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Part 14
Terrific update…brilliantly written
beautiful song that depicts Maan's feelings for Geet
so Maan's recalls their first encounter
Maan's thoughts well portrayed
agree with Maan that Geet has changed a bit
great that he will take care of her
liked that he knows that they belong together and will not let her go
glad that Geet had known when she was fainting that Maan would take care of her
well she is uncomfortable seeing him there beside her
Gosh Maan questioned Geet if she likes him
her response was expected
upset that she says he is criminal
of cos Maan corrected her
oh Maan read her diary
at least he apologised
Geet's anger was justified
good that Maan explained
pleased that Geet opened up to Maan
well she wants to know if he is good or bad
Maan's response was reasonable
loved that Maan wants to train Geet
not surprised that she refused
however he knows how to make her agree
he will report against her
he did have a valid point regarding his team
he was right that she should get rid of her hears
finally she relented
loved that she trusted him
Maan confesses that he likes her
he made her understand why he does not follow the law
nice that Geet made progress
update soon
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