After 400: need of the hour: the Shuffle

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Predictability is one big drawback in this show.

Pretty much repeat narrative & nothing to look forward to for audience.


GauRa always mahaan. Prempankhi. Dhara always saves the day.

Deshit always ‘smart’ can not be called out ever. Can’t be gray. Can’t be called selfish.

ShiVi always Mu -fights -separation.

Nothing to look forward then. Right? Agar yahi hona hai toh- what’s left to watch?


Creatives need to Shuffle up.

Show ShiVi as prempankhi- each other’s support system. Bring store & family together.

A hint of it in contest & education track did bring trp up by total of 3 points at both slots.


Show Deshit being pointed out for their selfishness. Prolonged monologues, whitewashing storylines don’t connect. Rishita losing at contest- evil entitled losing worked for numbers as much as good winning. Continue that. Build up on that. No need to justify by showing them good for a minute & acting opposite rest of the tracks- and expect audience to feel their goodness. Doesn’t come through.


Show GauRa’s superficial mahanta in trouble. This couple managed business bad, is partial to the core & misuses blind trust of younger ones to their own accord. Be it giving property to dev or using up all savings or splurging shiva’s win money.

Let them face MU & May be separation- that will be new storyline in otherwise mundane narrative.

Let GauRa be called out by Shiva & Krish for their partiality.


A separation in family - Where Shiva & Raavi get out will also work. A sub track, a spin off.

Else this same old Dhara the mahaanest best , Gombi the bsbb, is not going to create any magic. Zero.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Too add to it:

‘Papa Ka sapna’

Sounds all good, connects … but it has term limits.

Gautam and Dhara barely made the store survive.
that too after Shiva left his studies and add the sweat & full dedication to the store.
On their own they did nothing great over 10+ years to take the store further.

No progress, no savings, no basic security (like insurance/ funds/ connections)

As they say:

If Ambani - be Mukesh not Anil.

Papa Ka Sapna, stays it’s worth when you make it your sapna too and build up.

when your family’s everything depends on it , progress is not only required, it is must!

Else it is not business- it is just a hobby.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I agree with you 1000%. There has to be major realignment for all of the couples. Gaura's pseudo act of trying to keep the family together has not worked at all. They can't keep assuming that they are right and continue to poke their nose in every matter, have them step back and reassess where they went wrong. Deshit have been atrocious, spoiled, and straight up selfish and they need to be called out. Having them come to the realization where they went wrong would be a lot more interesting rather than trying to whitewash them. Shivi, the crown jewel of PS, have been undercut in order to develop the other people. Shivi need to work together as a unit and be instrumental in getting PS back on track because Gaura for the past 10 years haven't been able to do much.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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GauRa inspite of clearing the debt 10 years ago to get the possession of PS were still able to manage a savings of 17L in 10 years which was blown away in Dhara’s IVF. There has been no planning by the two of them and barely making ends meet. I can’t believe in 10 years they have not tried to better their business and double their profits,

As for DevTa, I am in a way ok with them going their separate ways for their future, but if they had done it on their own, it would have been commendable. But they want the best of both the worlds. Pandya parivar pampering them on one side and Janu family on the other side showering them with money and riches. Everybody has been their pillar of support starting from their marriage and
for Dev since funding his education, especially MBA. Both have been selfish and self centered and always think about themselves. Dev had the audacity to give money to Gautam which is not his own. How did he expect Gautam to accept the money? Any self respecting would definitely deny it.

As for ShiVi, the most hardworking selfless couple who always think about others but not valued by any of the family members. Instead both are ridiculed and taken for granted. Their hardwork always purposely made to go waste indicating them to be failures.

The disparity this series shows between couples is glaringly appalling and the justification to show them all in a good light is laughable,

Dhara and Gautam, don’t think they through what can be done to keep the family together. Their fixes are all temporary which they try to remedy by putting a bandage every time.
We need a new story line and tracks, this repetition is not even going to take them in Top 10. They will be forever lingering between Top 11 to Top 20 shows 😕

Edited by mpks1 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is the point...they show the same thing on different tracks ..there should be a poster saying that dhara is the only sorted human in that house..because baaki sab are her minions..

But any one sensible will call her actions questionable..

Blind partiality in the name of love, is not mahaantha..who is she to decide how and when to partition the property..she is a person married into that house..its first darshans and sumans property..then comes the pandya brothers property..then comes their wife's..if anyone has the right , its only suman who can say such a stuff as give the property to dev..still it's partiality on the other brothers..but understandable that it's his mother and mother's can do anything to get their kids back..sometimes be selfish and blind too..

Dhara no matter how much she claims to be their mother, dnt get the power over their money rights..that shows authority and power over them..thats not selflessness..thats control..

Dev and rishitha, offering father in-laws money(indirectly blood money for the fire) is detestable..and rather than helping them out physicially with labour like shiva or gombi is doing, his anger on pandyas for not taking the money just shows how self centered he is as a person..no amnt of depression ki dhamki for an arrogant selfish and idiotic woman like rishitha can whitewash it...and rishitha changing overnight to this worrying naari with just her in-laws sufferings as tension when just a day back she was fuming for dhara to give her empty box of jewellery. It's so disconnected and stupid that I can't help but laugh at this nonsense..sympathising with her showing fake concern is impossible now..she has gone too far to make it relatable..

Rather than trying whitewash her..show them seeing them truth and facing the consequence..

show gaura realising they r stooping too low for rishitha and dev and they dnt deserve this..the Pandya family should let them go..gaura should see it was shivi who stood by them regardless of any circumstances.. be it when they were going through divorce proceeding..divorced....regardless of the fact whether they were living in their own hell or heaven after remarrg now...they never were selfish or self-centered to ignore their family when they were in need..

Rishitha and dev should soon see janardhan and motibens truth and should be ashamed of themselves.. they dnt deserve to be back to pandyahouse like that..show karma..show them struggling to live alone now that they have to leave janardhans house and can't go back to Pandyahouse either...after some hard times they should be taken back by the pandyas after a good apology by dev and rishtha to each one of them...show some redemption please for every characters..too much evil every so called good characters do in this show, but none of them are given enough redemption track..shivas redemption for the torture he put ravi through was much awaited and it was given as a mere sorry ..that makes shiva still undeserving of ravi atleast until he shows character growth and guts to stand up for her in front of his most favourite people..thats his own family...especially suman..him being a silent spectator and later trying to cover up sumans dirty mouth by saying she is innocent from heart doesn't show character growth..

Though shivas love for her is evident by his actions like looming around her, trying to stay close to her..understandingher worry...he needs to show his protective side for her too..

Show shiva stand by her..protect her from the harm this society is trying to do to her..calling her panauthi..making this bubbly lovely girl doubt her own existence for being the cause of everyone's atrocities .I want Shiva to be a real hero for ravi this time and save her from this..she has gone through so much already..

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