Meet os : The conversation

So here is the os you all just asked for... since there were some ideas in my head ..so I just penned it in one go...its meety,s and meetwa,s convo...I wanted to write one with family also... Where meety would be sunaofying the whole pagal ahlawats ...but that will need some more dialogues and time to write ...so I just wrote this one ...the convo..between meety and meetwa ...do read it and let me know how is it...#lovelove❤️

So its the day meety solved the case and arrests abhay rana and also shanty for abusing isha mentally and physically ..Hawa singh also joined abhay rana in the jail..🤣

MA again feels guilty for his behaviour and the way he again misunderstood meety ..🤷‍♀️

Whole family decided to throw a party the next day to celebrate raj,s return and to lighten their mood ..

Babita was still in shock and is not able to believe that his bhaiji can do something like that ...she apologised to isha for forcing her to marry shanty and asked her to file a divorce ..

Meety hasn't returned from her duty yet ..so MA was waiting for her ....to apologize for his rude and insensitive behaviour.

Meetwa: khaa reh gyi meet ...mai kitni buri tarah pesh aaya usse ...mujhe usse maafi mangni hai ...kitna bura lga hoga use ...police station hi jaake pick up kr leta hun ...maafi v maang lunga aur use khi ghumane leke chla jaunga ...

Meetwa reached police station and was just about to park the car when he saw meety leaving on her bike ..so he followed her ...but she took some other road ..it was not the way to their house ...

Meetwa : yeh meet khaa jaa rhi hai ...humara ghar toh iss taraf hai ...🤨

She parked her bike near an apartment ... a man was waiting for her ...she greeted that man and entered that apartment with him..

Meetwa : yeh meet kr kya rhi hai ...iss ghar ke andr kyu jaa rhi hai ..and yeh aadmi kaun hai...🧐

He parked his car near her bike and went in to see what's going on...

Meety : jee toh kal se mai yhaan reh skti hu na ...

Man : jee bilkul madam...yeh ghar bilkul main road ke saamne hai aur paani bijli sb 24 hrs rehta hai koi problem nai hai jee ...bss rent 3 mahine advance ka dena padega

Meety : toh phir chabhi mai kal aapse le lungi and rent parso lene aa jaiyega ....

Meetwa couldn't believe what he heard ...is Meety going to live in this house ...but how can she ..she is his wife and she should live with him at his house ...

The man asked her to check the room once more if she wants to ...till then he will wait outside near the teastall...meety was just checking on the rooms ...when she turned she saw meetwa standing at the door with a confused look..

Meety : tu yhaan ke kr rha hai ...😶

Meetwa : yhi toh mai puchna chahta hun meet..yeh sb kya hai ..tum yhaan kya kr rhi ho...😕

Meety : (with tears brimming in her eye ) : kuchh na bss apne liye ghar dekh rhi thi ... Transfer ke liye application toh daal diya hai par ibb itni jaldi toh mnne transfer toh na mill skta na toh jab tak transfer hoga tab tak mai yhi rhungi

Meetwa : aur humara ghar ...tum humare ghar me nai rhogi ?

Meety : kaunsa ghar ...tune hi toh uss din mnne bola tha na ki mai ibb uss ghar me nai reh skti ...toh ib achanak se woh mera ghar kaise ho gya

Meetwa (with pain in his voice ): toh itne din kyu reh rhi thi ...

Meety : mai bss jab tak papaji ko bekasur saabit na kr du ...bss tab tak ke liye uss ghar me reh rhi thi..ibb papaji be kasur saabit ho gye hai toh ibb mere whaan rukne ka koi matlb nai ...

Meetwa : sach me koi matlb nai ...mai kaun hu meet ...mai tumhara pati hun na ...pyaar krte hai na hum ek dusre se...tum meri biwi ho meet ...

