I wrote a long ass reply to you on this and the server went into hibernation. 😔
Agree with you and it is not just this episode but also the previous one in mandir.
And it is not just V who is being dicey, it's Sai too.
I understand that they had a certain comfort between them because of living together for so long. This baby talk is already an explored topic in mimo and at that time V had mentioned to Sai that he will not force her to do something she doesn't wish to. So it's understood somewhere.
But as usual, the writers have amnesia and they have forgotten this.
Also the pace is increased rapidly. It was mentioned in today's episode that it has been few days since marriage.
With all this in mind, I would attribute this to bad dialogue writing and bad direction and failure to show intimacy.
See, these two are passionate individuals, have been in love, so what is wrong if they show them indulging in biological needs at the first go? Many were of the view that it's good that Sai stopped him. Fine. I am not saying she shouldn't have. But there are levels of intimacy ... Why not explore them? Don't go all the way... A kiss wouldn't hurt.
The dialogues were too direct in the episode, fully implying the act but staying in realms of ITV... Ofcourse they cannot say the word or show the act but it was properly hinted. Fair enough. But when a couple has not even engaged in a kiss, making them talk about having a baby sounds highly odd.
V you mentioned already, but I felt they did the same with Sai. When he comes near her and talks to her, she says I am happy. Why can't she she say that's not of my worries? The same way, in the mandir scene too, Sai is anxious the whole time but suddenly happily realises that V wanted a daughter and they have a sweet sa moment.
The moment is not wrong, the timing is abrupt.
How come Sai is so casual about the whole idea??? That should be the last thing on her mind. It would have been better if he had completed it with, I still want the same but want a daughter like you. That would have been more romantic and sweet.
Same with V in this episode. Another bad example of writing is he says "agar tum Dr ban gai" and not "jab tum Dr ban gai" in a convo earlier. A single word but makes hell lot of difference.😭
Another example is morning after the SR, how come V didn't know where Sai was and how come he came strolling down so casually and not looking for her? They have made them look like a couple few years into marriage and not days 👎🏼
I understand that there are limitations to what they can show or want to show but the omission of showing physical intimacy is making all this look weird.
Where is the shyness, eagerness and excitement to indulge in this act for the first time? Where is her hesitation? Why is he not jumping at it every opportune moment? Sorry to sound crass but why is he so cool about all of it?
Physical intimacy is as much a part of marriage as everything else. But the failure to show that is making them look so naive and chaste!!!
In real life, it takes time for a couple to understand the mechanics of it all and in ITV they get pregnant the first time
Ideologically the talk of having a baby vs career is what is needed. But this sloppy writing is making V questionable again. I would still not go to the point of calling him manipulative to sacrifice her career but this nonsense pace is definitely putting him in bad light 👎🏼
It's like khaya Piya kuch nahi glass toda bara Anna. 🤪
Edited by Moor278 - 4 years ago