirror... Her eyes are red due to continues crying... She wash her face so mammi don't doubt her. Raavi washes her face and opens the door... Maami came in and asked, Mammi : raavi itni der kaise lag gai darvaja khol ne me?? Raavi : wo maasi main apna project kar rahi thi. Maami don't look convinced and asked, Maami : yeh Teri Aakhe itni sujh gayi hain?? Aur ye chehra laal kyu ho Gaya hain ??? Tu roi hain kya ?? Raavi : nai maasi esi koi baat nahi hain woh Aakh main kachra chala gaya tha na isi liye. Maami : Achha thik hain ab chal aur khana khale. Raavi : ji maasi. Raavi came downstairs and ate her lunch half heartedly. _ Hi guys How was the update??
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Posted: 3 years ago
#10
Nice update. pls share link of this for whattpad

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