Meety(turning back since she can't show her tears to him ) : pyaar....khaa tha yeh pyaar jab tu mere khilaaf khda tha ...khaa tha yeh pyaar jab mai raat bhar bina khaye bina soe ...papaji ko bekasoor saabit krne ke liye din raat mehnat krke ghar waps aati thi ..woh v bss yeh dekhne ki mummy ji theek hai ki nai...tune mnne ghar me ghusne tak na diya tha... Mai teri biwi hunbss jab tu chahe ..tu mnne pyaar krne lgta hai bss jab tu chahe ...kya yhi hai tera pyaar tera wishwass ..teri chinta..

Meetwa : meet 🥺

meety : meet nai ..SI meet Hooda bula mnne waise hi jaise itne dino se bula rha tha ...

Meetwa : meet yeh kya keh rhi ho...

Meety : sahi keh rhi hun Dauduraam ...nai nai ..Dauduraam nai...mr. Meet Ahlawat ...sai keh rhi hun mai ...

Meetwa: aisa nai hai meet ...mai bss dar gya tha ...mujhe pta nai kya ho gya tha meet...I am sorry...

Meety : whi toh baat hai..tanne kabhi kuchh pta hi na rehta ...har baar galti krta hai..aur har baar sorry bolke aage badh jaata hai.. Har baar tu mnne galat smjh leta hai ..mere khilaaf khda ho jaata hai..aur jab sachhai saamne aaa jaati hai tu mnne sorry bol deta hai...kya bss sorry bol dene se sb sai ho jaata hai mr. Meet Ahlawat ...

Meetwa (feeling disgusted on himself) ...he can't believe he hurted her so much ...that she couldn't trust him now ..

Meetwa : meet tum mera bharosa kro..mai abse kabhi v aisa nai karunga ..mai humesha tumhare saath rahunga ..humesha...chahe kuchh v ho jae .... I promise meet ...i promise mai kabhi v ab aisa kuchh nai karunga jo tumhe hurt kre ...

Meety : bharosaaa...yeh shabd tnne pta hai ..

mai tere pe khud se v zyada bharosa krti thi...mai.sochti thi ki tnne v mere pe utna hi bharosa hai...pr na ..tera bharosa yu ek chutki me hwa ho jata hai...mai tnne bolti rehti hu ki Dauduraam.mere pe bharosa rkh...lekin nai tu toh mnne apna dushman smjh rha tha na .....toh ibb kya achanak se tera bharosa waps aa gya mere pe...

Meetwa : meet mujhe tumpe humesha se bharosa tha ...mai bss uss samay dar gya tha...mai dad ko khona nai chahta tha...mai dar gya tha ki mere dad jail ke slakho ke peeche ...

Meety : aur mere pappa ka kya...jab tnne na pta tha ki tere hi ghar se kisine mere pappa ko maara hai .tu mere saath tha....mere pappa ko apna pappa maanke unhe nyay dilana chahta tha unke khuni ko sza dilana chahta tha par..jaise hi tnne pta chla...ki tera parivar hi usme shamil.hai...tu mnne sb kuchh bhul jane ko bol rha tha ...kaise bhul jaati mai mere pappa ko jisne maara ..use sza dilana mai kaise bhul jaati...tere saath mnne v pura yakeen tha ki pappa ji khooni na hai...phir v tune mera saath na diya .....

Meetwa : meet mai kaise smjhaun tumhe ...tum smjh kyu nai rhi ..mai uss samay kuchh idea lga nai paa rha tha ki chl kya rha hai ...mai khud shock me tha meet ..smjho na meet pleaase

Meety : mai hi kyu smjhu sbko...mai thak chuki hun sbko smjh smjh ke...sbki feelings ki chinta krke..(.she could no longer control her tears and fell on ground crying)

Meetwa : meet meet...smbhalo khud ko..he came near her and also fell on his knees crying

Meety : smbhal hi toh rhi hun...jabse pappa gye hai...khudko v sambhala hai maine aur saath me apne pariwar ko v ...sbki chinta ki..sbke baare me socha... Daant khayi taane sune....par badle me bss thora sa pyaar chaha care chahi ... Apna pan chaha..

Meetwa : 🥺😢meet...

meety : (wiping her tears away....) Tanne pta hai..jab tune mere te khaa tha ki tanne v mere te pyar hai..toh manne aisa lga tha ..ki ibb koi toh aisa hai jo mnne bahut saara pyaar krta hai..koi toh hai jo meri care krta hai ..jo mera sath kade na chhodega....pehli baar jab tune mere te shanty ke liye ladai ki toh mnne lga ki tu bss ...sachhai na jaanta isliye tu mere pe wishwas na kr rha...par ibb jab dusri baar tu mere khilaf hua na ...toh badi mushkil se maine apne aap ne sambhala ...pura ghar mnne apna dushman smjh rha tha aur tu v ...akeli pad gyi thi mai ..bilkul akeli ...lekin maine khud ko kamzor na hone diya aur apne aap ne sambhal ke rkha Aur ib v mai apne aap ne smbhal lungi...akhir jab akele hi padna hai mnne ..toh isse achha mai humesha ke liye hi akele rhu....

Meetwa : meet tum.mujhe aise chhodke nai jaa skti ...mai kaise rahunga tumhare bina...mai...tum v toh mujhse pyaar krti ho na meet ...

Meety : par tnne toh mera pyaar plan lg rha tha na...dhoka lg rha tha mera pyaar tnne ...toh ibb whi smjh le ...mere dono pappa ne nayay mil gya ...mera plan pura hua ...ibb manne koi farak na padta ..mai apne raaste tu apne raaste ...aur achha hi haina ...teri mom ...kehti hi haina ki mai kisi rishte ne nibhane layak na hu...maine pure parivaar ko humeshaa takleef hi di hai...aur tune v toh mnne uss din yhi kha tha. ...toh achha hi hai na ki mai uss ghar te aur teri zindagi te dur chli jaun...

Meetwa couldn't believe his ears ...he wasn't able to believe that his meet is ready to leave him.even though it hurts her..he knows she loves him... He knows even she cant live without him.

Meetwa : hn meet ..schme ..ab tum apne raaste mai apne raaste ...(he pulled her towards him.)..kaho meet meri ankhon me ankhen daal ke kho...kya tumhe koi farak nai padta..

She pulled herself away from.him...

Meetwa : mera jawab mil gya meet ...tum v mere bina nai reh skti tumhe v farak padta hai... Kya meri iss galti ki itni badi sza dogi meet ...khudko v aur mujhe v ...

Meety : mnne jaane de Dauduraam.....mnne akela chhod de ...

With that she took her bike keys ...and rode of ...leaving meetwa with teary eyes...

Meetwa : I promise meet ..aur iss baar tumse nai ...khud se ...ki mai tumhe kabhi v akela nai chhodunga ...yeh.galti mai kabhi bhi nai dohraunga ...iss baar bilkul v nai...mai tumhe itna pyaar dunga itna pyaar dunga ki tumhe jin dard aur jin jakhmo se tumhe guzarna pada hai na ...woh sb mai.apne pyaar se mita dunga ....

..I love you meet ...I love you ...tumhara Dauduraam tumhe had se zyada pyaar krke dikhayega ....tumse v zyada tumhe pyaar karega ....mai tumhe kahi nai jaane dunga meri meet ...khi v nai...

....owk...so thats it ...I want meetwa to do some struggle inorder to get Meety,s love and trust back....

awwsem why don't makers use these dialogues

Wow i actually tears in my eyes reading this. Thank you so much for writing this.

This gives the much needed satisfaction, I don’t know if show will go in this direction, I have sort of lost hope but I will assume that this is what will happen in the show too 🤗

Dul ko sukoon aur thandak milgaya after reading tis❤️… Thanku so much dear👍🏼…. Its a lovely piece of writing n so beautifully xpressed abt Meetys emotions…I sooo wish this happens xactly in the show … 😳..

Want to read more of your work… Pls do keep writing 🤗

Great job! Please write more.

Originally posted by: Coolmitocondria

So here is the os you all just asked for... since there were some ideas in my head ..so I just penned it in one go...its meety,s and meetwa,s convo...I wanted to write one with family also... Where meety would be sunaofying the whole pagal ahlawats ...but that will need some more dialogues and time to write ...so I just wrote this one ...the convo..between meety and meetwa ...do read it and let me know how is it...#lovelove❤️

So its the day meety solved the case and arrests abhay rana and also shanty for abusing isha mentally and physically ..Hawa singh also joined abhay rana in the jail..🤣

MA again feels guilty for his behaviour and the way he again misunderstood meety ..🤷‍♀️

Whole family decided to throw a party the next day to celebrate raj,s return and to lighten their mood ..

Babita was still in shock and is not able to believe that his bhaiji can do something like that ...she apologised to isha for forcing her to marry shanty and asked her to file a divorce ..

Meety hasn't returned from her duty yet ..so MA was waiting for her ....to apologize for his rude and insensitive behaviour.

Meetwa: khaa reh gyi meet ...mai kitni buri tarah pesh aaya usse ...mujhe usse maafi mangni hai ...kitna bura lga hoga use ...police station hi jaake pick up kr leta hun ...maafi v maang lunga aur use khi ghumane leke chla jaunga ...

Meetwa reached police station and was just about to park the car when he saw meety leaving on her bike ..so he followed her ...but she took some other road ..it was not the way to their house ...

Meetwa : yeh meet khaa jaa rhi hai ...humara ghar toh iss taraf hai ...🤨

She parked her bike near an apartment ... a man was waiting for her ...she greeted that man and entered that apartment with him..

Meetwa : yeh meet kr kya rhi hai ...iss ghar ke andr kyu jaa rhi hai ..and yeh aadmi kaun hai...🧐

He parked his car near her bike and went in to see what's going on...

Meety : jee toh kal se mai yhaan reh skti hu na ...

Man : jee bilkul madam...yeh ghar bilkul main road ke saamne hai aur paani bijli sb 24 hrs rehta hai koi problem nai hai jee ...bss rent 3 mahine advance ka dena padega

Meety : toh phir chabhi mai kal aapse le lungi and rent parso lene aa jaiyega ....

Meetwa couldn't believe what he heard ...is Meety going to live in this house ...but how can she ..she is his wife and she should live with him at his house ...

The man asked her to check the room once more if she wants to ...till then he will wait outside near the teastall...meety was just checking on the rooms ...when she turned she saw meetwa standing at the door with a confused look..

Meety : tu yhaan ke kr rha hai ...😶

Meetwa : yhi toh mai puchna chahta hun meet..yeh sb kya hai ..tum yhaan kya kr rhi ho...😕

Meety : (with tears brimming in her eye ) : kuchh na bss apne liye ghar dekh rhi thi ... Transfer ke liye application toh daal diya hai par ibb itni jaldi toh mnne transfer toh na mill skta na toh jab tak transfer hoga tab tak mai yhi rhungi

Meetwa : aur humara ghar ...tum humare ghar me nai rhogi ?

Meety : kaunsa ghar ...tune hi toh uss din mnne bola tha na ki mai ibb uss ghar me nai reh skti ...toh ib achanak se woh mera ghar kaise ho gya

Meetwa (with pain in his voice ): toh itne din kyu reh rhi thi ...

Meety : mai bss jab tak papaji ko bekasur saabit na kr du ...bss tab tak ke liye uss ghar me reh rhi thi..ibb papaji be kasur saabit ho gye hai toh ibb mere whaan rukne ka koi matlb nai ...

Meetwa : sach me koi matlb nai ...mai kaun hu meet ...mai tumhara pati hun na ...pyaar krte hai na hum ek dusre se...tum meri biwi ho meet ...

Meety(turning back since she can't show her tears to him ) : pyaar....khaa tha yeh pyaar jab tu mere khilaaf khda tha ...khaa tha yeh pyaar jab mai raat bhar bina khaye bina soe ...papaji ko bekasoor saabit krne ke liye din raat mehnat krke ghar waps aati thi ..woh v bss yeh dekhne ki mummy ji theek hai ki nai...tune mnne ghar me ghusne tak na diya tha... Mai teri biwi hunbss jab tu chahe ..tu mnne pyaar krne lgta hai bss jab tu chahe ...kya yhi hai tera pyaar tera wishwass ..teri chinta..

Meetwa : meet 🥺

meety : meet nai ..SI meet Hooda bula mnne waise hi jaise itne dino se bula rha tha ...

Meetwa : meet yeh kya keh rhi ho...

Meety : sahi keh rhi hun Dauduraam ...nai nai ..Dauduraam nai...mr. Meet Ahlawat ...sai keh rhi hun mai ...

Meetwa: aisa nai hai meet ...mai bss dar gya tha ...mujhe pta nai kya ho gya tha meet...I am sorry...

Meety : whi toh baat hai..tanne kabhi kuchh pta hi na rehta ...har baar galti krta hai..aur har baar sorry bolke aage badh jaata hai.. Har baar tu mnne galat smjh leta hai ..mere khilaaf khda ho jaata hai..aur jab sachhai saamne aaa jaati hai tu mnne sorry bol deta hai...kya bss sorry bol dene se sb sai ho jaata hai mr. Meet Ahlawat ...

Meetwa (feeling disgusted on himself) ...he can't believe he hurted her so much ...that she couldn't trust him now ..

Meetwa : meet tum mera bharosa kro..mai abse kabhi v aisa nai karunga ..mai humesha tumhare saath rahunga ..humesha...chahe kuchh v ho jae .... I promise meet ...i promise mai kabhi v ab aisa kuchh nai karunga jo tumhe hurt kre ...

Meety : bharosaaa...yeh shabd tnne pta hai ..

mai tere pe khud se v zyada bharosa krti thi...mai.sochti thi ki tnne v mere pe utna hi bharosa hai...pr na ..tera bharosa yu ek chutki me hwa ho jata hai...mai tnne bolti rehti hu ki Dauduraam.mere pe bharosa rkh...lekin nai tu toh mnne apna dushman smjh rha tha na .....toh ibb kya achanak se tera bharosa waps aa gya mere pe...

Meetwa : meet mujhe tumpe humesha se bharosa tha ...mai bss uss samay dar gya tha...mai dad ko khona nai chahta tha...mai dar gya tha ki mere dad jail ke slakho ke peeche ...

Meety : aur mere pappa ka kya...jab tnne na pta tha ki tere hi ghar se kisine mere pappa ko maara hai .tu mere saath tha....mere pappa ko apna pappa maanke unhe nyay dilana chahta tha unke khuni ko sza dilana chahta tha par..jaise hi tnne pta chla...ki tera parivar hi usme shamil.hai...tu mnne sb kuchh bhul jane ko bol rha tha ...kaise bhul jaati mai mere pappa ko jisne maara ..use sza dilana mai kaise bhul jaati...tere saath mnne v pura yakeen tha ki pappa ji khooni na hai...phir v tune mera saath na diya .....

Meetwa : meet mai kaise smjhaun tumhe ...tum smjh kyu nai rhi ..mai uss samay kuchh idea lga nai paa rha tha ki chl kya rha hai ...mai khud shock me tha meet ..smjho na meet pleaase

Meety : mai hi kyu smjhu sbko...mai thak chuki hun sbko smjh smjh ke...sbki feelings ki chinta krke..(.she could no longer control her tears and fell on ground crying)

Meetwa : meet meet...smbhalo khud ko..he came near her and also fell on his knees crying

Meety : smbhal hi toh rhi hun...jabse pappa gye hai...khudko v sambhala hai maine aur saath me apne pariwar ko v ...sbki chinta ki..sbke baare me socha... Daant khayi taane sune....par badle me bss thora sa pyaar chaha care chahi ... Apna pan chaha..

Meetwa : 🥺😢meet...

meety : (wiping her tears away....) Tanne pta hai..jab tune mere te khaa tha ki tanne v mere te pyar hai..toh manne aisa lga tha ..ki ibb koi toh aisa hai jo mnne bahut saara pyaar krta hai..koi toh hai jo meri care krta hai ..jo mera sath kade na chhodega....pehli baar jab tune mere te shanty ke liye ladai ki toh mnne lga ki tu bss ...sachhai na jaanta isliye tu mere pe wishwas na kr rha...par ibb jab dusri baar tu mere khilaf hua na ...toh badi mushkil se maine apne aap ne sambhala ...pura ghar mnne apna dushman smjh rha tha aur tu v ...akeli pad gyi thi mai ..bilkul akeli ...lekin maine khud ko kamzor na hone diya aur apne aap ne sambhal ke rkha Aur ib v mai apne aap ne smbhal lungi...akhir jab akele hi padna hai mnne ..toh isse achha mai humesha ke liye hi akele rhu....

Meetwa : meet tum.mujhe aise chhodke nai jaa skti ...mai kaise rahunga tumhare bina...mai...tum v toh mujhse pyaar krti ho na meet ...

Meety : par tnne toh mera pyaar plan lg rha tha na...dhoka lg rha tha mera pyaar tnne ...toh ibb whi smjh le ...mere dono pappa ne nayay mil gya ...mera plan pura hua ...ibb manne koi farak na padta ..mai apne raaste tu apne raaste ...aur achha hi haina ...teri mom ...kehti hi haina ki mai kisi rishte ne nibhane layak na hu...maine pure parivaar ko humeshaa takleef hi di hai...aur tune v toh mnne uss din yhi kha tha. ...toh achha hi hai na ki mai uss ghar te aur teri zindagi te dur chli jaun...

Meetwa couldn't believe his ears ...he wasn't able to believe that his meet is ready to leave him.even though it hurts her..he knows she loves him... He knows even she cant live without him.

Meetwa : hn meet ..schme ..ab tum apne raaste mai apne raaste ...(he pulled her towards him.)..kaho meet meri ankhon me ankhen daal ke kho...kya tumhe koi farak nai padta..

She pulled herself away from.him...

Meetwa : mera jawab mil gya meet ...tum v mere bina nai reh skti tumhe v farak padta hai... Kya meri iss galti ki itni badi sza dogi meet ...khudko v aur mujhe v ...

Meety : mnne jaane de Dauduraam.....mnne akela chhod de ...

With that she took her bike keys ...and rode of ...leaving meetwa with teary eyes...

Meetwa : I promise meet ..aur iss baar tumse nai ...khud se ...ki mai tumhe kabhi v akela nai chhodunga ...yeh.galti mai kabhi bhi nai dohraunga ...iss baar bilkul v nai...mai tumhe itna pyaar dunga itna pyaar dunga ki tumhe jin dard aur jin jakhmo se tumhe guzarna pada hai na ...woh sb mai.apne pyaar se mita dunga ....

..I love you meet ...I love you ...tumhara Dauduraam tumhe had se zyada pyaar krke dikhayega ....tumse v zyada tumhe pyaar karega ....mai tumhe kahi nai jaane dunga meri meet ...khi v nai...

....owk...so thats it ...I want meetwa to do some struggle inorder to get Meety,s love and trust back....

🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Oh my god.... I cant believe the writers are back and how 👏

So beautifully imagined and expressed dear... heart touching and perfect.

Now am happy that I stuck around in IF waiting for new writeups. As much as I feel Meety will still forgive ( not to forget there is Raj Papa too to do emotional blackmail as usual ) I really really wish this happens. If it does not. I will take this as the closure. I am not even interested in how Meetwa will win her back because he does not even know why she( and we) fell in love with him in the first place.

Its ironical na... Raj brought them together and its because of him they will fall apart too.

Next please write something like Babita coming to convince her... also Raj papa coming. And how she refuses.... please please please. Then it will be complete closure.

Originally posted by: Anjureads

Next please write something like Babita coming to convince her... also Raj papa coming. And how she refuses.... please please please. Then it will be complete closure.

Thank you so much mito🤗. Dil ko thodi si thandak mili.❤️ I really loved it. Keep writing yaar.

And yes I will add this to the list

This is beautiful..kaash.. let him work to get her love back. Wonderful